i might wanna do a remake of this series or end it and maybe start another series. Mainly because I don't like the direction of it.
When making it, I was just going off right off the fly, seeing how it would work and honestly, I'm not really a fan of it.
I feel like I made Adam too much of a gary stu. Canonically, he doesn't even have a Speed semblance but I added because his actual semblance felt very limited.
Another reason is that, I don't really know why the hell I made Salem give Adam grimm power despite not knowing who tf he is nor I didn't have any game plan with it besides putting him against another monstered powered person, who I definitely liked.
Not only that but it felt liked I really made people in-story really bend over backwards for Adam or suck up to him. And I feel like I made him to careless. What I mean by is he's like...
"I'm gonna joined Cinder thing so my people won't get hurt."
or
"I'm gonna take hits for people because truly, I am a good guy."
While in this universe, I feel like Adam would do something like that. I kept getting this weird feeling that I'm making him too good since I was making other characters like Ruby, Weiss, the Happy Hunteress like him.
anyways, I just wanna say thank you for reading this fanfic. Seriously, I didn't think people would actually like this (I've made a lot of fanon fanfics before and they understandably didn't get any love.(