OK here's the first chapter, please be strict when you tell me what to fix, although complements are GOOD things, I like complements, they make me happy.....hehe......
Title: Hermione's True Love
Pairing: Harry/Hermione
Disclaimer: I do not own anything Harry Potter, I only own my feeble attempt at a plot....
Chapter 1: Understood Feelings
Hermione cramed her last textbook into her trunk and closed the lid. She stood back and looked around her room to make sure that she didn't forget anything. When she was sure that she didn't, she sat at her desk to write a letter to her two best friends, Harry and Ron, to tell them that she would arrive at The Burrow around 11:00 tomorrow morning.
"There, that's fineshed," she said as she gave Hedwig her owl treats to thank her for waiting, as Harry had sent her very early in the morning and it was now 10:00, and she sent her on her way. She watched her fly off into the horizon, with the letter and Harry's late birthday present (another book about famouse Quidditch teams).
Hermione continued to stare out the window after Hedwig had gone. She was thinking about her upcoming year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. It was her 7th and last year, and she was Head Girl. The badge had come with her supplies list.
She had been very happy that day, but not just because she was the new Head Girl. No, it was because Harry had written her that very same day to tell her that he was the new Head Boy. That meant that they both shared the Head Boy/Girl common room. Hermione had loved the idea of her own common roomthat was shared with only Harry, because she had loved him for the longest time.
Ever since she first laid eyes on him on the Hogwarts Express, she had had feelings for him. From his ebony black hair to his deep, sparkling emerald green eyes, she had loved every inch of him. Those feelings had developed alot more during their 4th year, when Harry was in the Triwizard tournament, and she hadspent all that time helping him. They had gotten a lot closer during the few weeks that Ron had decided to be a stupid git.
Her feelings only grew stronger in their 5th year when Harry had agreed with her and they started the Dumbledor's Army meetings right under Umbridg's nose. In there 6th year, Harry had even started to show more feelings towards her. He started to hang out with her more and even asked her to go to Hogsmead a few times with him.
She sighed and walked to her nightstand, where there was a picture of her, Harry, and Ron. She whispered under her breath, "I've loved you for so long, but when will I ever tell you?" She wiped a small tear off her cheek when she heard "Hermione, Diner's ready." "OK mom, I'm coming." And she turned and walked out of her room, her thoughts of Harry clouding her mind.
Back at The Burrow, Harry was sitting in Ron's room, petting Hedwig and clutching a letter from Hermione, think only of her...
Ok tell me what you think, even if you think it's crap, which i hope you don't.