I know i know the chaps are too short!!! reasons? a) few reviews... b) busy me c) seems like the best place to stop anyway....
hehe!! basically i just finished the first part of the story.... its ends in the part where sydney's father dies.... (had to kill him, sorry...) i was beginning to draft out plans on the second part...(basically deals with Draco finding hermione, and hermione finding Draco....) but... oooh!!!!! before that, got a couple more things up here to complicate the matter.... promise you'll never suspect what's going to happen....but you can guess if you want..... just try it i dare ya..... hehehe::grins maliciously:: ok where was i... oh... i found that if i jump ahead to the second part that will leave many matters unexplained!!! so had to do those mini parts.... trust me... they look short but real hard to write...if you have noticed i love to keep you guys hanging.... never wants to explain things clearly.... that's because i want you guys to think about it....
whew! that was long!!! this is going to be a short chappie again.... but promise you guys that next chap.... it will be longer.... so guys.... bear with me.......
Everlast
Chap11
Rain
Disclaimer: nope!! J.K. does...
Rain was drenching her, but it didn't matter.
Her car broke down, she doesn't have any apparating liscense yet...
That's why she was walking, out there in the rain.
But, it doesn't feel so bad, to her...
Rain seems to clean everything, removes the dirt and refreshes everything in the world...
Renews everything...
She looked back, a car was coming down the lonely stretch of road. Its head lights blaring in the cold rain.
She stopped walking and waited for the car to slow down beside her, she looked as the windows rolled down.
"Hi! I'm Deryk! Is that your car out there?" the black-haired man spoke cheerfully.
Hermione smiled, something in this guy was eerily familiar, it wasn't the fact that he looks exactly like her best friend... there was something else...
She nodded, and walked nearer to the car. Deryk pushed the car door open and she got in, wincing at the squishing sound her clothes made.
The boy beside her laughed, "Don't worry about that. Its really raining cats and dogs outside, where are you staying?"
Hermione peered through the wipers and saw that there were no houses on both sides, "Do you know a place where I can stay? That is until this rain stops."
Don't get her wrong, she loves the rain, but it isn't healthy to sleep outside with it pouring like hell.
"I know exactly the place, I know they won't mind."
He revved up the engine and drove through the falling curtains of water. At last they stopped in front of a huge manor.
Hermione, just looking at the magnificent house, felt her insides perform a sudden somersualt.
The house loomed over them as Dreyk pulled in to the roofed driveway, Hermione stepped out as soon as the car stopped.
A large letterm "M" was etched artfully on both doors. She watched uncertainly as Deryk jogged up the stairs and opened the huge doors, motioning her to come in.
Harry was looking down at the entrance over the banister as he watched his son open the doors. Deryk stopped and began motioning for someone outside to go inside.
His brows furrowed as he waited for his son's guest to enter the Malfoy Manor.
A drenched girl entered the threshold. She wrung her long brown hair dry with a towel Deryk handed her. Her head was bent down, so naturally he couldn't see her face.
He heard her mutter a "Thank you".
Harry was about to go down and greet them. when the girl suddenly looked up.
Green eyes looked with brown ones and Harry did a double take.
The girl waved a friendly hi over to Harry and winked at him conspicously.
"Harry. Emergency meeting at the Ministry, they need me." Harry looked over his shoulder and saw Draco disapparate just in time.
Hermione looked bewildered as she watched the famous Harry Potter look over his shoulder.
He was certainly shocked.
But that doesn't give him the excuse not to run down the stairs and hug his ol' best friend.
review! review! review!
facts: 1. Sydney is the reincarnation of Hermione 2. the guy that hermione visited in chap 10 was Sydney's dad 3. all of the memeories that Sydney had were replaced by Hermione's memory as she grew older. So by the time she graduated she was literally leaving in two person's memory
gets?
hehe!! basically i just finished the first part of the story.... its ends in the part where sydney's father dies.... (had to kill him, sorry...) i was beginning to draft out plans on the second part...(basically deals with Draco finding hermione, and hermione finding Draco....) but... oooh!!!!! before that, got a couple more things up here to complicate the matter.... promise you'll never suspect what's going to happen....but you can guess if you want..... just try it i dare ya..... hehehe::grins maliciously:: ok where was i... oh... i found that if i jump ahead to the second part that will leave many matters unexplained!!! so had to do those mini parts.... trust me... they look short but real hard to write...if you have noticed i love to keep you guys hanging.... never wants to explain things clearly.... that's because i want you guys to think about it....
whew! that was long!!! this is going to be a short chappie again.... but promise you guys that next chap.... it will be longer.... so guys.... bear with me.......
Everlast
Chap11
Rain
Disclaimer: nope!! J.K. does...
Rain was drenching her, but it didn't matter.
Her car broke down, she doesn't have any apparating liscense yet...
That's why she was walking, out there in the rain.
But, it doesn't feel so bad, to her...
Rain seems to clean everything, removes the dirt and refreshes everything in the world...
Renews everything...
She looked back, a car was coming down the lonely stretch of road. Its head lights blaring in the cold rain.
She stopped walking and waited for the car to slow down beside her, she looked as the windows rolled down.
"Hi! I'm Deryk! Is that your car out there?" the black-haired man spoke cheerfully.
Hermione smiled, something in this guy was eerily familiar, it wasn't the fact that he looks exactly like her best friend... there was something else...
She nodded, and walked nearer to the car. Deryk pushed the car door open and she got in, wincing at the squishing sound her clothes made.
The boy beside her laughed, "Don't worry about that. Its really raining cats and dogs outside, where are you staying?"
Hermione peered through the wipers and saw that there were no houses on both sides, "Do you know a place where I can stay? That is until this rain stops."
Don't get her wrong, she loves the rain, but it isn't healthy to sleep outside with it pouring like hell.
"I know exactly the place, I know they won't mind."
He revved up the engine and drove through the falling curtains of water. At last they stopped in front of a huge manor.
Hermione, just looking at the magnificent house, felt her insides perform a sudden somersualt.
The house loomed over them as Dreyk pulled in to the roofed driveway, Hermione stepped out as soon as the car stopped.
A large letterm "M" was etched artfully on both doors. She watched uncertainly as Deryk jogged up the stairs and opened the huge doors, motioning her to come in.
Harry was looking down at the entrance over the banister as he watched his son open the doors. Deryk stopped and began motioning for someone outside to go inside.
His brows furrowed as he waited for his son's guest to enter the Malfoy Manor.
A drenched girl entered the threshold. She wrung her long brown hair dry with a towel Deryk handed her. Her head was bent down, so naturally he couldn't see her face.
He heard her mutter a "Thank you".
Harry was about to go down and greet them. when the girl suddenly looked up.
Green eyes looked with brown ones and Harry did a double take.
The girl waved a friendly hi over to Harry and winked at him conspicously.
"Harry. Emergency meeting at the Ministry, they need me." Harry looked over his shoulder and saw Draco disapparate just in time.
Hermione looked bewildered as she watched the famous Harry Potter look over his shoulder.
He was certainly shocked.
But that doesn't give him the excuse not to run down the stairs and hug his ol' best friend.
review! review! review!
facts: 1. Sydney is the reincarnation of Hermione 2. the guy that hermione visited in chap 10 was Sydney's dad 3. all of the memeories that Sydney had were replaced by Hermione's memory as she grew older. So by the time she graduated she was literally leaving in two person's memory
gets?