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The three shadows floated towards pan,…………..

" how did we get here?" bra asked see through tears ran down her face.

A forth shadow came out from the darkness,

" I brought you here…………….." the shadow spoke in a raspy voice….

The shadow snapped its fingers and all five people disappeared.

They reappeared in a valley that should made everyone visible, showing an old man that that brought them there.

" who are you and why are we here?" pan snapped as she walked over to the old man……

the man backed away as she advanced towards him, he put his hand out motioning her to stop, she obeyed and he spoke.

" I am the guardian of time…I am the controller of where you go from here." The old man spoke.

" then where do we go………..?" bra whimpered as gotten hugged her for comfort.

" well that's the problem …..you are believed to be dead…..but its not your time yet." He simply stated.

While all four teens were completely confused.

" you weren't supposed to die yet……" he sighed at the teens stupidity.

"oh but then how did we die." Gotten asked.

" well it was fate and its also fate for me to bring you back " the old man shrugged.

" but how is it fate for us to through all this trouble just to be brought back to life?" pan asked confused.

The man began to smirk.

" who said it was your fate?"

the man waved his hand and a image showed pan being held by trunks when she fell out of the car and then it disappeared.

" you see once he found you all dead he realized his life was all wrong and he belonged with you children."

" you went through all this trouble just for that………." Pan was getting angry.

" well…..yeah but it was fates call not mine……..you are also all saiyan right…. Or you were part magic."

Everyone nodded.

"well then you have enough power that you can survive this sort of death it was only a few bullet wounds."

" so now your telling us we aren't really dead?" bra asked confused.

" yep now get ready." The man whispered.

" for what?" pan shouted as the world around them began to spin.

" to go home and to live again."

The world around them was spinning so fast the that it felt like a tornado,

The were drifting in the middle of the storming spinning.

Then they dropped, the air rushed past them so fast they couldn't fly pan saw a night sky rush past her then she stopped.

She was floating above the place where she supposedly died.

Everything was still there, trunks still held her the car was still there along with all the people…….

' its like time stopped.' Pan thought as some force slowly pulled her down to her body.

She could feel herself re enter her body.

Pan slowly registered what was happening, she could feel trunks holding her but she could also feel the pain.

pan screamed and scared the hell out of trunks and the other people, she jumped up in pain but fell back into trunkses strong arms.

She soon heard the cries of her friends from inside the car……they were all living again.

Okay it may be confusing and corny but at least they're all living am I right or am I right I hope all you people like it so review or flame.