Ch2
What the? Raven wondred jumping out of the way, Who's this?
Here attacker was a man with an odd looking mask.
"Who are you?" Raven asked.
"Some one you need, "the man(give you three guesses who!)said.
Raven then let her powers out.
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Everyone's alarm things went off and Robin realized that Slade was back.
"Titans," he said, "the park now!"
They got to the park and saw Raven figthing Slade.
"Thats her," Cyborg whispered, "Raven."
"Titans go!" Robin yelled.
They helped Raven fight Slade.
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When Slade was driven back, Cyborg said, "Nice to see you again."
Raven just looked at him.
"These are my friends," Cyborg said, Robin, StarFire, and Beast Boy."
"Super," Raven said starting to walk off.
"Where are you going?" Robin asked, "We need to ask you some things."
"Me first," StarFire squealed, "Where are you from? What is your favorite color? Where are you staying? And will you be my friend?"(I jacked that part from the episode TERRA)
Raven looked at her and said, "Hell. I don't have a favorite color. I am staying in the park, and no, I won't be your friend. Trust me, you don't want me too."
StarFire's face fell.
"Oh," she said softly.
"That was rude," Beast Boy yelled at Raven," She was just trying to be nice!"
"Too bad," Raven shrugged, "She shouldn't waste her breath."
Raven then left.
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"That as strange," Robin commented, "she seemed troubled."
"Yeah," Cyborg aggreed, "Wonder whats wrong with her."
They went back to the tower
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"I'll have her soon," Slade smiled watching Raven medatate on the bench, "Soon."
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At her job the next day, Raven was getting frustrated.
The people she tried to help were so stupid!
Then the shops windows blew up and Raven muttered, "This is just peachy."
She tried to repar the windows but she saw the man from yesterday.
She followed him when he started running, and they came to a salt mine.(I like salt)
This is odd, she thought, where did he go?
Then she was thrown against the ground and her world went black.
End of Chapter
In responce to my reviewers
MCLBLUE
I loved it. That was a great first chapter, but why won't you finish evil it's such a good story. Anyways I think it's cool how u made cyborg the first to meet raven. And how the Titans don't want Slade to get her.
Sorry. I have most of Evil written down on paper and I couldn't find my paper. I just found it and added more though.
TalonTheSky-Liner
Interesting beginning, but try making it a little longer with more details. Anyway, it's still a good beginning, so take your time on updating.
Like I said, all you have to do is e-mail me if you want help.
THanks. I might take you up on your offer.
ARE you going to update the story THE PLAN BEHIND THE MASK
That is a good story.
ANd currently my favorite of favorites
Aninnymous
Please put in more descriptive writing. Is this Cy/Rae? I am a BB/Rae fan but I can stand Cy/Rae. Please continue. Make the chapters slightly longer.
Sorry I write what comes to me. WIll be longer later.
It might be Cy/Rae. havent diceded yet.
I love both BB/Rae and Cy/Rae so I do them all.
