dantheman7777 – I know the chapters are short - sorry
ODD 14 - I'm glad you liked this chapter, and I'm glad you like my stories so much! : ) love you too! ; )
anime chicka 901 – you're welcome! As a reader I always feel so special when someone replies to me so I thought it would be the same with my readers! I'm glad someone appreciates my replies though! I was starting to think it might have been a waste of time and space! : ) I'm glad you love my story though! : )
YumiUlrich – I'm glad that you think it was a good place to stop. I thought so but I didn't know how my readers would take it. I really like A Troubled Mind too, and I'm glad that you really like my story so much! Thank you! : )
Julia Poprocks – YAY! Another review from Julia Poprocks! : ) cliff hanger – lol. I've been debating myself about how I want Ulrich to respond to sudden shock. Haven't quite decided what the bad part is either but other then those to little things I know how the rest of my story is going to be for the most part. YAY! Another hug! – hugs Julia Poprocks back - I love hugs too! – tries huggin self - it just doesn't feel the same though . . . hopefully more people will give me hugs too! : ) I'm glad that my writing can make you happy! That's what I try to do! I try to make my readers happy! Well most of the time . . . BUH BUH BUH!!!! lol! Suspense! Can't wait to hear more from you! You can email me too if you want to at: ! yay for email!!!! : )
Sarah( ) – I love romantic stuff too! I so agree with you about Yumi and Ulrich. Romantic stuff between just seems natural – whether is when you're reading it or writing it, and YES THEY ARE perfect for each other! If you read and/ or write fanfic and there are romantic scenes between Yumi and Ulrich, but then you try to go back to watching the show and there is no romance at all, you just want to fly out to france (after you learn how to speak a little French) and just yell at them for not having them together yet! URGG! They are so perfect for each other and they don't even realize it!!!!!!!!! I don't think I will ever be able to write a story where they aren't together at all in it! That would just drive me insane!!!!! I'm so glad that you like my story though! Hope you enjoy this chapter!!!!
Blood Vampire – sorry! I know! So suspenseful but that's me! I am a very suspenseful person and like stopping at the worst possible place! : ) don't worry though! I'll try to update more frequently so I won't leave you hanging for too long!
yumi – wow you were pretty much the only one who noticed that. I agree that their relationship is a lot more delicate then I've been portraying, but in order to get the plot moving along (and so people don't come after me with torches and pitchforks) I made Yumi kind of blurt it out accidentally. I'm sorry for not staying pretty much exact to the characters personality, and I hope you can enjoy my story still even though I've sped things up with them. I wanted to get to the good scenes that have . . . oops I almost gave something away! : )
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'Is this real? Did Yumi actually tell me that? Does she really love me? I don't know if I can trust my ears. I've waited to long though, I can't wait any longer. I need to tell her how I feel about her. . .'
"I'm sorry Ulrich, but I can't stay. I need to get back home. Sorry for what I said, and sorry for leaving so abruptly. I won't allow myself to stay any longer though and I'll give you time to think. I think you need it. Call me when you have an answer." Yumi said as she left Ulrich's dorm. She went to leave, but something had stopped her. It was Ulrich's hand. Ulrich had grabbed Yumi's arm and Yumi turned around. "What is it Ulrich?"
"Yumi . . ." Ulrich started.
"Yes Ulrich?" Yumi asked blushing. She wasn't expecting to stay there any longer. Ulrich just couldn't seem to find the right words to say though. Ulrich tried to tell Yumi hold he felt about her, but no words could come out of his mouth. He didn't know what he was going to do to tell her, but when he realized their closeness. He knew he wouldn't have to say anything at all. Ulrich reached his hand behind Yumi's head, gently held her head and pulled her closer. Before either of them knew it they were standing there locked in a deep and passionate kiss.
As they stood there, nothing was said because they could both tell that they loved each other. Both of them knew that, and they thought that they would be able to stay like that together forever . . . sadly enough though, some moments of happiness just have to end. . .
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Ok sry this chapter is another short one – really tired but I told ODD 14 that I would update today, so there it is, even if it isn't too long. Just remember though; if I get a lot of reviews – I'm more likely to update sooner! ; )