I know I have already done the same outline as this story, but
some people (Mabs) thought it sucked like crap. So this is going to be better, I hope.
Anyways back at the show must go on song.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Satine came into Christian's garret hoping to find him and she was successful.
"Satine.." he said walking to her.
"After you left the duke came to me, he offered me everything, everything I ever
wanted, he has one condition, I must never see you again." she lied.
"What are you saying what about last night??" he asked
"You knew I was Christian.." she said.
"That's not the truth, tell me the truth!!" he yelled grabbing Satine's waist as
she tried to get away. Tears were rushing down both of there faces Satine's more the
Christian's though.
"The truth is I am the hindu courtesan and I choose the maharaja." she lied once more.
"Satine.." Christian said firmly, "I know your a wonderful actress, but I can see
through you." he said trying to control his temper.
"The truth is I'm d-dying. And the duke said he'd k-kill y-you.." she said between sobs.
"Satine, he can't scare us.." he said holding her close.
"What are we going to do Christian, no matter what, I'm going to die.." she said in
his ear.
"We'll go to where the air is much cleaner, I'll get you the best help." he whispered.
"But where are we going to find cleaner air?" she asked.
"My sister and my father, he's making her take Geography. She'll help us," he said,
"Go get your things Satine meet me back here in an hour." he siad kissing her on
the cheak.
Satine was halfway out the door, when she turned around to look at her soul mate.
"Oh by the way, I love you.." she said walking out the door.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Meanwhile~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Zidler!" the duke hissed, "Where is she??"
"She'll be here shortly, don't worry dear duke."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back with Satine.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Satine grabbed a hand bag stuffed jewellery init, and grabbed another bad to
put her day cloths and corsets in.
Marie walked in, "Where are you going in such a hurry?" she asked eyeing
Satine.
"I'm leaving the Moulin Rouge forever!! I don't care If I'm dying! I LOVE CHRISTIAN!!" she
yelled at her stepmother.
"Satine, you have to stay!! Who knows what the duke will do if you leave, for all
we know he's got men in every country!! Doing this your risking all of our lives!!" she said
dumping out her handbag with the jewelery bag. "HARRRROLDDD!!!!!!!!" she screamed.
Zidler came jogging in.
"What's wrong goosling?" he asked standing in the doorway.
"She's planning on leaving again.." said Marie giving a great sigh.
"No I'm not!" snapped Satine, "I'm looking for my hindi wedding gown.
I'm planning on marrying the duke.." she lied.
"That's a girl!" shouted Zidler.
"Not!" Satine said grabbing her bags and rushing out the door, with Marie and Zidler hot
on her trail, along with Nini, up ahead ready to stop Satine.
She turned around. "Harold! When I first came here you said that If I wasn't comfortable
with my job then I could quit! Well I QUIT!" she yelled turning around. "Goodbye Everyone!".
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back at Christians.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Oh Satine, one hour was too long, I can't stand another minute without you.." he said
kissing her on the neck.
"So we're going to London? I've always wanted to go back there maybe even see my
parents." she said.
"Oh that's right you haven't seen them since you were 19 right?" he asked.
"That's correct, but don't tell them I was a show girl, they think I'm a
doctor..." she said.
"Oh, really?? The daddy's little girl Satine Javone, lied to her parents?" Christian teased.
"Just go along with it.. Oh! We got to go Christian the train will be arriving any minute
now!" she said rushing him down the stairs.
"Wait, I've got to return my key." he said handing it to the woman.
"After we're out of the door, It will be a new life for the both of us.." he said.
END OF CHAPTER!
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what do you think better or worse then the last one??
I don't own moulin rouge.
I like skittles.
Review please!!!
some people (Mabs) thought it sucked like crap. So this is going to be better, I hope.
Anyways back at the show must go on song.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Satine came into Christian's garret hoping to find him and she was successful.
"Satine.." he said walking to her.
"After you left the duke came to me, he offered me everything, everything I ever
wanted, he has one condition, I must never see you again." she lied.
"What are you saying what about last night??" he asked
"You knew I was Christian.." she said.
"That's not the truth, tell me the truth!!" he yelled grabbing Satine's waist as
she tried to get away. Tears were rushing down both of there faces Satine's more the
Christian's though.
"The truth is I am the hindu courtesan and I choose the maharaja." she lied once more.
"Satine.." Christian said firmly, "I know your a wonderful actress, but I can see
through you." he said trying to control his temper.
"The truth is I'm d-dying. And the duke said he'd k-kill y-you.." she said between sobs.
"Satine, he can't scare us.." he said holding her close.
"What are we going to do Christian, no matter what, I'm going to die.." she said in
his ear.
"We'll go to where the air is much cleaner, I'll get you the best help." he whispered.
"But where are we going to find cleaner air?" she asked.
"My sister and my father, he's making her take Geography. She'll help us," he said,
"Go get your things Satine meet me back here in an hour." he siad kissing her on
the cheak.
Satine was halfway out the door, when she turned around to look at her soul mate.
"Oh by the way, I love you.." she said walking out the door.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Meanwhile~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Zidler!" the duke hissed, "Where is she??"
"She'll be here shortly, don't worry dear duke."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back with Satine.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Satine grabbed a hand bag stuffed jewellery init, and grabbed another bad to
put her day cloths and corsets in.
Marie walked in, "Where are you going in such a hurry?" she asked eyeing
Satine.
"I'm leaving the Moulin Rouge forever!! I don't care If I'm dying! I LOVE CHRISTIAN!!" she
yelled at her stepmother.
"Satine, you have to stay!! Who knows what the duke will do if you leave, for all
we know he's got men in every country!! Doing this your risking all of our lives!!" she said
dumping out her handbag with the jewelery bag. "HARRRROLDDD!!!!!!!!" she screamed.
Zidler came jogging in.
"What's wrong goosling?" he asked standing in the doorway.
"She's planning on leaving again.." said Marie giving a great sigh.
"No I'm not!" snapped Satine, "I'm looking for my hindi wedding gown.
I'm planning on marrying the duke.." she lied.
"That's a girl!" shouted Zidler.
"Not!" Satine said grabbing her bags and rushing out the door, with Marie and Zidler hot
on her trail, along with Nini, up ahead ready to stop Satine.
She turned around. "Harold! When I first came here you said that If I wasn't comfortable
with my job then I could quit! Well I QUIT!" she yelled turning around. "Goodbye Everyone!".
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back at Christians.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Oh Satine, one hour was too long, I can't stand another minute without you.." he said
kissing her on the neck.
"So we're going to London? I've always wanted to go back there maybe even see my
parents." she said.
"Oh that's right you haven't seen them since you were 19 right?" he asked.
"That's correct, but don't tell them I was a show girl, they think I'm a
doctor..." she said.
"Oh, really?? The daddy's little girl Satine Javone, lied to her parents?" Christian teased.
"Just go along with it.. Oh! We got to go Christian the train will be arriving any minute
now!" she said rushing him down the stairs.
"Wait, I've got to return my key." he said handing it to the woman.
"After we're out of the door, It will be a new life for the both of us.." he said.
END OF CHAPTER!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
what do you think better or worse then the last one??
I don't own moulin rouge.
I like skittles.
Review please!!!