Mystica: I liked chap 2 better than 1, 1 is two emotional (to me at least). I made some grammar mistakes on chap 2 plz excuse me. Oh ya its a cabin- tree-home thingy-ma-bobber. Oh ya thank you for the reviews! Sorry for the late update, I was expecting to post this on sooner.
- Sound/Noise (will look something like this Chhhhh)
Disclaimer- I don't own any Sonic characters or the game/series, I only own this fic and some made up characters (Tanya & Baku currently).
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Perfection's Shadow Chapter-3 G.U.N. Detected
"The names only temporary until he wakes up and if he remembers his own name." Said Tanya now wearing her normal clothes and her quills up in a blanket bun. She set a plate of bacon and eggs with garlic bread in front of Baku.
"Fine, but can I call him Pervy?" asked Baku drinking his coffee and reading the newspaper.
"No you can't." replied Tanya heading to her room with mashed bacon and eggs with garlic bread made into a smoothie to feed Nero (Tanya decided that since they have a guest she would sleep on the recliner in her room).
"Hey the Eggman guy's arrested and is going to either get executed or sent to jail for life." Baku said. Baku and Tanya didn't really care what went on in the world, infact they didn't care about the space colony incident that just happened just yesterday (well maybe Tanya cared a bit or more than a bit...fine she cared!).
"Ahhh..." said Tanya feeling Nero's head. Tanya spent most of her hours with the sickly hedgehog who had been shaking violently ever since yesterday.
With Sonic
"Taking loot from Eggman's base...I think I'll go find myself some thing." Rouge then headed for the entrance.
"I got great new parts for my machinery!" Tails dropped a box full of metal and went to work in making an attachment to Rouge's car because it was the only working vehicle that wasn't hit or damaged (they could have used Eggman's other machinery but somehow they knew he would escape and they didn't want to take too much things with them).
"Sonic why don't you get something?" Amy walked over to Tail's damaged Cyclone/Tornado only to find Sonic asleep. "Poor Sonic he must be tired out because of that Biolizard."
"I never knew Eggman kept so much gold." [(] Rouge came out holding a box full of gold bars. "Eggman must make golden machines!"
"Hey Rouge I'm only making an extra 3 seats attachment to your car ok? Someone will have to sit with you in the front." Tails said tinkering with the wheel to see if it wasn't flat or if it had any defects.
"Ummm...sure." approved Rouge gazing at the gold.
Tails looked to Knuckles who was beside the Tornado looking bored at the sky, his eyelids dropping every now and then.
"Hey Knuckles! Mind sitting with Rouge at the front?" Tails called.
"Huh...whatever fine... no I don't mind..." Knuckles looked at Tails drowsily.
Rouge and Knuckles mentally slapped themselves. "WHAT NO WAY!"
Amy heard the conversation. "I call two seats at the back!" said Amy saving a seat for Sonic.
"I'll save one for myself." Tails grinned. Ever since they saw Knuckles and Rouges sleeping beside each other on the A.R.K. they didn't let the teasing down so easy.
< In the cabin
Tanya was changing Nero's bandages to avoid infections when Baku came into the room.
"His right arm healed." Baku said leaning on the doorframe eating a Crunchy bar. "So are his legs, surprisingly enough."
"What how?" Tanya asked tilting her head and her eyes shown confusion.
"Dunno. I'm gonna take my run, be back later." Baku was out of site from Tanya's bedroom door. "Oh ya, I just heard this name 'Ayrez', interested in calling him that for the time being until we learn his real name?"
"Everyone is changing their names these days..." said Tanya removing the casts not looking at Baku.
"I know."
"Sure... Nero sounds stupid anyways." Tanya got a piece of paper from her pocket and handed it to Baku. "Groceries."
"K. Bye" with that Baku disappeared.
"Ummggghhh"
Tanya looked to the bed. Ayrez was groaning and shuffling around the bed for the first time in two days. He usually just shook but now he moved.
"No fever. His recovery is going very quickly." Tanya removed her hand from his head.
His eyes were covered with bandages and his face expression was relaxed but a bit sorrowful.
Tanya noticed he was kind of handsome and blushed. She shook her head.
"I'm gonna take a dip in the lake. I'll be back in half an hour."
In the lake in front of the tree house
Tanya dove underwater, her wings expanded and helped her gain more speed. Unlike her brother she had to jump up in the surface and take a gulp of air then dove back in. She swam to a waterfall and fell from it, but halfway down flew out of it. Since her wings were soggy so she could only stay in air for a short amount of time. So she landed on the edge of the riverbank and scanned the area for predators. Luckily there was none. She beat her wings against in the air, making a little gust of wind around her. In a matter of moments she was dry.
"Men lets take it back to the base." A man with a military suit ordered 5 other men like him. Faces hidden and voices like a hollow soul.
Tanya quickly leaped onto a tree above her and eavesdropped on their conversation.
They carried away what seemed to be a large red arm with black under it. Well most of it seemed burn. "Scour the area and find more pieces of this monstrosity!" the men followed and ran with in the forest.
'These men aren't from around here.' Tanya turned her telescopic vision on, the black center in her pupil grew larger. 'A plane...'
"G.U.N.!" Tanya spat on that name, they took the thing in the world she loved most. With that she took of to the cabin.
As soon as Tanya got back to the cabin she checked on Ayrez only to find him still asleep but on his right side facing the window to the lake.
"Good."
She ran down the hallway, into the kitchen and tapped her foot twice behind a counter. It swung open and revealed a tiny computer, which carefully sprung out. Tanya typed in a password that seemed like half a long sentence. Then placed her index finger on the screen and let her eyes be scanned by a red light. Tanya rubbed her eyes, she never got used to that and she didn't like it. She was online in matter of seconds. "Command F16." Tanya called out clearly.
"Neutralizing Estate Heat." A female computer voice said.
"Command F12." Tanya called out her second command.
"Cloaking Territory."
"E1." Tanya said her final command, hopefully the last command to say in the day.
"Shutting down." With that the computer was once again hidden in the small space behind the counter and everything looked as it always was, normal and tidy.
"Baku! BAKU!" Tanya was speaking into a communicator watch that was on her left wrist, Baku and Tanya had this because they would never know if they needed to communicate with each other. "HEY PERVERT!"
Chhhhhhhhh
"I heard you the first time!" Baku's voice was very fuzzy and unclear.
"I don't think communication will last longer but I activated command F16 and F12. I'll explain later! Come back safe bye!" Tanya spoke quickly knowing Baku's quick reflexes would able him to hear what she said like she was in slow-mo.
"5:30...I took longer that I should have." She walked into her room. Looking at Ayrez he seemed more peaceful than before. Its like he was just sleeping with no pain from his arm or skull or burns. Its like he fully recovered.
"Who's there?"
Tanya gasped.
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Mystica: Sorry if I didn't exactly look it over properly to add more ideas in! I just really wanted to get this chapter over with! Review please!
- Sound/Noise (will look something like this Chhhhh)
Disclaimer- I don't own any Sonic characters or the game/series, I only own this fic and some made up characters (Tanya & Baku currently).
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Perfection's Shadow Chapter-3 G.U.N. Detected
"The names only temporary until he wakes up and if he remembers his own name." Said Tanya now wearing her normal clothes and her quills up in a blanket bun. She set a plate of bacon and eggs with garlic bread in front of Baku.
"Fine, but can I call him Pervy?" asked Baku drinking his coffee and reading the newspaper.
"No you can't." replied Tanya heading to her room with mashed bacon and eggs with garlic bread made into a smoothie to feed Nero (Tanya decided that since they have a guest she would sleep on the recliner in her room).
"Hey the Eggman guy's arrested and is going to either get executed or sent to jail for life." Baku said. Baku and Tanya didn't really care what went on in the world, infact they didn't care about the space colony incident that just happened just yesterday (well maybe Tanya cared a bit or more than a bit...fine she cared!).
"Ahhh..." said Tanya feeling Nero's head. Tanya spent most of her hours with the sickly hedgehog who had been shaking violently ever since yesterday.
With Sonic
"Taking loot from Eggman's base...I think I'll go find myself some thing." Rouge then headed for the entrance.
"I got great new parts for my machinery!" Tails dropped a box full of metal and went to work in making an attachment to Rouge's car because it was the only working vehicle that wasn't hit or damaged (they could have used Eggman's other machinery but somehow they knew he would escape and they didn't want to take too much things with them).
"Sonic why don't you get something?" Amy walked over to Tail's damaged Cyclone/Tornado only to find Sonic asleep. "Poor Sonic he must be tired out because of that Biolizard."
"I never knew Eggman kept so much gold." [(] Rouge came out holding a box full of gold bars. "Eggman must make golden machines!"
"Hey Rouge I'm only making an extra 3 seats attachment to your car ok? Someone will have to sit with you in the front." Tails said tinkering with the wheel to see if it wasn't flat or if it had any defects.
"Ummm...sure." approved Rouge gazing at the gold.
Tails looked to Knuckles who was beside the Tornado looking bored at the sky, his eyelids dropping every now and then.
"Hey Knuckles! Mind sitting with Rouge at the front?" Tails called.
"Huh...whatever fine... no I don't mind..." Knuckles looked at Tails drowsily.
Rouge and Knuckles mentally slapped themselves. "WHAT NO WAY!"
Amy heard the conversation. "I call two seats at the back!" said Amy saving a seat for Sonic.
"I'll save one for myself." Tails grinned. Ever since they saw Knuckles and Rouges sleeping beside each other on the A.R.K. they didn't let the teasing down so easy.
< In the cabin
Tanya was changing Nero's bandages to avoid infections when Baku came into the room.
"His right arm healed." Baku said leaning on the doorframe eating a Crunchy bar. "So are his legs, surprisingly enough."
"What how?" Tanya asked tilting her head and her eyes shown confusion.
"Dunno. I'm gonna take my run, be back later." Baku was out of site from Tanya's bedroom door. "Oh ya, I just heard this name 'Ayrez', interested in calling him that for the time being until we learn his real name?"
"Everyone is changing their names these days..." said Tanya removing the casts not looking at Baku.
"I know."
"Sure... Nero sounds stupid anyways." Tanya got a piece of paper from her pocket and handed it to Baku. "Groceries."
"K. Bye" with that Baku disappeared.
"Ummggghhh"
Tanya looked to the bed. Ayrez was groaning and shuffling around the bed for the first time in two days. He usually just shook but now he moved.
"No fever. His recovery is going very quickly." Tanya removed her hand from his head.
His eyes were covered with bandages and his face expression was relaxed but a bit sorrowful.
Tanya noticed he was kind of handsome and blushed. She shook her head.
"I'm gonna take a dip in the lake. I'll be back in half an hour."
In the lake in front of the tree house
Tanya dove underwater, her wings expanded and helped her gain more speed. Unlike her brother she had to jump up in the surface and take a gulp of air then dove back in. She swam to a waterfall and fell from it, but halfway down flew out of it. Since her wings were soggy so she could only stay in air for a short amount of time. So she landed on the edge of the riverbank and scanned the area for predators. Luckily there was none. She beat her wings against in the air, making a little gust of wind around her. In a matter of moments she was dry.
"Men lets take it back to the base." A man with a military suit ordered 5 other men like him. Faces hidden and voices like a hollow soul.
Tanya quickly leaped onto a tree above her and eavesdropped on their conversation.
They carried away what seemed to be a large red arm with black under it. Well most of it seemed burn. "Scour the area and find more pieces of this monstrosity!" the men followed and ran with in the forest.
'These men aren't from around here.' Tanya turned her telescopic vision on, the black center in her pupil grew larger. 'A plane...'
"G.U.N.!" Tanya spat on that name, they took the thing in the world she loved most. With that she took of to the cabin.
As soon as Tanya got back to the cabin she checked on Ayrez only to find him still asleep but on his right side facing the window to the lake.
"Good."
She ran down the hallway, into the kitchen and tapped her foot twice behind a counter. It swung open and revealed a tiny computer, which carefully sprung out. Tanya typed in a password that seemed like half a long sentence. Then placed her index finger on the screen and let her eyes be scanned by a red light. Tanya rubbed her eyes, she never got used to that and she didn't like it. She was online in matter of seconds. "Command F16." Tanya called out clearly.
"Neutralizing Estate Heat." A female computer voice said.
"Command F12." Tanya called out her second command.
"Cloaking Territory."
"E1." Tanya said her final command, hopefully the last command to say in the day.
"Shutting down." With that the computer was once again hidden in the small space behind the counter and everything looked as it always was, normal and tidy.
"Baku! BAKU!" Tanya was speaking into a communicator watch that was on her left wrist, Baku and Tanya had this because they would never know if they needed to communicate with each other. "HEY PERVERT!"
Chhhhhhhhh
"I heard you the first time!" Baku's voice was very fuzzy and unclear.
"I don't think communication will last longer but I activated command F16 and F12. I'll explain later! Come back safe bye!" Tanya spoke quickly knowing Baku's quick reflexes would able him to hear what she said like she was in slow-mo.
"5:30...I took longer that I should have." She walked into her room. Looking at Ayrez he seemed more peaceful than before. Its like he was just sleeping with no pain from his arm or skull or burns. Its like he fully recovered.
"Who's there?"
Tanya gasped.
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Mystica: Sorry if I didn't exactly look it over properly to add more ideas in! I just really wanted to get this chapter over with! Review please!