Hey did you guys like the cliffhanger - well that's, that. Here the next chapter by the way sorry about the grammar mistakes I went back three time to fix it but I guess I had a lot more then I though - Anyway on with the chapter.

Unpredictable

"Harry I thought you wanted to find Hermione" Ron suddenly appeared out of no where.

"Hermione? o yeah that right, we were looking for her. Well ...... bye Nicole" Harry said he completely had forgotten about Hermione.

"bye Harry" Nicole said still kind of out of it.

Malfoy was going to say something when ...

"HERMIONE!!!!" both yelled

She ran to where they were. "Where did you go?" Harry asked

"I was just walking around, you didn't have to come looking for me" Hermione answered

"Well than looking for you was a waste of time" Ron said, Hermione just glared at him

"Come on we're missing the game" (Ron)

When they got back to their seats the score board read 100 Dragonriders / 50 Red Ravens

"They sure scored a lot while we were gone"(Ron)

"How long were we gone" Harry asked

"Half an hour" (Hermione said looking at her watch)

"They scored that many points in just a half an hour?"(Harry)

"Do all professional quidditch players fly that fast?"(Hermione)

"Don't know, I guess so, it would makes sense" (Ron) "At this rate the Red Ravens don't stand a chance."(Ron)

"The only way they can win is if the seeker gets the snitch" (Harry)

Announcer::

Both Seekers are after the snitch Dragonrider Seeker Cherish Turner is in the lead of Red Ravens Seeker William Smith. Cherish speeds up! It at her finger tips... she almost got it......and she CAUGHT THE SNITCH DRAGONRIDERS WIN!!!!!!!!!!!

Audience cheer loudly as Cherish held up the snitch, she looked really happy.

"Well that was a very interesting game "(Ron)

"It was only an hour long" (Hermione)

"I though it was going to be longer" (Harry)

"Me too" (Nicole)

"o hi" (Harry)

I would like to thank all my reviewers for the advice you gave me, I hope this was an improvement. You can also check my story out on my web site

sorry this was kind of short next one will be more interesting!! Promise

The Infection- what's your problem DUDE (Dudete) I felt like writing this, and to my belief I will do it better!!!! And who want to "gaze into my chilly yellow eyes" one more thing what the heck is "quadpot" I been to a lot HP sites and even quidditch sites and never herd the word.

BlueMoonChild89 – thank a lot for your review, how long do you think it should?

rey-rey-3 – THANK YOU

oceanmate –thanks a lot your advice helped me hope this improved a bit !

Valinor Rellik – thanks well I guess I had more mistakes than I though if you find anymore tell me I think I got all of them this time.

Danfan91- THANKS!!!!!!