Forward.
I have chosen to go back to the beginning of my story and edit it heavily with My Grammarly subscription. After trying to re-read my chapters, I realized how bad it was. I have been going through emotional and mental hell due to my mother's years of alcoholism and her death Oct 8th, 2021. In addition to moving in June/July 2022. Another reason I have edited this is After reviewing things in later chapters realized I wrote myself into a corner I did not intend. And I can not get out of it without resulting in a BS Copout.
Also, as some have pointed out, some issues. Re-reading it, I wanted to correct them and expand the first chapter. As well as address things... differently. When I started this story, it was purely an impulse to write.
The New story has been pushed through GRAMMARLY PREMIUM and I have rewritten it some what. So I will be doing my best to post an edited chapter once every two weeks until it is all properly edited. So I will not be posting anymore on this story, but Posting in the New.
Rise of the Dragons (Revised 2.0)
Second, I have blocked several authors, including a recent reviewer, Thunderofdeath97. As I told him before, I blocked him. "Don't like it, don't read it. We are all entitled to our own opinions. " After reading the first three reviews he posted and nothing else, I realized that he was going to go through chapter by chapter tearing it apart. Ranting and raging over what he didn't like. I thought about banning him then and there but decided to let him voice his opinions.
Like it or not, he is entitled to them. Other reviewers have flat-out blasted me; of them, only two others were blocked. It was not a one-and-done review. He expressed his displeasure for each chapter, then favored and followed my story that he was so dedicated to tearing down. I felt he was a Toxic Reviewer