1 To Fall In Love With A Dancer
Disclaimer: CCS does not belong to me.
Sorry to everyone who looked up my story and you didn't find it. I accidentally wrote, "Love Over Business" rather than "Business Over Love." The latter is the correct title, and it makes a big difference the order the words are placed. I didn't catch it last night when I was writing the author's note. I was too tired. Please forgive me. Thank you Seyenaidni for telling me! =) Remember to check out my story! Enjoy!
AN: Chapter 10 is finally out! Yay! I also wrote a new story. It's called "Business Over Love". Please take some time and read it. If you don't like it, tell me what I can change to make it better. Right now, I want to thank everyone who reviewed my story!
Sorrow-Thank you for reviewing! I'm sorry to keep you waiting! Hope you like this chapter! =)
SweetAznPnai4eva-Thank you for reviewing! Sorry for using your name! =P Hope you like this chapter!
Seyenaidni-Thank you for reviewing this story and Business Over Love! Yay! =) I hope you enjoy reading this chapter. There's no mushy stuff in this one though. It's about Rachel…yeah. =)
Silver-Cherry-I'm glad you like my story. A lot of people like Syaoran when he's bad. HeeHee. I'll try to make him bad later on in the story. Hope you like this chapter! Oh yeah, wear your "I'm a queen" shirt often! Sounds cute! =P
Cutie Blossom-Thanks for reviewing! In this chapter you'll find out more about Rachel. Ooh!!! =P
Litun-Thank you for reviewing both of my stories! Yay! =) I hope you like this chapter. There's nothing about Sakura canceling the date. Only about Rachel. Enjoy!
Kerochan-Thank you so much for reviewing both my stories! I can see that your story is going well! =) I'm glad that you really like my story. My writing too! You're complimenting me too much! Making me blush! =X I like your story as well. I hope you like this chapter! =)
Chanda-I'm so flattered that you think this story is the best one you've read yet! *blush* Thank you for reviewing! I hope you enjoy this chapter! =)
Choco-Drops-Sorry for making my chapters so short! I'm glad you reviewed though!
Syaoran-and-Sakura-Thank you for reviewing. You'll find out more about Rachel in this chapter! =)
KyteAura-I posted up my new story. It's an E+T romance. Have you read it? I hope you will! The first chapter doesn't have much, but I promise it'll get better! Thanks for reviewing!
Megan- Thank you for reviewing! I'll try to make Syaoran a bad boy in the upcoming chapters.
Sakura/Sagwa-Thank you for reviewing! I'm so happy you like my story! =)
Sahmandah-Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that you liked the previous chapter! =) Rachel is…you'll have to read to find out!
Ongaku-Thank you for reviewing! Yeah, I'm sensitive. I hate it when people pity me after they've seen me cry. They don't want to joke with me anymore, because they're afraid they'll make me cry. I've only cried once this entire school year! =( I hope you like this chapter! I'm so glad you like it! =)
Sarri-chan-Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you think it's a great story! There's nothing about why Sakura cancelled in this chapter. Only about who Rachel is. Enjoy!
FaNTaSy-Thanks for reviewing! You'll find out who Rachel is in this chapter! Hope you like this chapter!
Sillysac-Thank you for reviewing both of my stories! I really appreciate it, and I'm so happy that you like them both! Yay! I hope you like this chapter! =)
Lil Devil-Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that you like it, and think it's a great story! I hope you enjoy reading this chapter!
Azalea-Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like this chapter! =)
Aya The White Dragon-*blush* Yay! I'm so happy you like my story! I wrote another story. It's called "Business Over Love." I would love it if you read it and reviewed it! Thank you for everything! =)
Ying Fa Li-Yay! I'm happy to hear that this is one of the best AU stories you've ever read! =) I posted up a new story, but it's E+T. I'm not sure if you like that couple, but if you have time, please check it out! =) Thanks for reviewing! Love yahz!
Chapter 10-Rachel and the Problem
Syaoran's breath quickened at the sight of his ex-fiancée. She was absolutely gorgeous. Breathtaking. She had long flowing fiery red hair, mischievous amber eyes, and a well-curved slim body. Her luscious red lips curved upward, delighted that Syaoran had remembered her.
"Don't you look sexy tonight."
Rachel playfully tugged on Syaoran's white dress shirt.
"What the hell are you doing here?"
Syaoran hadn't meant to be rude, but the painful memories of sorrow and grief he experienced when she left him came flooding back.
Rachel pouted, and cupped Syaoran's face in her hands.
"Aren't you happy to see me?"
Syaoran jerked away.
"Frankly, I wish you would go to hell."
"That's not very nice to say. Especially to your new partner."
Syaoran froze.
"My what?!?"
Rachel smirked.
"I have no need to repeat myself. You heard me perfectly."
Syaoran stared at her in disbelief.
"Damn this shit! Of all people!"
Syaoran frustratingly raked a hand through his hair and breathed deeply. He needed to calm down. Breathe in. Breathe out. He would kill Joe tomorrow morning.
"Joe filled me in on the case he assigned you. He says you seemed to be having trouble, knowing that you could wrap a case up like this one in less than 3 weeks."
Syaoran sighed. Poor Joe. He'll be dead by tonight. In his sleep. And the guy was so nice too.
"Am I going to stay out here all night, or are you going to invite me in?"
Syaoran forced a smile.
"Come on in. Please."
The sooner the two of them figured out how to prove Devon Taylor guilty, the sooner they'd be out of each other's way, out of each other's lives.
Closing the door, Syaoran turned around to quickly get the night over with, when he noticed the sad expression on Rachel's face. He walked over to her, and kneeled down before her.
"What's wrong?"
Rachel was silent, not lifting her head. With hesitant hands, Syaoran gently lifted up Rachel's chin. Her eyes were red. Her face streaked with tears.
"What's wrong? Tell me. Rachel, look at me."
Syaoran was confused. What was wrong with Rachel?
"Please Syaoran. Please hold me." Rachel's voice was hoarse and pleading. Syaoran had no choice but to hold her close to him and try to comfort her.
"Rachel. What's wrong? Why won't you tell me?"
For a long time, Syaoran just held Rachel while she wept. Finally, Rachel's sobbing lessened and she began to speak.
"Devon Taylor. Do you remember him?"
Syaoran lifted an eyebrow.
"What do you mean?"
Rachel sighed, and wiped away her tears.
"Our engagement. I never told you why I broke it off. I think now is the time you should know. Before we met, Devon and I were together. We were going steady for three years, and then he proposed to me. I said yes. One night, he blindfolded me and took me to this beautiful mansion with beautiful portraits that were hung everywhere. I asked him where he had gotten them. He was hesitant in his answer, but he told me. He told me that he stole them. I was shocked. I didn't want to marry a man who was a criminal, so I broke off the engagement a week later. Then, I met you. You were the exact opposite of Devon. I fell in love with you. Only one year after we met, you proposed, and I agreed. Devon heard about our engagement and got jealous. I never told you this, but one of his guys knocked me out and kidnapped me one afternoon. When I became conscious again, I found myself in Devon's home. He told me he still loved me and he would kill you if I married you. I didn't have a choice. I had to break my engagement to you. It pleased Devon greatly. After breaking our engagement, I realized that I still loved Devon. Criminal or not."
"So you're upset because you don't want to put your lover in jail?"
Rachel's voice became quiet.
"No, that's not it."
Syaoran lifted an eyebrow.
"What's wrong then?"
Rachel looked straight at Syaoran.
"I'm pregnant with his child."
AN: Well, I hope you liked this chapter. It's a bit odd, but please review! Rachel is a type of character I would say is a queen of masks. She can act confident on the outside, but she's breaking down on the inside. I really don't know what else to say, except are you guys dying to know why Sakura cancelled her date with Syaoran? HeeHee. =) Thank you to everyone who read this chapter and reviewed it! Love yahz! Oh yeah! Wait! Remember to read my new story, "Business Over Love". I would really appreciate it if you reviewed it! Thank you!
Disclaimer: CCS does not belong to me.
Sorry to everyone who looked up my story and you didn't find it. I accidentally wrote, "Love Over Business" rather than "Business Over Love." The latter is the correct title, and it makes a big difference the order the words are placed. I didn't catch it last night when I was writing the author's note. I was too tired. Please forgive me. Thank you Seyenaidni for telling me! =) Remember to check out my story! Enjoy!
AN: Chapter 10 is finally out! Yay! I also wrote a new story. It's called "Business Over Love". Please take some time and read it. If you don't like it, tell me what I can change to make it better. Right now, I want to thank everyone who reviewed my story!
Sorrow-Thank you for reviewing! I'm sorry to keep you waiting! Hope you like this chapter! =)
SweetAznPnai4eva-Thank you for reviewing! Sorry for using your name! =P Hope you like this chapter!
Seyenaidni-Thank you for reviewing this story and Business Over Love! Yay! =) I hope you enjoy reading this chapter. There's no mushy stuff in this one though. It's about Rachel…yeah. =)
Silver-Cherry-I'm glad you like my story. A lot of people like Syaoran when he's bad. HeeHee. I'll try to make him bad later on in the story. Hope you like this chapter! Oh yeah, wear your "I'm a queen" shirt often! Sounds cute! =P
Cutie Blossom-Thanks for reviewing! In this chapter you'll find out more about Rachel. Ooh!!! =P
Litun-Thank you for reviewing both of my stories! Yay! =) I hope you like this chapter. There's nothing about Sakura canceling the date. Only about Rachel. Enjoy!
Kerochan-Thank you so much for reviewing both my stories! I can see that your story is going well! =) I'm glad that you really like my story. My writing too! You're complimenting me too much! Making me blush! =X I like your story as well. I hope you like this chapter! =)
Chanda-I'm so flattered that you think this story is the best one you've read yet! *blush* Thank you for reviewing! I hope you enjoy this chapter! =)
Choco-Drops-Sorry for making my chapters so short! I'm glad you reviewed though!
Syaoran-and-Sakura-Thank you for reviewing. You'll find out more about Rachel in this chapter! =)
KyteAura-I posted up my new story. It's an E+T romance. Have you read it? I hope you will! The first chapter doesn't have much, but I promise it'll get better! Thanks for reviewing!
Megan- Thank you for reviewing! I'll try to make Syaoran a bad boy in the upcoming chapters.
Sakura/Sagwa-Thank you for reviewing! I'm so happy you like my story! =)
Sahmandah-Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that you liked the previous chapter! =) Rachel is…you'll have to read to find out!
Ongaku-Thank you for reviewing! Yeah, I'm sensitive. I hate it when people pity me after they've seen me cry. They don't want to joke with me anymore, because they're afraid they'll make me cry. I've only cried once this entire school year! =( I hope you like this chapter! I'm so glad you like it! =)
Sarri-chan-Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you think it's a great story! There's nothing about why Sakura cancelled in this chapter. Only about who Rachel is. Enjoy!
FaNTaSy-Thanks for reviewing! You'll find out who Rachel is in this chapter! Hope you like this chapter!
Sillysac-Thank you for reviewing both of my stories! I really appreciate it, and I'm so happy that you like them both! Yay! I hope you like this chapter! =)
Lil Devil-Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that you like it, and think it's a great story! I hope you enjoy reading this chapter!
Azalea-Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like this chapter! =)
Aya The White Dragon-*blush* Yay! I'm so happy you like my story! I wrote another story. It's called "Business Over Love." I would love it if you read it and reviewed it! Thank you for everything! =)
Ying Fa Li-Yay! I'm happy to hear that this is one of the best AU stories you've ever read! =) I posted up a new story, but it's E+T. I'm not sure if you like that couple, but if you have time, please check it out! =) Thanks for reviewing! Love yahz!
Chapter 10-Rachel and the Problem
Syaoran's breath quickened at the sight of his ex-fiancée. She was absolutely gorgeous. Breathtaking. She had long flowing fiery red hair, mischievous amber eyes, and a well-curved slim body. Her luscious red lips curved upward, delighted that Syaoran had remembered her.
"Don't you look sexy tonight."
Rachel playfully tugged on Syaoran's white dress shirt.
"What the hell are you doing here?"
Syaoran hadn't meant to be rude, but the painful memories of sorrow and grief he experienced when she left him came flooding back.
Rachel pouted, and cupped Syaoran's face in her hands.
"Aren't you happy to see me?"
Syaoran jerked away.
"Frankly, I wish you would go to hell."
"That's not very nice to say. Especially to your new partner."
Syaoran froze.
"My what?!?"
Rachel smirked.
"I have no need to repeat myself. You heard me perfectly."
Syaoran stared at her in disbelief.
"Damn this shit! Of all people!"
Syaoran frustratingly raked a hand through his hair and breathed deeply. He needed to calm down. Breathe in. Breathe out. He would kill Joe tomorrow morning.
"Joe filled me in on the case he assigned you. He says you seemed to be having trouble, knowing that you could wrap a case up like this one in less than 3 weeks."
Syaoran sighed. Poor Joe. He'll be dead by tonight. In his sleep. And the guy was so nice too.
"Am I going to stay out here all night, or are you going to invite me in?"
Syaoran forced a smile.
"Come on in. Please."
The sooner the two of them figured out how to prove Devon Taylor guilty, the sooner they'd be out of each other's way, out of each other's lives.
Closing the door, Syaoran turned around to quickly get the night over with, when he noticed the sad expression on Rachel's face. He walked over to her, and kneeled down before her.
"What's wrong?"
Rachel was silent, not lifting her head. With hesitant hands, Syaoran gently lifted up Rachel's chin. Her eyes were red. Her face streaked with tears.
"What's wrong? Tell me. Rachel, look at me."
Syaoran was confused. What was wrong with Rachel?
"Please Syaoran. Please hold me." Rachel's voice was hoarse and pleading. Syaoran had no choice but to hold her close to him and try to comfort her.
"Rachel. What's wrong? Why won't you tell me?"
For a long time, Syaoran just held Rachel while she wept. Finally, Rachel's sobbing lessened and she began to speak.
"Devon Taylor. Do you remember him?"
Syaoran lifted an eyebrow.
"What do you mean?"
Rachel sighed, and wiped away her tears.
"Our engagement. I never told you why I broke it off. I think now is the time you should know. Before we met, Devon and I were together. We were going steady for three years, and then he proposed to me. I said yes. One night, he blindfolded me and took me to this beautiful mansion with beautiful portraits that were hung everywhere. I asked him where he had gotten them. He was hesitant in his answer, but he told me. He told me that he stole them. I was shocked. I didn't want to marry a man who was a criminal, so I broke off the engagement a week later. Then, I met you. You were the exact opposite of Devon. I fell in love with you. Only one year after we met, you proposed, and I agreed. Devon heard about our engagement and got jealous. I never told you this, but one of his guys knocked me out and kidnapped me one afternoon. When I became conscious again, I found myself in Devon's home. He told me he still loved me and he would kill you if I married you. I didn't have a choice. I had to break my engagement to you. It pleased Devon greatly. After breaking our engagement, I realized that I still loved Devon. Criminal or not."
"So you're upset because you don't want to put your lover in jail?"
Rachel's voice became quiet.
"No, that's not it."
Syaoran lifted an eyebrow.
"What's wrong then?"
Rachel looked straight at Syaoran.
"I'm pregnant with his child."
AN: Well, I hope you liked this chapter. It's a bit odd, but please review! Rachel is a type of character I would say is a queen of masks. She can act confident on the outside, but she's breaking down on the inside. I really don't know what else to say, except are you guys dying to know why Sakura cancelled her date with Syaoran? HeeHee. =) Thank you to everyone who read this chapter and reviewed it! Love yahz! Oh yeah! Wait! Remember to read my new story, "Business Over Love". I would really appreciate it if you reviewed it! Thank you!