Just so that everyone knows, Hunter looks like a brown Scamp, with a light brown belly. This is a fic I wrote special for PinkAngel, cause Hunter's her character, so please do not flame it...
Taken
Hunter's Story
The sun was starting to set, and I was taking a walk around a neighborhood. It had been raining all week, and I had decided that I needed some exercise.
I looked ahead, and spotted her. She was a beautiful young pup, with the silkiest fur I've ever seen!
She turned around, and looked right at me! The look she gave me was so sweet, that I almost forgot to look where I was going! She motioned for me to come closer, so I did.
"Hello." she said quietly. "My name is Angel."
"Angel." I replied. "That's a nice name."
It grew quiet. I sighed and closed my eyes. I wondered why she wasn't saying anything. When I opened my eyes, I saw her staring at me! Then I realized she must've been waiting for me to say my name!
I blushed and said," My name is Hunter."
She giggled.
"So, she began, What brings you outside on such a beautiful day?"
"Well, it's been raining all week." I replied. "Besides, I really need the exercise."
Then shyly I said,"So, you taken?"
She looked confused. "Taken? For what?"
I blushed. "I mean, do you have a boyfriend?"
'With her good looks, I wouldn't be surprised if she already did!' I thought.
Then I became aware that Angel was speaking to me.
"Well, I used to, she said, but he met someone else."
Her ears flew down.
"Oh." I replied.
Who in their right mind would dump a pup like Angel?!
Then Angel's ears perked up in interest. "Why do you want to know?" she asked with curiosity in her eyes.
"Oh! I,um, I just, I stammered, I, uh, was just, uh...curious! Yeah! Curious!"
Angel's ears flopped back down. "Oh." she said, softly, "Well...I should go, and leave you to your walk. Well, it was nice meeting you."
She got up, and began to leave.
"Angel!" I called. "Wait!"
Angel turned around and looked back at me. "Yeah?"
"Do you want to come on my walk with me?" I asked hopefully.
She looked surprised.
"Sure. " she said when she'd finally recovered, "I'd like that."
'Alright! I thought, She said yes!'
Angel smiled at me with a dreamy look on her face. She kept looking at me so romantically, that I was beginning to feel a bit uncomfortable.
"Ok!" I said happily, "Let's go!"
Angel nodded, and the two left, on a romantic stroll around the neighborhood.
During the walk, we talked, and got to know each other some more. Then a bunch of butterflies flew up in our faces! We laughed, and began chasing them. We finally gave up, when they flew higher than we could jump.
Bored, I asked ," What should we do now?"
Angel thought for a minute and then looked at me and said," Tag! You're It! Can't catch me!"
She licked me, and ran off.
Startled, I just stood there.
"C'mon!" she called. "Try to catch me! Or are you afraid that you're not fast enough to catch me?"
"I'm not afraid!!" I cried, and gave chase.
Later that night, I walked Angel up to her door.
Then, we saw a shooting star.
"Make a wish." I told Angel. "You never know. It could come true."
We both closed our eyes, and began to chant:
Star light,Star bright
First star I see tonight
Wish I may,I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight
Then we made our wishes.
"Hey, Angel." I said when we were finished. "Remeber when you said you weren't taken?"
Angel frowned. "Yeah. Why?"
"Well, you are now!" I replied, and licked her cheek. "That is, if you wanna be...my special girl."
Angel was speechless! "Oh, Hunter, she began, This is so sweet. Of course, I would love to be your special girl!"
And with that, Angel nuzzled up against me, and licked my face.
Things grew quiet, and we could hear crickets chirping. It was so peaceful! I wished that this night would never end, but I knew it had to.
"Goodnight." I said to her dreamily and started to head home.
She stared at me, and gave a dreamy sigh.
"Goodnight, Hunter." she replied softly, and went inside.
The End
Author's comments: Wow! I've been thinking about writing this fic for a really long time, and I finally did it! Btw, I know that love doesn't happen all in one night, that it takes time. But I wanted to write it this way, cause I think that's how animals do it. The fluff was just right for a beginning couple. Not too fluffy, not too non fluffy!(Well, at least, I think so) Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my short but sweet fic.
Love,
Magenta