On a clear monday night two meteorite looking space ships flew through earth's atmosphere at a speed unreachable by Human technology, traveling with a tail of fire that shown brightly in the night sky, then slamming down to the planet with such a force it shook the ground. " Computer Analizing." said a voice from the ship."Scanning....Air 70 percent oxygen, 20 percent carbon diaoxide, 10 percent water, Brethable . Temperature....68 Degrees. Gravitation... 10x less then that of planet Vegeta. Analysis.....Suffecient to support Saijin life."
The Saijin inside one of the pods pressed a button on the side of his scouter.
"Prince Vegeta the planet is able to support Saijin life."
"Excellent Kakarrott. know have the computer run an analysis on the species of this planet."
"Yes sire." The Saijin then bagan pressing a series of buttons on the computer in front of him.
"Analyzing.....Species...Human. Population.....4 billion."
"Hmm thats alot of people." Kakarrott then typed some more buttons.
"Scanning....Multiple high power levels throughout a nearby city. Planetary rating class B (class A being the highest rating and D being the lowest)."
"sire we have multiple high power levels, and the computer has rated this planet Class B."
"But this planet was tagged D."
"what does this mean sire?"
"It means intelligence screwed up bad. We'll rest here tonight and contact Lord Freiza in the moring."
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not bad for chapter 1 bust it's a start, doesnt realy say much but it shows you were the story is going to start so reveiw please and send ideas if youd like to