k this is a poem I made in the middle of the night and after I read it a few times, I thought it could kinda be like Inuyasha was writing it...which made me think of a new fanfiction to go along with this, but I'll just give you the summary of it....Inuyasha comes to Kagome's world to bring her back, but when they go to jump in the well, they can't get to the other side, so Inuyasha has to live in Kagome's world from now on...just read the poem plz...tell me if you think it's any good...I entered it into a contest and a teacher got really mad at me for it...but you don't need to know that, right? I'll have to write the fanfiction later that goes along with this...
Paradise?
I no longer smell the scent of the wind that once carried flower petals from the yonder cherry trees in blossom,
Only the exaust and pollution that leaves a bitter taste in my mouth as I try not to breathe through my nose,
Nevermore do I see the sapphire skies I once knew watching me overhead as I look back into the clouds,
Just the bland skyscrapers lurking over the listless city and the grey, sordid clouds of smog that shield my eyes from the heavens,
The wind no longer caresses through my hair and no more leaves the white strands of hair in small knots, and no longer escorts away all the weight on my body and mind and makes me feel the sensation of freedom.
No more does the hawk take wing into the incessant sky and race the wind singing his heart out, soaring into the crimson and cyan sunset, but is now trapped in a small wire box and sobs only songs of pain and sorrow as people observe him as if he were some kind of item in a general store.
The cricket no longer chirps into dusk, but is now choaked by fear as he is being held by the leg of a careless human whelp, holding his last string of life, his last breath of air, knowing it is the end.
Long forgotten are the sound of trees whispering of things they've seen and tales they've heard from by-passers, for they are now cut down and shredded to pieces for 'better' uses.
The amber sunset of another day wasted by the recklessness of mankind is painted across the sky, but is never set eyes on, for now it is covered by the office buildings and power plants, thought to be brilliant creations.
The world I once knew is now confusing and uptight, too busy to care about the starving man on the street corner, too set on its job to help the child that's being yelled at and beaten, too self-centered to know that a close friend is breaking down and thinking suicide is the only way out.
The world I once loved is now full of hatred and murders, children seeing bloodshed in movies and hearing curse words thinking it's alright to hurt someone, thinking it's alright to play with father's gun in the study's desk drawer, thinking the gun isn't loaded and pulling the trigger playfully to their head.
The world I once could flee to is now a living hell I want to run away from, about to snap at any given moment, just waiting to end, waiting to loose all the weight and the tension.
What has happened to our paradise?
yea....I couldn't figure out an ending, so srry the ending's kinda crappy....g2g later....plz R&R...thnx....
Seizonsha