Be Nice. This is my first fanfic lol. But I am totally open to criticism. Please review though.
Summer has got no friends after Holly and Marissa ditch her and Summer finds herself with no real friends, Holly and Marissa are like being bitches, spreading rumours so most of the popular ppl are against her... so why is Seth Cohen, one of the most popular guys in the school, being nice to her?
This is pre-Ryan but he will arrive soon.
Xx
Summer Robert shoved open the bathroom door and collapsed against the wall, a group of girls sauntered in throwing strange glances at Summer who was on the ground. Her bottom lip began to quiver dangerously and she bit it instantly trying to delay the inevitable stream of tears.
She watched the girls talking and laughing together as the discussed how unfair their English teacher was.
I'll never belong in a group like that again.
The door flew open, and Marissa Cooper walked in, Summer swallowed the lump in her throat but the tears began to trickle down her cheeks.
I hate her, she's such a bitch, what happened to us being best friends forever… I guess guy's can get between friends…
"Oh, Summer I didn't see you there on the floor"
Summer tried to ignore her but the words were echoing in her head
"What, can't it talk anymore? I thought just five minutes ago you had a lot to say to us, if i recall correctly, you had more than enough to say about Luke, God your such a bitch Summer"
"I don't feel like talking, and i wasn't the one being a bitch" Summer's voice was shaky, she felt vulnreable
"That's something new, Summer not talking? God Summer, stop crying your such a baby"
Summer didn't want to hear what she was saying but she couldn't block it out.
She watched as Marissa applied a layer of gloss to her lips then walked out of the toilets.
After about fifteen minutes of staring at the sickly green tiles covering the floor, and ten minutes into her next class Summer stood up wiped her tears and stormed out of the girl's bathroom, heading to physics.
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"Ms. Robert's, do you think that you can waltz into this classroom at whatever time you please?"
"Sorry Mr. Cald-"
"See me after class'
She hated being late, it was like she had to walk down a long runway in front of thousands of people, except this was just her classroom with students sitting in it, but they made it daunting all the same.
So this is what it's like to have no friends, to walk in a classroom where everyone has heard rumours about you...
Obviously word had gotten round about her fight with Marissa Cooper and Holly Fisher and now, it seemed everyone was against her. They smirked and looked her up and down as she fumbled to her seat.
"Now Class, please turn to page ninety-six of your Physics book and read paragraphs one through to four"
Summer sighed and began flipping through her book when she heard a familiar voice
"So, I heard about your fallout with the girls"
Summer turned to Seth Cohen, 'the Seth Cohen', the most adorable guy in eleventh grade, who's dimples captured every single girl's heart. Every girl except Summer.
"Shove it Cohen. I don't want to hear any of your lame ass comments, because I'm sure most of the school thinks I'm the biggest loser now"
"If I'm not mistaken, I'd sense a bit of hatred in that sentence?" a smile tickled Seth's lips
Summer snapped around "That's because I do hate you"
"Ouch" Seth was still smiling though he opened his mouth to speak again when Mr. Caldwell's voice boomed throughout the classroom
"Mr. Cohen and Ms. Robert's I'd like to see you after class" he threw a cold stare in Summer's direction.
Seth leaned forward and whispered "I was just making sure you were all right, Marissa and Holly can be bitches sometimes"
Summer felt shivers down her spine as she felt his hot breath on her neck, he sounded honest though, she didn't know whether to buy it or not. Why was Seth Cohen worried about her? Why did he even care for her existence?
Summer ignored him and continued reading; this was going to be a hard Physics lesson to get through.
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"Ms. Robert's your attitude in this class was less than acceptable, after your first warning you went ahead and pushed the limits"
"Mr. Caldwell, I spoke to her first"
Summer looked at Seth out of the corner of her eyes; did he really just stick up for her?
Her knee's felt weak and she stumbled a bit, receiving weird looks from both Seth and Mr. Caldwell
What the hell's wrong with you Summer, you hate Seth Cohen, he's a player
You do not like him
"But Mr. Cohen, she chose to reply"
Summer and Seth were stunted they didn't know what to say, Seth began to smirk; a smile covered his face, his funny lopsided one. Summer bit her lip trying to prevent a smile breaking out on her face, but Seth Cohen had a contagious smile.
"I do not want to hear this personal joke; you will both see me in detention today after school and tomorrow"
Summer rolled her eye's and stormed out of the class; her smile had disappeared as soon as it came.
Seth rushed out after her, Summer's shoes were squeaking in the hallways. She could sense him behind her. She whipped around
"What do you want?"
"Well Summer we've got a date this afternoon, you excited?" He laughed lightly
"It's called detention Cohen"
"You're not intrigued by my charisma and charm?"
"Sorry Cohen, your charisma and charm doesn't appeal to me"
"So you admit? I have charisma and charm" Seth was laughing now
"Just leave me alone"
"If i am correct, i believe my charisma and charm captured your heart a few minutes ago?"
"Well, your not correct. I...i.. i'm allowed to smile when i want, what were you laughing at anyway?"
"Nothing. Just Mr. Caldwell shaves his legs"
"Ew! He's like fifty"
"There's stubble alllll over his legs" Seth's hands were in the air, his fingers wiggling as if he was tickeling something
Summer was about to laugh. But only for a mere second.
She looked at Seth, his eyes caught hers and he looked at her for a second too long, she felt as if he knew everything about her.
Summer stalked off in the other direction
"Don't forget our date Summer" Sethlaughed as he said it
She wastrying to get rid of the thought in her head that Seth Cohen was flirting with her.
Summer was confused and having possibly the worst day ever.
Her friends had ditched her, and now in almost an instant she had gone from leading the school to having the whole student body against her. Maybe not the whole student body. There is Seth Cohen.
No. Don't think it. Don't think it. You hate Seth Cohen.
Summer stopped in mid-walk.
Remembering his cute smile, the way he talked, the way he laughed, how he called her name.
It's impossible. I hate him. I hate him. I hate him.
But she turned one last time to look at him disappearing into a classroom. And as she watched him, her legs felt weak. But it was only for a second. Because she did not like Seth Cohen.
Do I continue? I won't continue if no one reviews because I don't know if it's a good story or not. :) xx Summ