This is my revised version of part 2 cos I wasn't keen on the original. I've made a slight change to the ending and a couple other bits. Hope it sounds better and please all let me know by reviewing. Thanks to all those who have reviewed you've been great.

Ok, here's part 2 this is based on the Sugababes song 'Too Lost in You', not sure if they're that famous outside the UK, but I love this song. Highly recommend it! And I rated R for sexual references, it is so hard not to right porn so I deleted bits maybe I toned down too much, but hey you can decide!

Part Two

You look into my eyes

I go out of my mind

I can't see anything cos this loves got me blind

I can't help myself

I can't break this spell

I can't even try

Jack opens the door to his apartment and we step inside,

I walk to the middle of the room with my coat slipping from my arms to the floor, Jack comes up behind me, and I feel his hands ghost down my arms making my hairs stand on end.

He whispers in my ear, "Are you sure about this?"

I'm in over my head

You got under my skin

I got know strength at all in the state that I'm in

And my knees are weak

And my mouth can't speak

Fell to far this time

"I've never been more certain in my life"

With that he turns me around in his arms and looks deep into my eyes searching for confirmation. I reach my arms round his neck and kiss him softly and slowly on the lips. His arms hold me tight round my waist and he returns the kiss in full reaching deep into my mouth with his tongue caressing mine as our bodies can't get any closer I feel him deeply aroused pressed up against me. We start to walk backwards towards his bedroom still kissing and both gripping tightly on to one another not wanting to let go.

Baby I'm too lost in you

Caught in you

Lost in

Everything about you so deep

I can't sleep

I can't think

I just think about the things that you do

I'm too lost in you

I take a seat on the bed and Jack stands in front of me, he pulls my chin up and softly kisses me. Grabbing onto his shirt I pull him on top of me and start undoing his buttons enough so I can pull the shirt over his head. I feel his full weight on top of me as he kisses my neck and places a hand on my thigh caressing up and down. He moves slowly down my body, pulling my dress off as he goes and dropping it on the floor. He then unclasps my bra and lightly rolls his tongue over one breast then the other, sending me to a place further than heaven.

Well you whisper to me and I shiver inside

You undo me you move me

And you're all I see and you're all I need

Help me baby

Help me now

I needed to feel him inside me it had been to long; he finally granted me my wish and gave me a reason to love him.

With Jack, Making love was always slow; he left no part of my body untouched, as if time had stopped.

His caresses drive me crazy and keep me holding on before I lose myself in him. For those short moments Love is blind and I'm drowning.

He knows how to make me feel like a woman. He doesn't have to say the words, I Love You.

I'm slipping away

Like a sun to the tide

Floating into your arms

Falling in to your eyes

"I love you Sam" He said it. The first time jack had said those words was tonite. All of a sudden I need him so much I can't let go. He looks into my eyes as if he's reading my thoughts, "I always have Sam". "I Love you…Jack" I say it with hesitation in my voice and he can tell, "…but".

"Can we really be together Jack, is there a happy ever after for people like us…?" "There can be if we try, we'll find a way"

Everything about you so deep

I can't sleep

I can't think

I just think about the things that you do

I'm to lost in you

"We will."

Well? Any better? Lmk!

Right what does everyone think? Please review so I now how I'm doing! There will be another part based on Jacks P.O.V.