Dear Readers:
2 main points I got from your reviews is that:
1）My characters are too "Mary Sue" like.
2）My chapters are too clumped together, needs paragraph/spacing editing.
Well alright, I agree with you 100 on these points but here's to clarify that:
1) I do NOT have the files of the chapters on hand right now. Thus, I cannot edit the stories unless you want me to copy & paste the chapters from the web then edit it all by hand, which of course, I do not have the time or the effort for.
2) The chapters were perfectly fine and "symbol-less" with nice paragraph indents when I typed it out on Microsoft word. I have no clue why it turned out the way it did when posted up by Fanfiction dot net.
In conclusion I would gladly fix the problems in which all of you have specifically pointed out when I get back to my good old computer in which my files are secured. In the meantime, do you want me to delete my story to rid you all of the "eye dung" or should I leave my stories on (the way they are, for it cannot be helped right now) for other readers to enjoy until further notice?
Thank you all and might I remind you (ex. JOJO) that if you don't like my stories, please by all means, don't read it! But I don't really like people spitting in my face about how amateur my writing is, how unoriginal my plot is and how I've got my facts all wrong etc. If I remember correctly this is and so nothing has to be by the lines.Now please excuse me for my ranting. This is my first fiction after all, and it's a big dent in my ego.
Thank all those of you that liked my plot, gave me constructive criticism, without too much of your own comments just to hurt beginners like me….Thank you all!!! I hope I can improve my stories enough for you to like it!! D
-Anne Inspired