Ok It came to my ehhmmm attention that some readers arent happy with what Ive been writing so far, I want to let you know that HELLO!!! IM IN THE THIRD CHAPTER!!!!!
Another thing, I want to say, i love reviews I welcome them good and bad, though the bad has to be constructive not like the random anus one I got...One of my reviewers Inaelath was was quite cruel in her 'constructive critisism' and told me that my fanfiction was quite possibly one of the worst Legomancesshehad EVER stumbled across and that it is Dreadful, horrible, torture and that I should leave our fandom and ne'er return! now Id like to get one thing straight.Im only on my third chapter (second when she reviewed) so they have yet to even MEET Legolas two she complains about most of the people that write fanfiction not even reading the books I for one HAVE read all three plus the hobbit and I started the Simill. (though never finished it....hehehe)
Another review that really bothered me is of a girl complaining about me using her name.... and that she was deeply offended by me using the name Kelly...why in the hell would she be offended by that? She also said that there are far too many 'dropped into middle earth senarios' so why are you reading them? hmmmmmm? because you likes them!! thats why! lol
ok Im done ranting
As I said I love reviews (hint hint nudge nudge! . ) but honestly critic my work ok but dont say suck silly things in the reviews that other people read...
Love and Kisses! and the normal Disclaimer!
Of Parties and Rosies
Taking in the beauty of the shire she smiled. What a wonderful place this is.
Walking through the busiest part of the shire she felt the eyes of almost every passerby. Growing nervous she ducked into the pub. Looking about she saw Merry and Pippin, she then spotted a pretty hobbit behind the counter.
Could that be Rosie Cotton?
Looking up the girl caught her eye, smiled and motioned for her to come and sit. Breathing a sigh of relief Kelly walked over to the counter and sat down. Smiling over at the waitress she extended her hand.
"Hello my name's Kelly, I'm new round here"
"Well hello there, my name's Rosie, nice to meecha"
One hour passed to two and then three as the two chatted like old friends. Suddenly a voice called Kelly from their conversation.
"There you are!" Frodo exclaimed. "I've been looking for you everywhere! Oh hello Rosie!"
Rosie nodded her haid and then said she would see the both of them at the party. As Frodo and Kelly walked to the party they met up with Sam.
As the night wore on Rosie had Kelly up and dancing with her.
Wow! I never knew an old place like this could be this much fun!! Kelly giggled as Sam was pushed up to dance with Rosie, and then sat beside Frodo, he smiled at her and then they both turned to watch Sam and Rosie dance. After the whole Merry and Pippin stealing the firework, they listened to Bilbo's speech wait a minute! Isn't this where Bilbo she watched as her 'uncle' nervously fingered his pocket yup… looking over at Frodo she noticed that he saw it too. I can't stop this, I've GOT to stay out of it. Leaning over she whispered into Frodo's ear.
"I'll be right back" At his frown of confusion she explained "I ugh…have to use the loo" At his blank expression "to ugh relieve myself!" She said proud of herself for finding the right set of words. He nodded and turned his eyes back to his uncle. Kelly quickly stood and walked over to where Rosie sat. As she crossed the distance the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end. Frowning, she looked around to have her eyes clash with stormy, wise, gray eyes. They held heres with an intensity that made her shiver. Breathing deeply she was able to break eye contact, Shaking her head she made her way over to where Rosie was seated.
I hate those eyes! She swore silently. It's like he knows what I am.
Everyone around her suddenly gasped and a murmur broke out through the crowd. Looking around she realized that Bilbo had performed his vanishing act. She turned her eyes and watched as Gandalf quickly made his way back to the house.
As she stayed in the shadows she watched as people scurried by, whispering of the disappearance act flooded her ears. Some were worried, some didn't care, and others were happy. Looking around she realized that she had lost sight of Frodo. Frantically her eyes searched heads of hobbits. Where is he!? She screamed in her head. Stepping from the shadows she began to scan the crowd again.
Kelly gasped when she was pulled back into the shadow. Looking to her arm her eyes traveled up and arm to a Frodo.
"Come milady, Uncle Bilbo may be at the house." He said pulling her down the path to the house.
Crap Crap CRAP! What if Bilbo hasn't left yet?! Trying to stop herself from being pulled down the road "no!" Frodo turned around and looked at her queerly.
"he…he…he might be at the party!"
Frodo shook his head and turned to fully look at her.
"I've already looked all over there, there's something wrong, I can feel it" A light caught Kelly's eye, looking up she saw a tall man close a door. So Bilbo's already gone is he? She sighed and then put on a happy, enthusiastic face.
"Well then he must only be home! Come on, I'll race ya!" She said and then took off. Frodo laughed and then ran after her, catching up to her he jumped forward and grabbed her waist making them both tumble in the dusty road. Frodo smiled down at the girl under him.
"I'm going to win!" he said and then jumped up, racing to the gate he looked back and saw that Kelly was at his heals. Throwing open the gate he ran up the steps and threw open the door yelling "Uncle Bilbo?"
Kelly almost fell over him before she realized that he had stopped. She stepped around him as he bent over to pick something up off the floor. As she heard the crackled of the fire she looked into the 'living room; as she had dubbed it, to find Gandalf sitting there smoking his pipe, and mumbling to himself.
"He's gone hasn't he?" Frodo said from behind her. "He talked for so long about leaving. I didn't think that he's really do it"
As Frodo walked to Gandalf, Kelly slowly snuck out of the room. She silently listened as Gandalf left. Frodo suddenly turned and looked at her.
"What's wrong milady?" Frodo asked stepping toward her.
"Nothing" she said as she stepped out of the shadows. Yawning, she smiled down at him "Just a little tired s'all"
"Come let's retire then" Frodo said taking her arm in his. Leading her to his room "I shall sleep in Bilbo's room" he said as he motioned to the room across the hall "goodnight milady"
She glared at the title and then smiled, leaned down and kissed Frodo on the Forehead. "Good night Frodo" She walked into the room she shook her head and laughed. I'm going soft…
