A/N: Well, it doesn't seem like many people are interested in this story. I really think it is doing good. People were saying I was going way too fast in the plot, and I've tried to slow it down a bit. Perhaps too much? What do you guys who actually read think? Well, would any of you mind telling others about my story? I'd really like more people to read. Also, an elleth is a female elf, just to let you know.
Reviewers:
DramaQueen007: I'm sorry no one is reading your story. Barely anyone is reading mine, either. I feel like this story isn't good. I think it is, but maybe others don't. Do you like it?
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Disclaimer: I own none of the characters except Fonia, Cydrim, and Sylitae. All the rest are Tolkien's creations.
Chapter Eight
Heads turned as the prince and his date made their way towards the throne of his father. Fonia caught sight of her brothers out the corner of her eye, and saw their jaws drop. She looked up at Legolas, and feeling her gaze upon him, looked down at her and smiled. Fonia was filled with a confidence she never thought she had. She looked royal, the way she stood up so straight, the way she held her head up high, and the way she dressed and walked.
"I can't believe she didn't tell us," Elladan whispered to his brother.
"I can't believe he didn't tell us, let alone ask us for permission to ask our sister," Elrohir replied.
"I can't believe how right they look together," whispered Arwen, not aware that she was heard by her two brothers and Aragorn.
"They do look good together, don't they?" commented Aragorn quietly.
By then, Legolas and Fonia had reached King Thranduil. Thranduil nodded his head, and music proceeded to play. Legolas offered Fonia his hand.
"Will you grant me the pleasure of a dance?" He looked down at her with longing eyes.
"Oh, I don't...I couldn't..."
"But it is customary for the prince and his date to have the first dance, and I'd really like to share it with you." He had put his trance over her. She took his hand and allowed him to lead her out to the middle of the room. They began to dance, and more and more people began to join in. Fonia didn't even notice there were others around them. They danced song after song again, like they were in their own little world.
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"Legolas?" The two were jerked out of their world, and Legolas turned to meet the person talking to him.
"Aragorn?"
"It is so good to see you, my friend," replied Aragorn, placing a hand on his friend's shoulder.
"It has been too long." Legolas pulled his friend into a masculine hug, which involved patting each other on the back. "There is much to talk about."
"Yes, will you ladies excuse us?" asked Aragorn. Fonia and Arwen nodded. Legolas looked at Fonia apologetically, and was led off by Aragorn.
"You have to admit, it is quite clear you two were meant for each other," Arwen commented quietly after pulling her sister aside.
"Please, that is hardly an appropriate conversation to be having here. Besides, Legolas asked me here as a friend."
"At least you think he did. Have you ever taken into consideration all the elleths from Rivendell that Prince Legolas did not ask, let alone all the elleths from Lothlorien or Mirkwood? He asked you, out of all of those others. There must be something special he sees in you to ask you out of all the other elleths here to escort him." Arwen had gotten the best of her once again.
'What she says does make sense, like always,' Fonia thought to herself. "I need to get some fresh air." Fonia abruptly left her sister and the room. Once out of there, she quickly headed outside into the blackened forest surrounding the home of Legolas. Fonia just stood there, and her sense of time seemed to disappear. She didn't know how long she stood there, searching the blackness for answers to the many questions flooding her mind. She never found the answer she was looking for, for at that moment, a hand touched her shoulder, making her jump.
"I didn't mean to startle you," came the smooth voice of Legolas from behind her. She didn't turn around, but continued staring into the darkness of the forest. She thought she saw something just run through the blackness. Her ears became more alert, but she couldn't hear anything else. "Is something wrong?" asked Legolas, becoming worried.
"No, I just thought I...never mind..." she grew quiet as Legolas came closer to her and took her hand.
"Come, there is something I want to show to you." Fonia followed him without argument, and after a few minutes, the two came to a clearing. She looked up, expecting to see up into the trees, but instead saw the stars shining above her. She smiled in awe. Legolas looked at her and saw the stars twinkling in her eyes. Fonia looked back at him, now aware of how much closer Legolas was than when they first reached the clearing.
"Fonia, this has been one of the most wonderful nights of my life, and I'm glad you were sharing it with me."
"Really?"
"Yes."
Before she could say anything else, Legolas snaked his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. He slowly leaned in and placed a soft kiss upon her lips. He looked deep into her eyes, and saw the same longing that he had. This time, it was Fonia that made the first move. She kissed Legolas softly, and then Legolas took it one step further, deepening it. After a few minutes, they broke apart, both satisfied.
Legolas took a deep breath. "I have something important to ask you."
'Oh gosh,' she thought to herself. 'Is this what I have been expecting?'
"Fonia, will you..."
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A/N: Well, how did you like it? I know it probably wasn't long enough, but I'll have the next chapter up soon enough. Does anyone have a good idea for a summary? Just wondering. Maybe that would help captivate others...Please review! Thanks!
Elven at Heart
