Hey Guys! I'm back with a new chapter! Thanks to everyone who reviewed the first one. You really made my day, especially since I'm ill at the mo.
Now, nearly all of you complained about me using the dub names. So, I've decided to use the original names from now on since they are just stupid. I mean, 'Zeke?' What da hell were 4kids thinking?!
Anyway, I went over the first chapter and changed the names so that I use the original ones, and I corrected a few mistakes.
Now, lets get on with the fic!
'thoughts'
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Disclaimer: I do not own Shaman King, so do ask me to get you merchandise cause there seems to be a shortage here in the UK… However, I do own 'dark soul control'.
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Changes: A Yona fic
Chapter 2: Dark Soul Control
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"What so you want now Hao?" demanded Yoh
"The same thing I've always wanted," answered Hao calmly, "The Shaman King throne. Unfortunately, you're in the way, as usual."
"And what are you gonna do about it?" asked Yoh. He had a bad feeling about this.
"Simple. I'm gonna destroy you and your friends once and for all. You're life is gonna change forever brother, for once I'm done, life will never be the same again!"
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"Gotta…get…others…fast…"
Manta cycled faster and faster. He had to get back to the Asakura household, and fast. He knew Yoh was strong, but he wasn't strong enough to defeat Hao yet. He had to get the others so that they could help him.
'Hold on Yoh, I won't let you down!'
He quickened his pace when he saw Yoh's house in the distance.
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"You haven't got a chance against me Yoh," said Hao, smirking
"And why do you say that, Hao?"
"Because, dear brother, you have no weapon, no spirit, no friends to cheer you on. You're all alone, not to mention weak from your day's training and from when you ran to that ridiculous little shop today."
Yoh froze. So he was being watched.
"Yes, I was watching you. I have to say, it was pretty amusing watching you running to that silly old shop just to pick up a silly present for Anna. Now enough talking." Hao bought his hand up in front of his, and formed a fireball in his hand, "It's time to have a little fun!"
Hao launched the fireball at Yoh. Usually, Yoh was able to dodge this type of attack, but he was so weak today from his training, that he only just managed to jump out of the way in time. The fireball flew past his shoulder, burning him a little as it did.
"You're very slow today Yoh. What's wrong? Feeling tired and wanna go home? Well don't worry, this will all be over soon."
Yoh slowly got up, holding his injured shoulder with his hand. Hao was right, he didn't have a chance against him whilst he was on his own. He needed the others.
'Manta, where are you? Please hurry and get the others!'
Hao laughed as he watched Yoh trying to get to his feet. He put his hand behind his back, and formed another fireball, larger than the one he thrown before.
'Soon Yoh, you will no longer exist!'
He bought his hand out from behind his back, and fired the fireball at Yoh. Yoh looked up to see the fireball coming towards him, but it was too late. He couldn't dodge it. He yelled out in pain as the flames burned his skin.
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"What were you thinking Anna!" shouted Horo Horo.
The gang were all sitting in the dining room around the large circular table. Horo Horo was furious at Anna for making Yoh run around the city again and had caused another argument. And as usual, he was losing.
"You knew Yoh was tired!" he said, "and you go and make him run more laps? Why?!"
"Because I said so," said Anna in a calm voce, not even looking at Horo Horo. This answer just made Horo Horo even madder. He turned around to face the others.
"Come on guys, back me up here!"
Ren, Jun, Ryo, Tamao and the others just looked away from Horo Horo. They didn't want to get involved in this argument and get punished by Anna. Yes they thought that what Anna did to Yoh was cruel, but that was how Anna was. She only did it because she wanted to make Yoh strong. Horo Horo was just the only one who couldn't see that. Besides, Anna was scary, and who knows what she'd do to them if they went on Horo Horo's side.
Horo Horo, seeing as how no one would back him up, gave up and sat back down next to Tamao, who blushed slightly. The gang were all soon chatting away again, just like they had been before Horo Horo had made a scene.
Anna, not feeling like talking to anyone, looked down at her left hand. She was wearing the ring that Yoh had given her, her engagement ring. She sighed quietly as the thought of Yoh crept into her head.
'Maybe I was too hard on Yoh. He was tired from the training, and he did remember our anniversary. But he's gotta work. He has to learn that he has to become strong if he ever wants to become Shaman K-'
Anna froze. She felt something. No, she heard something. She had heard someone scream.
Yoh
Yoh had screamed
Yoh was in trouble!
Jun, who was sitting next to Anna, stopped talking. Anna had gone ghostly white, and wasn't moving.
"Anna, is something wrong?" she asked quietly
Before Anna could answer, someone rushed into the room. Everyone went silent and looked over at the door. It was Manta, and he looked like he'd run a mile.
"Hey Manta, what's wrong?" asked Tamao
Manta looked up, catching his breath.
"Hao is attacking Yoh!"
Anna dropped the cup she was holding as she ran out the room. It smashed on the floor, spilling it contents everywhere. The others soon followed her.
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Yoh was thrown against a tree from the force of another attack by Hao. He hit his back on the trunk, and fell to the ground. He couldn't get up. He was too weak. Hao had attacked him non-stop. He would stop at nothing to get what he wanted. This was it.
Hao walked over to where Yoh was lying on the ground. He stopped in front of him, his face showing nothing but evil. He picked the exhausted Yoh up by his shirt, and held him up against the tree with one hand, making sure that Yoh's feet weren't touch the ground. He held out his spare hand and formed another fireball. But this fireball was different from the other ones that he had thrown at Yoh. This one was black.
Yoh tried to struggle free, but it was no use. Hao was just too strong for him. He saw the black fireball in Hao's hand, and knew instantly…
…This was the end…
"You're lucky Yoh," said Hao, making the black ball bigger and more powerful, "you're going to be the guinea pig for a little experiment of mine. See this black fireball? This is going to change your life forever! Prepare to experience DARK SOUL CONTROL!"
Hao bought the black ball closer to Yoh. Yoh yelled out again as it connected with his chest. He felt the heat of the flames burn against his skin; he felt the evil enter his body; he felt himself being to lose consciousness.
Hao laughed as he forced dark soul control into Yoh's body. He laughed as he heard Yoh screaming in pain. He laughed as he felt Yoh become unconscious.
Once the last of the fireball had been entered in Yoh's body, he dropped his limp form to the ground. An evil smile appeared on his lips.
"Phase one is complete."
He took one last look at the unconscious Yoh, and disappeared, for he could hear voices approaching. And no sooner had he disappeared, Anna appeared. The others were right behind her.
Anna froze at the sight in front of her. Yoh was on the ground, not moving. He couldn't be…he can't be…Anna had to make sure.
She ran up to his body. She fell to her knees and placed his head on her lap. She checked his pulse.
He had a pulse, but it was very weak.
"Yoh, wake up, please!" she cried as others finally caught up wit her. They gasped at the sight in front of them. Tamao burst into tears and ran into Horo Horo's arms. Pirika doing the same but running into Ren's arms. Both were shocked at first, but once they got over it, they began to comfort the two girls. The rest of the gang could felt their eyes burn as the tears threatened to fall.
"How could this have happened?" asked a shocked Ryo
"It's my fault!" said Manta, "I wasn't fast enough. It's all my fault!"
"It's not your fault Lord Manta," said Amidamaru, who was replacing grief with anger "There is only one person to blame, and that is the devil child, Hao."
Anna said nothing, but let a single tear fall down her cheek. She looked down at Yoh's beaten body. It was covered in burns. There was one huge burn on his chest, where his heart was. What had Hao done to her Yoh?
'Yoh, please be OK. You can't leave me!'
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What is 'dark soul control'? Will Yoh be OK? What is Hao planning next? Find out in the next chapter.
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