The Person from Vegeta-sei

A/N:  This is my first story ever please tell me if it sucks and how I should redo it if it does if it doesn't suck than I am so happy and review, review, review!!!!!!!!!!!!

DISCLAIMER: Are you sure I have to do one of these *lawyer glares* okay! Okay!

CFAF: I *gasp*

Vegeta: get on with it stupid

CFAF: don't *gasp*

Vegeta: brat!

CFAF: *pulls away from death grip* well maybe if I could BREATHE!!!1

Vegeta: oh *cough, cough* sorry

CFAF: As I was trying to say I don't……own….Dragonball Z……….There I said it vegeta now get your hands off my neck so I can breathe………….air!!!!!!!

In the line for judgment millions of spirit clouds appeared directly after a group of ten-thousand had come through and Yemma and his helpers had been hoping for a lull. 

One orge came running and cried out in a high panicked voice "King Yemma! King Yemma!"

"What is it?" the oversized orge boomed.

"There are thousands of them, no millions!"  The orge started to break down and cry.

"What do you mean!" came the impatient answer.

"The Saiyans!" sobbed the orge "they're all dead!"

A horrified look passed the Kings face, he put his head on his hands and moaned "All the havoc, the violence, the destruction!" his eyes widened and he hit his head on the desk "The paperwork!"

The Saiyans were all enjoying their day on Vegeta-sei when suddenly a giant ki ball loomed above. The inhabitants stood shocked.  None of them saw the space pod that left from the other side of the planet.

            The person in the pod was crying for two reasons.  First she had escaped the destruction of the planet and she felt slightly guilty for she unlike many other servants liked saiyans.  Two she knew for certain the family she served was mostly dead.  Bardock died when he went to face a tyrant just after getting her in a space pod she never learned who he was.  Radditz was on a mission.  Kakarot was sent a mission as an infant.  Bardock's mate was killed on a mission months before.  Bardock's twin Turlis hadn't been seen for months and was assumed dead on a mission.  She had been lucky to find such a family.  They were kind even the bad-tempered Radditz.

Bardock's turn came very slowly.  He had time to reflect on his last moments. Standing up to Frieza and being completely overwhelmed.  At least my kids weren't on planet, and the brat got on that space pod.  "Bardock" a tired voice snapped.

"Uh," he was startled out of his thoughts, "yeah, what." 

"Don't get a smart mouth got it?"  Growled Yemma.

"I'm sorry sir."

"Well," Yemma said, "to your credit you are polite.  I am King Yemma.  You are a Saiyan.

"Ye," Bardock tried to get out but Yemma continued.

"Of course you are.  You seem to have been a less ruthless killer than the rest of your race, you didn't delight in bloodshed.  Plus you shaped up in your last couple of months and other than the killing thing you were a nice guy.  I am going to put you in a level of HFIL that you can work your way up, as a guard of sorts."

"Huh?" says Bardock.

"It means you are going to play guard to all the nice little spirits, who don't have bodies, like you will for the last act of bravery against Frieza, pick up their trash and such."

"I suppose it's better than completely down in HFIL, so I can get out of this somehow?"

"Well, you go to reforming and you move up according to your test scores."

crap thought Bardock I am stuck, I will never get out I like trouble too much……and I suck at tests 

"What are you smirking at? Get out I am busy!"

"But."

"But nothing. Out."

"I don't know where to go."

"Oh," Yemma blinked sheepishly, "follow that orge."

"Have a nice day, shorty, I mean King Yemma."

"BARDOCK!"