Disclaimers: Oh yeah, people! Note note: I DO NOT (notice the capital letters ^_^) own Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne. It belongs to the wonderful writer Arina Tanemura! _ Darn… I sure wish I did, then I'll be rich! XD
Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne Fanfic by Dora Ng a.k.a. pandabear234~Author's Note:
Heyz it's me! I cut off my talks with Fin-chan and I also did this in my other fanfics… it's just too troubling for me… and I'm sorry if I confused you with all the different scenes… It's sort of hard to do the action parts too… I really suck at it… Well like Fin said before…I need more reviews to be motivated… So hope to see ya soon!
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If my English is bad, sorry, it's not my top subject… ^.^;
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Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne fanfic
Divine Wind Princess,
Chapter Five: Competition…
The stars glitter up in the sky while Jeanne looks through her binoculars that she received from her party.
Jeanne squints her eyes a bit, "Took ya a while…"
Sindbad takes his binoculars out, "Shut up…"
Jeanne smiles and walks toward him, "Aww… Come on…"
Sindbad glares at her.
Jeanne then kisses him on the cheek, "It doesn't matter as long as you don't mess up now…" says as she smiles at him sweetly.
Sindbad calms down and smiles at her, "Thax; that was the right motivation. So anyways you have a plan?"
Jeanne winks, "Of course…"
Two bright shining lights fly towards them, and Access and Fin pop out.
"Jeanne!"
"Sindbad!"
Jeanne looks up at Fin, "Ok, the plan is for Fin and Access to use dummies that look exactly like us and jump through that window. That should keep the police busy long enough. It has worked many times before right?"
Sindbad agrees, "Yeah, let's just use that method again. I agree with it.
The two cute angels both nod after listening to their parts.
Jeanne then smiles, "Let's do this right!"
Sindbad smiles back, "Police probably haven't gotten any smarter anyways."
~Later
*BANG*
Glass from a window falls down from the overhead window on top of the building.
"IT'S JEANNE AND SINDBAD!!! EVERYONE, GET TO YOUR POSITIONS!"
Figures that look like Jeanne and Sindbad jump down. They start running toward the main hall where the piano is located.
All of the police officers run quickly to their positions.
One of the police officers walked to a young man and a younger female, "Detectives, Jeanne and Sindbad are doing exactly as you planned."
Detective Toudaiji Keiichi smiles, "Good. Everything is coming to plan right Lina?"
Detective Sakuma Lina smiles, "Yes, move to plan B."
The officer nod and salutes them, "Yes Detectives!"
~In the 1st hall…
Fin and Access are flying with figures that look like Jeanne and Sindbad.
Fin giggles as she sees the officers following close behind them.
Access talks into Fin's Petit Clare, "Sindbad, Jeanne; they are falling for the decoys…"
~On the roof
Jeanne talks into her Petit Clare, "Good we see you, we will be using the second hall to get to the concert hall. Meet ya later ^^."
Jeanne and Sindbad run down the hall…
Sindbad looks at Jeanne; Jeanne looks at him, "What's the matter?"
Sindbad shakes his head, "Just thinking; that's it's kinda strange that there's no one chasing us…"
Jeanne glances behind them, "You're right…something's not right…"
They both turn a corner and stop as they catch their breath.
Jeanne takes her Petit Clare out of her pocket and presses a button, "Fin!"
*Jeanne? *
Jeanne talks into the Petit Clare, "Where do Sindbad and I go now? There are two different hallways!"
*I'm really not sure…*
Jeanne frowns, "Okay I understand that part, but the police are still chasing after you two right?"
*Yea, they are…*
Jeanne blinks at Sindbad breathing heavily, "We have been running for quite awhile, and we haven't seen a single officer…"
*You two separate! Access and I are doing our best right now! Gotta go now! *
Jeanne sighs as she puts the Petit Clare back into her pocket.
Sindbad hold her hand, "Don't be so stressed… We will get this one."
Jeanne looks at him and smiles, "Sure."
Sindbad stands up still holding her hand, "Well let's get going."
Jeanne smiles as he pulls her up, "Why not?"
They both separate and take the two different routes…
~Somewhere else…
"… She's so pathetic…"
"Now… Now Mulan… I know she isn't what you expected her to be… but you shouldn't keep insulting her…"
Mulan glares at him and points to her mini pocket mirror, "Shang! Look at them! Can't they tell that they are running into a trap? Even we figured it out and took the easier way…"
Shang looks at the mirror, "Well you have a point…"
Mulan sighs, "Damn it Jeanne…"
^_^ OuTsIdE tAlK ^_^:
Well, this outside talk is going to be about our new kaitous/thieves! I couldn't think of any other good heroic people so I just chose Mulan… ^_^; Mulan was a warrior for China in the war against the Mongolians. The Mongolians were trying to take over China because of something with the weather? I know I'm Chinese but that doesn't mean that my history is all that good… _ I think Shang is a made up character? But I got it from the Disney movie! Check it out sometime…
~Back with Jeanne…
=Something is so not right… I've been running for quite a while…=
Jeanne squints her eyes when she suddenly sees a light ahead, =it's about time I saw something; I separated from Sindbad for quite a while= She finally reaches the light when she suddenly falls. "Ahhh!"
"WE CAUGHT JEANNE! CALL THE DETECTIVES THAT THE PLAN WAS SUCCESSFUL!"
Jeanne blinks and sees that she is in a hole, "Nani?" =What should I do? I'm surrounded by police officers… and the piano is right up there = She throws her ribbon up but when she tried to stand up, a sudden pain jolted through her ankle; she falls back down. =Ah… damn, I must've pulled something falling… where's Fin, Access, and Sindbad? =
Detective Keiichi and Lina came running in. Keiichi looks down into the hole, "Good job… Lina; you planned this well."
Lina smiles at him; "They don't call me genius at Harvard for nothing."
As Jeanne thinks about her problem, four pair of eyes continues to watch her…
"Shang; go save that twit…"
Shang looks at her and blinks, "Mulan? Are you sure you want me to?"
Mulan sighs and crosses her arms, "She stuck in there… Her two angels are no where near here, and her pathetic boyfriend is still in the maze…"
Shang gives her one more look and pulls his bandanna to cover the bottom potion of his face; he then jumps down, "Later…"
Mulan sits down on the ledge and stares at the piano with her arms still crossed, "Ling-Ling, Ming; you can come out now…"
Two balls of lights the size of volleyballs, one colored red and the other colored black came up behind Mulan and suddenly popped.
"You two haven't gotten yourselves found out yet, am I right?"
Ling-Ling pouts, "Now why would you think that?"
Ming taps Ling-Ling's shoulder, "Of course she would think that… we messed up several captures in Hong-Kong…"
Ling-Ling glares at him "Shut up…"
Mulan giggles, "Don't worry about you two, I was joking; but as long as you two don't go anywhere near their angels…"
Ming and Ling-Ling nod their little head, and then Ming asks, "Where's Shang?"
Mulan points down, "There…"
Shang jumps in front of the police, and bounces down towards Jeanne at an amazing speed and even the police didn't notice.
Shang lands behind Jeanne and Jeanne turns around, "Sindbad?" She covers her mouth with her hand.
Shang shakes his head, "Nope…"
Jeanne gasps with her eyes widen seeing it wasn't the usual white coat that Sindbad had, but it was a Japanese-style ninja outfit with a black cloth tied around his forehead and a cloth covering his nose and mouth, "Then who are you?"
Shang puts his hands on his hips, "I don't think that is important now, but don't you think you should make you getaway?"
Jeanne looks down and touches her ankle, "Unfortunately; I had a bad fall and it seems that I sprain my ankle… and um…"
Shang crosses his arms, "and you're asking me to help you right?"
Jeanne looks at him, "Would you?"
Shang sighs, "Whatever…"
He moves towards Jeanne and picks her up, "Hold on…"
Jeanne puts her arms around his neck, "Yea…"
Shang takes a deep breath =this is gonna be one heck of a jump…= He jumps sideways onto the wall to their former right and bounces off that wall. He continues to jump from side to side and finally reaches the top…
Mulan smiles as she sees Shang jump swiftly from side to side. Ling-Ling sits on her shoulder, "He's doing quite good isn't he?" Mulan gives a slight nod.
Ming sits on her other shoulder, "Way to go Shang!"
Jeanne blinks at Shang's speed and when they got out of the hole…
"JEANNE IS ESCAPING!"
Lina turns around and gasps, "What? Who is that?"
Keiichi shrugs at Lina, "I have no clue… Miyako and the team never mentioned him!"
Lina grits her teeth, "Damn… you police, get Jeanne and whoever that is!"
Sindbad gasps for air as he finally reaches the light; he gasps to see the police shooting nets up at a strange guy and Jeanne, "Jeanne!"
Two police officers look down and see him, he grits his teeth and starts bouncing around to dodge all of the nets. Shang notices Sindbad, =finally her prince charming is here…=. Jeanne opens her eyes, and as soon as she sees Sindbad; she shouts, "Sindbad!"
Sindbad looks up as he sees Shang suddenly jump over him, when suddenly Shang drops Jeanne abruptly. Sindbad quickly catches Jeanne and glares up at Shang. Shang just smirks at him and rapidly jumps and disappearing. Jeanne blinks and looks at Sindbad, "Thanks…"
Sindbad looks at her and shakes his head, "Not yet… Seal the demon!"
Jeanne takes the pin that came out of her rosary, "You demon born in darkness…"
Lina shouts at the policeman the were next to the piano, "Pull the curtain!"
Jeanne grits her teeth, "Damn…" She says to Sindbad, "I need the cloth of the piano…" Sindbad nods and stops jumping and lands on the ground.
Keiichi shouts at Jeanne and Sindbad as the police surround them, "You two are trapped, there's no point in resisting arrest…"
Mulan, Shang, Ling-Ling, and Ming continue to watch them. Mulan stands up, "Shang, I had enough of this show…"
Shang stands up, "It's about time you said that… I was getting bored too…"
Mulan's eyes look at the covered piano and drifts around the room developing at plan, "Shang, use your sword to cut off the cloth; I'll seal the demon… Ling-Ling, you catch the chess piece. Ming you follow Ling-Ling's lead…" She turns to look at the three, "Got it?" The three nod.
Sindbad puts Jeanne's legs down and helps Jeanne to stand up; he whispers in her ears, "Do you have a plan?"
Jeanne shakes her head, "Um…" but they suddenly see two figures jump out from the top ledge. Lina looks up, "Catch those two!"
Shang takes his sword out from his side and cuts the cloth a half. The figure in the red ninja-style skirt and boots hangs onto the overhead chandelier and shouts out, "You demon born in shadows of evil… I seal you here!"
She sends a pin flying towards the elegant baby grand piano. A dark light comes from the piano, and both the detectives and the police close their eyes in fear. Jeanne's eyes turn blank as she sees someone else seal the demon that she was aiming for.
Mulan falls purposely off the chandelier and Shang catches her, She cries, "Checkmate!"
The piano turns into a rogue chess piece and a ball of light catches it. Shang and Mulan land on the stage where the piano used to be.
The Detectives and police open their eyes and see Shang and Mulan.
Mulan winks at them but it was directed towards Jeanne, "Ja."
Sindbad and Mulan jump out of the window and disappear in the moonlight…
Jeanne's knees give out and she falls fainted; Sindbad catches her, "Jeanne!"
The policemen's eyes turn to the two of them. Keiichi shouts, "Catch them!"
Sindbad grits his teeth, and swoops Jeanne up. He jumps out of the opposing window from the one that Mulan and Shang used.
Lina sighs, "Damn…"
Keiichi pats her on the back, "Good job…"
Lina stares into the moonlight, "I know… but there's many more chances…"
~Outside…
"Maron… Maron…"
Maron opens her eyes to see Chiaki, Fin, and Access. She sits up on the bed and rubs her eyes, "Where am I?"
Chiaki smiles and pats her hand, "We're at my place…"
Maron blinks and sees that she was on his bed, "Oh…"
Fin flies and lands on her lap, "I'm sorry for not being there for you and Chiaki…"
Maron shakes her head, "It's okay… but it seems that we have some competition…"
Access nods, "But Fin and I have no clue who they are…"
Chiaki sighs and leans back on his chair, "yea, I thought this past half year was way to easy… the Demons have gotten so much easier to seal and the it just seemed so quiet…"
Maron looks out into the moonlight, "Yea…"
^^Author's Note^^
Heyz! So how was that? This has got to be the longest chapter I've written in this series… So I'm sure you are satisfied… The summer is ending so that means some of the fanfics that I'm writing will take longer to be updated… I'm sorry about that so forgive me… I also got to study for those darn SAT's … damn… I'm so afraid of failing… plz wish me luck^^ I will try to get the next through chapters up asap! It's gonna take me so much longer… oh wellz, good luck to you peoples too^^
^^dora-chan^^
