My first story ever. R&R
Chapter 1:
Northern reaches
Ivans diary
Tuesday.
We have been traveling
with Fleix for a while now. And since then, lots of things have
changed. For one, Isaac has started being a lot more social. He never
used to talk as much as he does now. The shock of everything that had
happened in the past 3 years of his life must have mentally scarred
him. He really doesnt like to talk about it. Jenna is always teasing
Garet. Yesterday, he was going to his cabin while eating a pie. He
kicked the door open as his hands were full. Then he got some gravy
on his shirt, so he tried to wipe it off. Then the door slamed in his
face and he got the whole pie over his shirt. Jenna was watching this
and she hasn't let him live it down since. She was telling everyone
at dinner. Garet, for the first time ever, didnt have dinner. Felix
is always being quiet now. Not that he ever said anything anyway.
Piers is always captaining the ship, so we only ever see him at meal
times on the ship. And then there is Sheba. I know her least out of
everybody. She knows herself least out of everybody. Thats why she is
on her journeyto find out about the past. Her main hope was the
Jupiter lighthouse and she didnt find any answers there. I want to
help her but.... well. Its hard to help somebody to find about their
past. Its like trying to survive drinking poison. Almost impossible.
Everyone would like to help her, but nobody can. Nobody.
According
to Piers, we should reach the northern reaches at sunset. 3 hours
from now. Three hours of boredom. Oh well. Might as well find
something to do.
Chapter one done. Did you like it. Please R&R. Ok, it was rubbish but I will try to do better next chapter.
Blitz: Whaaaaaaaaat!! How short was that?
Char: Way, way, way too short. More gore!
Meld: Needs more action. Now. Lights, camera, action!!!!!!!
Rime: Yay, a mystery fic! Update, update!!!!!
Purple: Where is short and annoying one?
White: I am right here. And my name is white. Update!