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My birthday eve today. 2mo I'll b 16 yea
Okay I'm not that good at writing story's as you can tell but I have some good ideas but I'm crap at writing them, so sorry if the story gets a bit confusing, I'm only me.
Chapter 7 It was you
As they stood round him, he slowly woke up,
"Tidus where is she?" asked Lulu
He rubbed the back off his head then moved his head to see where Yuna was sat, there was nothing there, he outstretched his hand, her screaming voice echoed inside his head, the anger rose inside him he balled up his fist and hit the ground, he slowly got up, and made his way to the opening in the trees.
'Seymour if you've hurt her in any way I'll kill you' thought Tidus
"Where are you going?" asked Riku
"Seymour's"
"It was Seymour, are you sure?" Questioned Lulu
He stormed off, not listening to anyone
===
Yuna awoke on the hard floor of the Zanakand dome.
"Your awake, I pictured you a bit stronger, you're so thin and weak" said a man in dark clothes.
"Who...who are you?" Said Yuna quietly
"I'm the great ruler of the fiends"
"There's no such thing"
"you are so young and naïve, and I full of wisdom of all the guardians and yu yevon"
"But that can't be, Sin's gone, gone for good my father defeated it."
"Are you sure"
Yuna stared at him, his eyes told her the truth,
"You... you your sin?"
"Sin in human form" he laughed
"Why do you want me?"
"You harness the power of your father, that power I will obtain, and control all the aeons"
"But the fayth's have gone, they vanished when you where defeated,"
"No, one remained also in human form but that person doesn't know it, you are the only one who can find it, and use it, and in turn I'll use you" he said laughing
Yuna quickly got up and tried to run for the exit.
"No use running little girl, I can control everything"
Flames rose around her forming a cage to hold her,
She stood up and shouted
"You'll never use me for anything, if you're so powerful then you don't need me!"
===
Tidus stormed off ahead of the group.
"Shouldn't we stop him?" said Wakka
"I'm not sure, what if he's right." Said Lulu
They all stopped and stared at her.
"What?" said lulu
"You .. you're not sure, I've never heard you say that" replied Wakka
"Well there's a first time for everything"
Wakka laughed.
"Thunder" said Lulu effortlessly,
A small thunder bolt came out of the sky and hit Wakka
"Ouch wha where tha for?"
"I just felt like it" replied Lulu.
They caught up with Tidus. As they entered Guadosalme they saw Seymour consulting the Guado, Tidus stormed right up to him.
Smack Tidus hit him square in the face, Seymour took a couple of steps back, Tidus walked up to him
"WHERE IS SHE!" he shouted at her, the Guado gathered around Seymour, forming a barrier,
"No it's okay, you are dismissed" said Seymour to the Guado. They left looking disgracefully at Tidus, but still Tidus did not remove his gaze from Seymour
"Who are you wanting?" questioned Seymour
"You know who. Stop acting dumb"
"Ahhh you are wanting the fair Lady Yuna," he laughed a small laugh "She is not her, we left on good parting yesterday, and I've not seen her since. So she chose you, what a protector you've turned into"
Tidus was ready to punch him again Rikku noticed this
"Ummm.. Tidus maybe he's telling the truth, maybe he doesn't know where she is" Tidus turned to look at her.
Riku took a step away from him, he had a strong fire burning in his eyes that scared her a bit.
"If you wish I could send a search party to find her"
"No thank you we'll find her" said Lulu trying to calm the situation
"Whatever you wish, I'm always here" he said with a grin on his face "Well I better be getting back to business" he said rubbing his jaw
"yes" replied Lulu, beckoning everyone to follow her
Kimahri had to physically drag, Tidus away.
"That guys such a creep" said Rikku under her breath so only her friends could hear.
===
Sin walked up to Yuna, he walked through the flames that licked at his clothing but didn't hurt him in any way.
"You will do my bidding."
"N.." the rest of the words couldn't form in her mouth, she had been paralysed, her eyes raced round in their sockets, in fear of not being able to move.
"Now you will tell me who it is." He laid his hand on her head, instantly her eyes closed she could see the whole of Spira from a birds eye view. Then she zoomed down to the land, her mind was frantically racing passed people, she could feel the strength of the Fayth growing and growing. Then she saw who it was.
Sin staggered back in pain, his hand surging with blood.
Yuna fell to the floor in shock and pain,
"Who was it, TELL ME"
"What you didn't see, well who say's I'm going to tell you! I'll die before I tell you."
He shouted in anger,
"IF YOU WANT IT THAT WAY!"
Yuna was dragged to a cell by fiends. She fell to the floor weak and scared
====
Well that's the end of that chapter, quiet short hope you like it.
ummm your probably gonna hate me now because this story won't be updated for another week and a half, cos I'm goin on my hols. Sorry but keep reviewing, and I'll let you shout at me if that makes you feel any better.
Faithxxx c ya all soon
(suoivbo tib a sit)
My birthday eve today. 2mo I'll b 16 yea
Okay I'm not that good at writing story's as you can tell but I have some good ideas but I'm crap at writing them, so sorry if the story gets a bit confusing, I'm only me.
Chapter 7 It was you
As they stood round him, he slowly woke up,
"Tidus where is she?" asked Lulu
He rubbed the back off his head then moved his head to see where Yuna was sat, there was nothing there, he outstretched his hand, her screaming voice echoed inside his head, the anger rose inside him he balled up his fist and hit the ground, he slowly got up, and made his way to the opening in the trees.
'Seymour if you've hurt her in any way I'll kill you' thought Tidus
"Where are you going?" asked Riku
"Seymour's"
"It was Seymour, are you sure?" Questioned Lulu
He stormed off, not listening to anyone
===
Yuna awoke on the hard floor of the Zanakand dome.
"Your awake, I pictured you a bit stronger, you're so thin and weak" said a man in dark clothes.
"Who...who are you?" Said Yuna quietly
"I'm the great ruler of the fiends"
"There's no such thing"
"you are so young and naïve, and I full of wisdom of all the guardians and yu yevon"
"But that can't be, Sin's gone, gone for good my father defeated it."
"Are you sure"
Yuna stared at him, his eyes told her the truth,
"You... you your sin?"
"Sin in human form" he laughed
"Why do you want me?"
"You harness the power of your father, that power I will obtain, and control all the aeons"
"But the fayth's have gone, they vanished when you where defeated,"
"No, one remained also in human form but that person doesn't know it, you are the only one who can find it, and use it, and in turn I'll use you" he said laughing
Yuna quickly got up and tried to run for the exit.
"No use running little girl, I can control everything"
Flames rose around her forming a cage to hold her,
She stood up and shouted
"You'll never use me for anything, if you're so powerful then you don't need me!"
===
Tidus stormed off ahead of the group.
"Shouldn't we stop him?" said Wakka
"I'm not sure, what if he's right." Said Lulu
They all stopped and stared at her.
"What?" said lulu
"You .. you're not sure, I've never heard you say that" replied Wakka
"Well there's a first time for everything"
Wakka laughed.
"Thunder" said Lulu effortlessly,
A small thunder bolt came out of the sky and hit Wakka
"Ouch wha where tha for?"
"I just felt like it" replied Lulu.
They caught up with Tidus. As they entered Guadosalme they saw Seymour consulting the Guado, Tidus stormed right up to him.
Smack Tidus hit him square in the face, Seymour took a couple of steps back, Tidus walked up to him
"WHERE IS SHE!" he shouted at her, the Guado gathered around Seymour, forming a barrier,
"No it's okay, you are dismissed" said Seymour to the Guado. They left looking disgracefully at Tidus, but still Tidus did not remove his gaze from Seymour
"Who are you wanting?" questioned Seymour
"You know who. Stop acting dumb"
"Ahhh you are wanting the fair Lady Yuna," he laughed a small laugh "She is not her, we left on good parting yesterday, and I've not seen her since. So she chose you, what a protector you've turned into"
Tidus was ready to punch him again Rikku noticed this
"Ummm.. Tidus maybe he's telling the truth, maybe he doesn't know where she is" Tidus turned to look at her.
Riku took a step away from him, he had a strong fire burning in his eyes that scared her a bit.
"If you wish I could send a search party to find her"
"No thank you we'll find her" said Lulu trying to calm the situation
"Whatever you wish, I'm always here" he said with a grin on his face "Well I better be getting back to business" he said rubbing his jaw
"yes" replied Lulu, beckoning everyone to follow her
Kimahri had to physically drag, Tidus away.
"That guys such a creep" said Rikku under her breath so only her friends could hear.
===
Sin walked up to Yuna, he walked through the flames that licked at his clothing but didn't hurt him in any way.
"You will do my bidding."
"N.." the rest of the words couldn't form in her mouth, she had been paralysed, her eyes raced round in their sockets, in fear of not being able to move.
"Now you will tell me who it is." He laid his hand on her head, instantly her eyes closed she could see the whole of Spira from a birds eye view. Then she zoomed down to the land, her mind was frantically racing passed people, she could feel the strength of the Fayth growing and growing. Then she saw who it was.
Sin staggered back in pain, his hand surging with blood.
Yuna fell to the floor in shock and pain,
"Who was it, TELL ME"
"What you didn't see, well who say's I'm going to tell you! I'll die before I tell you."
He shouted in anger,
"IF YOU WANT IT THAT WAY!"
Yuna was dragged to a cell by fiends. She fell to the floor weak and scared
====
Well that's the end of that chapter, quiet short hope you like it.
ummm your probably gonna hate me now because this story won't be updated for another week and a half, cos I'm goin on my hols. Sorry but keep reviewing, and I'll let you shout at me if that makes you feel any better.
Faithxxx c ya all soon
(suoivbo tib a sit)