Hey all I'm back, I know I wasn't gone long but whatever. So here is the
next chapter of Moon Sisters and to remind you I am bashing NO characters,
if I seem like I am I totally did not mean to! In this story I try to make
Raye more emotional, because in the Anime she never really showed her
feelings that much, I thought so at least. I made her a bit more
vulnerable also, in other words, she cries a lot. Not as much as Serena,
but more than she did in the show. The next chapter I will introduce my
first original character, just to let you know. To remind you again, I
wrote this when I was in 7th grade so be gentle. AND R&R!!!!!
Disclaimer: ME NO OWN!!!!
Moon Sisters
Chapter 2
Rekindling Old Flames
The next morning I put Darien's "gift" on, but slipped it under my shirt to hide it from prying eyes. I waved goodbye to grandpa while walking backwards. I was just about to turn around when...CRASH!! My books and papers flew everywhere. I rubbed my head in anger
"Hey watch where you're..." I faded off as I got a good look at who I ran into" ...going." It was Darien. He crouched down next to me and helped me gather my books together,
"Oh sorry about that," he blushed as he helped me up with his left hand and held my books in the crook of his right elbow, "I was coming to, uh, apologize about sending Andrew to give you the... you know what... yesterday instead of bringing it myself."
"It's okay," I felt the chain against my neck and pulled on it with my left index finger and caught the charm in the palm of my left palm, "I really love it." I smiled at him. He smiled back, while blushing and still holding my hand,
"Darien..." He grinned excitedly,
"Yes Raye?" I let out a sigh,
"You can let go of my hand now."
"Oh sorry." He let go of my hand quickly and ran that hand through his ebony hair, I could tell he was embarrassed. He looked to his right and I looked to my right and left then our eyes locked again and I said,
"Well, it was nice seeing you."
"Ya," he said," here's your books" he handed me my books.
"Well bye," I smiled.
"Ya, bye." he said while walking down the steps I watched until he was out of site. Then I sighed and skipped down the steps and then towards school.
*****
I ran into Lita and Mina on the way to school,
"Hey!" I ran up to meet them.
"Hi," they said in unison then Mina continued, "Hey Raye where did you get that necklace?" Oh no, when I showed Darien that I was wearing it I forgot to hide it back underneath my shirt. Lita and I looked at each other in panic. Then we both smiled and I shakily said,
"Grandpa said it was, ah, an old heirloom, ya, an old heirloom." She smiled believing the whole thing,
"Wow! It's really pretty." I hated lying to her. I saw the gates of my school and sighed relived that we were finally there,
"Well this is my stop," I said, "See ya later."
"Bye Raye," Mina waved, along with Lita, and Mina continued, "We'll se ya after school!" As soon as they were gone from view I slipped the necklace underneath my shirt to avoid any more questions.
All day at school I kept seeing Darien's cute face blushing, just like when Andrew sees Lita. It was a dream come true.
*****
When I walked outside Darien was standing right by the gate grinning right at me. I walked up to him and he said,
"Hey."
"Hi," I paused," what are you doing here?" He looked over towards his car and said,
"I was wondering if you wanted a ride home." He looked back at me and showed those perfect teeth that turned my legs into gelatin. I was about to say yes when I saw Mina and Lita coming to see me. I was in a panic and mumbled,
"Oh no."
"Raye, what's wrong." Darien put his soft hand on my cheek. I pushed it away and turned around,
"Darien you should leave, now."
"Why Raye," he paused, "Tell me what's wrong." I knew if I didn't get him to leave now Mina would see him. I looked to my left and saw Lita trying to stall Mina. I had to do something quick. I hated to do this. I whipped around and screamed,
"Darien I told you to leave now!" I shoved him and he fell on the hard cement, "go!" He was in shock and I could see the pain in his beautiful blue eyes that once held love for me. He stood up and brushed himself off,
"Fine Raye, I'll leave," He started to yell, "I'll never come back to see you at your school or temple ever again!" He stormed to his car and drove off enraged. Just then Lita and Mina came up to the gate and Mina said,
"Hi Raye." I looked at her then at Darien's empty parking space then back at her and burst into tears. I dropped my books and collapsed to my knees. I buried my face in my hands. Lita went down next to me and set her books down. She put her hands on my shoulders and she could tell what happened,
"Oh Raye, I'm so sorry." She hugged my and mouthed to Mina 'Go get Andrew.' She then ran off to the Arcade where Andrew worked. Lita watched until Mina was out of sight and she separated my hands from my face,
"Raye what did he say?" I tried to hold back my tears so I could tell her,
"He {sob} told me that {sob} he would never {sob} come to see me again." I broke down into tears again, then I tried to continue, "The reason {sob} why he said that was {sob} because {sob} when I saw you {sob} coming I told {sob} him to leave {sob} and when {sob} he didn't {sob} I pushed him {sob} and I {sob} hurt him." I buried my face in my hands again. Lita hugged me until Andrew came. He kneeled down next to me and Lita let him give me a hug. He helped me stand up and he whispered in my ear,
"I'll take you home and then you can tell me about it there." I held back my tears for a moment to nod. He kept on arm around me all the way home.
*****
When we reached the steps of my house Andrew helped me sit down and sat down next to me with one arm still around me. I noticed the faded ketchup stain from where Serena accidentally squirted him with ketchup when she had a crush on him. His caring eyes looked into mine,
"Raye what happened," he paused, "do you think you can talk about it?" He wiped the tears from my eyes, looked at me and smiled. I stopped crying all together and smiled back. I told him the whole story then told him,
"I do love Darien, but I don't know how to tell Mina, Amy, and Serena about it." Andrew thought for a moment then said,
"What about Lita." He blushed. I smiled,
"I already told her, she's my best friend and you're my best guy friend so I trust you too."
"Well the only advice I have for you is to tell Mina, she's trustworthy, but don't tell Amy or Serena. Amy would give you a big technical speech about how wrong it is and Serena, well," he rubbed the back of his neck, "She would freak out." we both laughed and Andrew stood up, stood in front of me and cupped my hands in his,
"Are you going to be okay?" I nodded and he continued, "Okay, well, I got to get back to work, bye." He left and I waved goodbye and I thought 'He and Lita are perfect for each other.' I bit my lower lip in excitement.
"Hey Raye." I knew that voice. I turned around to a guy with messed up sort of long brown hair. His bangs covered his blue eyes, I scowled and said,
"Chad! Were you here the whole time!" He had the hugest crush on me,
"No," he paused, "but who was that guy you were talking to?" He is very protective of me.
"It was Andrew. remember, he's my best friend," I was getting annoyed with his protective attitude, "Chad will you just leave me alone, I'm not in the mood for an interrogation." He looked at his feet and I could tell I hurt his feelings. I stood up and put my hands on his shoulders,
"Chad, I'm sorry, it's just I'm having a bad day and I just want to be alone for a little while. Okay?" He looked back at me and smiled,
"Sure Raye, just tell me if you want someone to talk to." I nodded and he walked back to his room.
I sat back down on the porch and thought about what to tell Darien until the sun went down. I couldn't think straight, all I saw over and over was Darien's hurt face while he was sitting on the cement. I started to cry in my lap again. Suddenly I saw white sneakers and saw the bottom of gray sweatpants. I thought to myself 'Could it be? 'I slowly looked up, it was Darien. I jumped up and wiped the tears from my eyes and said,
"Welcome to the Cherry Hill Temple, how may I help you?"
"Well, I'd like to have a karate lesson from the master," he put his hands together and bowed, "you." I was confused of why Darien thought that I, me, Raye was "The Master."
"Well actually, I'm not that good, maybe you should ask Grandpa or Chad or..." He put his left hand on the column that my back was to and I looked into the ice blue pools that he had for eyes,
"No, I want the lesson from you." I didn't think that Darien actually wanted a lesson, I think that he wanted to patch up our relationship. I was going to let him know.
I leaned closer to him and he did the same, I shut my eyes and I think he did too, and our lips met. I wrapped my arms around his neck and he picked me up by my waist and spun me around. When we separated we were both out of breath, he set me down, and I gripped his waist and he held me. I didn't want this moment to end, because I knew our relationship was fixed and I felt safe.
I know sappy, but hey this fic is gonna be quite sappy at parts. Also some people have told me that I would be good at writing for a soap opera, so if anything that happens seems kinda soap operaish just ignore it, but don't worry it's nothing like "I just found out I am pregnant with my boss' chile, who I just found out is my long-lost twin brother I never knew about." (ew, gross I know, but some are like that!) SO no worries! Also R&R!!!!!!!!
PR
Disclaimer: ME NO OWN!!!!
Moon Sisters
Chapter 2
Rekindling Old Flames
The next morning I put Darien's "gift" on, but slipped it under my shirt to hide it from prying eyes. I waved goodbye to grandpa while walking backwards. I was just about to turn around when...CRASH!! My books and papers flew everywhere. I rubbed my head in anger
"Hey watch where you're..." I faded off as I got a good look at who I ran into" ...going." It was Darien. He crouched down next to me and helped me gather my books together,
"Oh sorry about that," he blushed as he helped me up with his left hand and held my books in the crook of his right elbow, "I was coming to, uh, apologize about sending Andrew to give you the... you know what... yesterday instead of bringing it myself."
"It's okay," I felt the chain against my neck and pulled on it with my left index finger and caught the charm in the palm of my left palm, "I really love it." I smiled at him. He smiled back, while blushing and still holding my hand,
"Darien..." He grinned excitedly,
"Yes Raye?" I let out a sigh,
"You can let go of my hand now."
"Oh sorry." He let go of my hand quickly and ran that hand through his ebony hair, I could tell he was embarrassed. He looked to his right and I looked to my right and left then our eyes locked again and I said,
"Well, it was nice seeing you."
"Ya," he said," here's your books" he handed me my books.
"Well bye," I smiled.
"Ya, bye." he said while walking down the steps I watched until he was out of site. Then I sighed and skipped down the steps and then towards school.
*****
I ran into Lita and Mina on the way to school,
"Hey!" I ran up to meet them.
"Hi," they said in unison then Mina continued, "Hey Raye where did you get that necklace?" Oh no, when I showed Darien that I was wearing it I forgot to hide it back underneath my shirt. Lita and I looked at each other in panic. Then we both smiled and I shakily said,
"Grandpa said it was, ah, an old heirloom, ya, an old heirloom." She smiled believing the whole thing,
"Wow! It's really pretty." I hated lying to her. I saw the gates of my school and sighed relived that we were finally there,
"Well this is my stop," I said, "See ya later."
"Bye Raye," Mina waved, along with Lita, and Mina continued, "We'll se ya after school!" As soon as they were gone from view I slipped the necklace underneath my shirt to avoid any more questions.
All day at school I kept seeing Darien's cute face blushing, just like when Andrew sees Lita. It was a dream come true.
*****
When I walked outside Darien was standing right by the gate grinning right at me. I walked up to him and he said,
"Hey."
"Hi," I paused," what are you doing here?" He looked over towards his car and said,
"I was wondering if you wanted a ride home." He looked back at me and showed those perfect teeth that turned my legs into gelatin. I was about to say yes when I saw Mina and Lita coming to see me. I was in a panic and mumbled,
"Oh no."
"Raye, what's wrong." Darien put his soft hand on my cheek. I pushed it away and turned around,
"Darien you should leave, now."
"Why Raye," he paused, "Tell me what's wrong." I knew if I didn't get him to leave now Mina would see him. I looked to my left and saw Lita trying to stall Mina. I had to do something quick. I hated to do this. I whipped around and screamed,
"Darien I told you to leave now!" I shoved him and he fell on the hard cement, "go!" He was in shock and I could see the pain in his beautiful blue eyes that once held love for me. He stood up and brushed himself off,
"Fine Raye, I'll leave," He started to yell, "I'll never come back to see you at your school or temple ever again!" He stormed to his car and drove off enraged. Just then Lita and Mina came up to the gate and Mina said,
"Hi Raye." I looked at her then at Darien's empty parking space then back at her and burst into tears. I dropped my books and collapsed to my knees. I buried my face in my hands. Lita went down next to me and set her books down. She put her hands on my shoulders and she could tell what happened,
"Oh Raye, I'm so sorry." She hugged my and mouthed to Mina 'Go get Andrew.' She then ran off to the Arcade where Andrew worked. Lita watched until Mina was out of sight and she separated my hands from my face,
"Raye what did he say?" I tried to hold back my tears so I could tell her,
"He {sob} told me that {sob} he would never {sob} come to see me again." I broke down into tears again, then I tried to continue, "The reason {sob} why he said that was {sob} because {sob} when I saw you {sob} coming I told {sob} him to leave {sob} and when {sob} he didn't {sob} I pushed him {sob} and I {sob} hurt him." I buried my face in my hands again. Lita hugged me until Andrew came. He kneeled down next to me and Lita let him give me a hug. He helped me stand up and he whispered in my ear,
"I'll take you home and then you can tell me about it there." I held back my tears for a moment to nod. He kept on arm around me all the way home.
*****
When we reached the steps of my house Andrew helped me sit down and sat down next to me with one arm still around me. I noticed the faded ketchup stain from where Serena accidentally squirted him with ketchup when she had a crush on him. His caring eyes looked into mine,
"Raye what happened," he paused, "do you think you can talk about it?" He wiped the tears from my eyes, looked at me and smiled. I stopped crying all together and smiled back. I told him the whole story then told him,
"I do love Darien, but I don't know how to tell Mina, Amy, and Serena about it." Andrew thought for a moment then said,
"What about Lita." He blushed. I smiled,
"I already told her, she's my best friend and you're my best guy friend so I trust you too."
"Well the only advice I have for you is to tell Mina, she's trustworthy, but don't tell Amy or Serena. Amy would give you a big technical speech about how wrong it is and Serena, well," he rubbed the back of his neck, "She would freak out." we both laughed and Andrew stood up, stood in front of me and cupped my hands in his,
"Are you going to be okay?" I nodded and he continued, "Okay, well, I got to get back to work, bye." He left and I waved goodbye and I thought 'He and Lita are perfect for each other.' I bit my lower lip in excitement.
"Hey Raye." I knew that voice. I turned around to a guy with messed up sort of long brown hair. His bangs covered his blue eyes, I scowled and said,
"Chad! Were you here the whole time!" He had the hugest crush on me,
"No," he paused, "but who was that guy you were talking to?" He is very protective of me.
"It was Andrew. remember, he's my best friend," I was getting annoyed with his protective attitude, "Chad will you just leave me alone, I'm not in the mood for an interrogation." He looked at his feet and I could tell I hurt his feelings. I stood up and put my hands on his shoulders,
"Chad, I'm sorry, it's just I'm having a bad day and I just want to be alone for a little while. Okay?" He looked back at me and smiled,
"Sure Raye, just tell me if you want someone to talk to." I nodded and he walked back to his room.
I sat back down on the porch and thought about what to tell Darien until the sun went down. I couldn't think straight, all I saw over and over was Darien's hurt face while he was sitting on the cement. I started to cry in my lap again. Suddenly I saw white sneakers and saw the bottom of gray sweatpants. I thought to myself 'Could it be? 'I slowly looked up, it was Darien. I jumped up and wiped the tears from my eyes and said,
"Welcome to the Cherry Hill Temple, how may I help you?"
"Well, I'd like to have a karate lesson from the master," he put his hands together and bowed, "you." I was confused of why Darien thought that I, me, Raye was "The Master."
"Well actually, I'm not that good, maybe you should ask Grandpa or Chad or..." He put his left hand on the column that my back was to and I looked into the ice blue pools that he had for eyes,
"No, I want the lesson from you." I didn't think that Darien actually wanted a lesson, I think that he wanted to patch up our relationship. I was going to let him know.
I leaned closer to him and he did the same, I shut my eyes and I think he did too, and our lips met. I wrapped my arms around his neck and he picked me up by my waist and spun me around. When we separated we were both out of breath, he set me down, and I gripped his waist and he held me. I didn't want this moment to end, because I knew our relationship was fixed and I felt safe.
I know sappy, but hey this fic is gonna be quite sappy at parts. Also some people have told me that I would be good at writing for a soap opera, so if anything that happens seems kinda soap operaish just ignore it, but don't worry it's nothing like "I just found out I am pregnant with my boss' chile, who I just found out is my long-lost twin brother I never knew about." (ew, gross I know, but some are like that!) SO no worries! Also R&R!!!!!!!!
PR