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Hermione's Return
Hermione had been missing for over a year. It was now nearing the beginning of the 7th year, August 30th; actually, after she got out of the train after her 5th year, Voldemort's followers took her. She was scared as she gazed up at Voldemort's face; she remembered how he tried to break into her mind, steel thoughts, and things about her close friend Harry Potter. When he couldn't get to her mind, which was every time he tried, he tortured her, Cruciastus being his favorite. But not once did she relent her mind to the dark lord. He placed upon her a special type of dark mark, and evil mark, not showing that she was a follower of him, but more of a control over her. He used the dark mark to control Hermione, to keep her away from Harry Potter. But that one night, August 30th, rainy, and cold, she escaped from his clutches, broke from the charm that concealed her mind. And she ran, ran to the only place possible that was close enough for her to reach, even in her very weakened state. She ran to the Burrow. Hermione looked behind her as her weak, thin body limped up the driveway to the towering burrow. Her cloak concealed her, as its blackness matched the dark scenery. 'I hhope they are awake. I hope they will be home' she thought as she clutched her arm, it burned slightly. Her memories went to Ron, they had had one date, In fact the one date was the day before she went missing and it was the best day of her life. She wondered if Ron still loved her. She pulled her hood on and continued her way to the house.
She knocked on the door and groaned. Obviously Voldemort wished her in his presence to try to fight and break the barrier in her mind. She knocked again and began to shiver. "I'm coming, I'm coming!!! Give me a moment!" A boy yelled, he had a deep voice. When he opened the door, Hermione looked him over. He had gotten taller after she had been taken, he had a deeper voice and if possible even more freckles. " How are you? Bloody Hell is that you Hermione?" He asked as she raised her head and tried to talk. Ron looked into her eyes and saw hurt and pain. "Where were you? Mom, you will never believed who is here!" he yelled as his mom bustled out from the steps. "Now I thought I told you to stop making those stupid treats!!!" She yelled to George and Fred. When she looked at the guest her face dropped. "Everyone come here. She's back, she's come back. Hurry up! Come on dear lets get you inside and fixed up!" he yelled as she helped the limping Hermione into the house as Rom shut the door, still amazed.
Harry and the other Weasley's came downstairs. Harry was at the back of the line talking with Ginny, but then stopped as he looked up. Everyone had parted and he was looking into the eyes of a familiar face, but you could only see her eyes, as the rest of her body was covered but a midnight black cloak. She was battered and bruised from Voldemort's punishment but would never tell anyone of it. No madder how bad she hurt… she felt it slip away as she saw her friends faces. "Hermione is that you?" Fred asked shocked. "Hello Harry, Ginny, Fred, George, Mr. Weasley. I have missed you all so much! " She took a step and then all was blacked out. Ron caught her before she hit the floor. He picked her up and took her to the couch in the living room. " Ginny please go and get me some of my clothes that are too big for you! Fred and George go get some water, ice, and some washcloths. Ron and Harry go get some pillow and blankets. Clear this living room out. We shall all spend the night in here until morning or until she wakes up. " Mrs. Weasley demanded pointing to each one as she instructed them on what to do. "Yes ma'am" they all said as they went off in different directions. When they got back they set up their stuff and all laid down. Mrs. Weasley gave her some water and she almost chocked on it. After that she froze and sat still. She fell unconscious. "Now you all get to sleep. Tomorrow I will call her parents and we will go get her school supplies. We must inform Dumbledore as well. For now all you go to sleep. I will awake you when she wakes up!" Mrs. Weasley whispered as everyone fell to sleep. She tried to pull Hermione's hood off, but for some reason, she could not.
Harry and Ron were off in the corner and were sitting talking to each other quietly. "What shall we tell her first? That Neville is going out with Ginny? That Fat pig Pansy is going out with Draco although that is not much of a shock. You have a crush on… never mind!" Ron said stopping. "Lets just let her talk and ask the questions first. We will answer them as best we can." Harry whispered. "Good point!" Ron said. "I'm just glad that she is back." They whispered in unexpected unison 'Now I cannot wait to finally tell her how I really feel.' Run and Harry thought to themselves, unawere that they were thinking the same thing. "Well let's get to sleep." Harry whispered rolling over to face the other direction. He faced Mrs. Weasley tending to Hermione. "Good night all of you!" Mrs. Weasley whispered as she fell asleep. "Good night" the echoed.
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