The Fateful Hero, Smeagol

By OFK

One little ring changed me

It gave me power, long life,

And mysterious invisibility

How I gained it was indeed a feat

My dear friend, on my birthday,

Surrendered his life and my treat

Oh! It pained me for quite a while!

I was an outcast, tormented, alone

But at last, I endured its long trial

Lurking in dark caves, I lost my true name

The way my birthday gift changed me

Piled me high with guilt and shame

This lasting cough became my new title

"Gollum! Gollum!" I would sputter in the dark

My precious, my beautiful ring, was all that was vital

I had no need for friends, for company

Fish, goblins, and any prey worth my time

Were the only ones who were there for me

I can't recall how long I remained that way

I had lost the memories of light, of warmth,

And the sunshine of day

I had come across a strange little creature

Half the size of a normal man

But still had all the same features

He challenged me to a contest

One that would be simple for me to win, I thought

The subject of it was my best

We recited riddles, taking turns

I would give him my best

But he would give me his worst

He succeeded to puzzle my mind

Much to my dismay

It was my precious I couldn't find

He stole it, that nasty hobbit!

He took my precious away!

I had to chase him down for it!

I wandered far and wide in pursuit of him

He had long been gone, and I was caught

By dreadful creatures who tortured on whim

They demanded his name or I would die

So I told those vile beings all I knew

Even though I didn't know why

I was told that his heir received my ring

So I followed him and his fat little friend

To see what they would bring

It was true! He had my present!

Frodo, the heir, had it on a chain

It was him who I started to resent

I had to have it back!

My beautiful gift, my precious!

I wanted to plan an attack

It was when he found me, he said something strange

I couldn't recall what he was saying

But it sounded like an old name

"Smeagol," he called me then

It was the name I lost so long ago!

Oh, how long it has been!

Smeagol, my brighter side, came out at last

Gollum only became a shadow

Frodo made me a friend, not an outcast

I heard what they were planning on

Destroying my precious ring

Middle earth would be safe as soon as it was gone

Smeagol wanted to help the hobbits out

But Gollum would hear of it at all

He would only argue with Smeagol and pout

Smeagol helped guide them to their destination

But Gollum, lustful for the ring, took charge

He attacked the hobbits with no explanation

He broke Frodo's friendship with his fat hobbit friend

He lured him to a tunnel full of danger

And soon after, nearly met his end

Smeagol never wanted to hurt the hobbits! Never!

But evil Gollum tainted poor Smeagol's mind

He hated hobbits now more than ever

It was that evil, yet beautiful ring, that possessed him

It turned Smeagol into that horrible Gollum

And his heart very dim

He had tried helping the new friends, even if it meant death

But turned darker and colder in the end

He was with his gift when it was destroyed, taking his last breath


Hey der peeps! I wrote this 4 english class... it's supposed to be epic, so yeah... hope u like it! No flames, please! Just be nice and review!

Ja-ne!

-OFK