Protector
Uhm, never wrote a fic before so be kind with reviews and please send reviews cause my story will probably stink and I'll need all the help I can get.Oh by the way, I own none of the LotR characters, anybody you don't recognize is mine.
Now on with the story
Anybody who would see her thought she was crazy. Why, you might ask. it's because she was standing in the pouring rain staring at the sky lost in thought. But none approached her, nobody went up to her to check she was ok.
Rita wasn't aware of the people who were staring at her, nor was she aware of the rain, that was soaking her so badly that her clothes clung to her like a second skin. Her mood was as dark as the sky (which wasn't very pretty) and her thoughts were running through her head.
*I failed, I had to do one thing in my life and I failed..again.* Her shoulders slumped as she thought this. *If only I had been there faster, if only I had been there to meet her, if only. Why did she have to die, she was just a kid. She was special, she had a future. She was my sister and I failed her.*
Rita started to walk towards the cemetery. A familiar route by now. Soon she found the place she was looking for, a line of graves was in front of her. Rita looked down at the recent grave, the grave of her baby sister, Carol. There was a simple tombstone on the grave, only her name was on it. Carol Saunders.
*I will not cry* Rita thought as she felt the tears behind her eyes. *I will not give in, not now* She kneeled down in front of the grave and began to speak with a whisper
"I'm sorry I couldn't protect you little sister, you weren't supposed to be home yet or I would have been there. I would have made sure he would never have touched you, I would have made sure you would have survived." Rita sighed, shivers crawling up her spine because of the cold. "I have to leave Carol, you were the only reason I was still here. I don't know what I will do now with you gone, you were the main reason I'm alive today. God I'm so stupid I'm talking to a stone for crying out loud."
With those words Rita jumped up. "Goodbye little sister" Rita passed other graves important to her as she started to run away, but she didn't linger. She had to leave NOW, before she was going to go insane.
She ran through a park, sometimes her hair got caught between some branches but she didn't mind that. She was running away from her past, her life and her future. Suddenly the ground disappeared and she started to fall, hands desperately trying to find something to cling on to.
*Well at least I'll be with Carol again* were her (well that's what she thought) final thoughts as she gave in to the darkness.
What do you think, is it total crap or what??? I promise there will be LotR characters in the next chapter.
Uhm, never wrote a fic before so be kind with reviews and please send reviews cause my story will probably stink and I'll need all the help I can get.Oh by the way, I own none of the LotR characters, anybody you don't recognize is mine.
Now on with the story
Anybody who would see her thought she was crazy. Why, you might ask. it's because she was standing in the pouring rain staring at the sky lost in thought. But none approached her, nobody went up to her to check she was ok.
Rita wasn't aware of the people who were staring at her, nor was she aware of the rain, that was soaking her so badly that her clothes clung to her like a second skin. Her mood was as dark as the sky (which wasn't very pretty) and her thoughts were running through her head.
*I failed, I had to do one thing in my life and I failed..again.* Her shoulders slumped as she thought this. *If only I had been there faster, if only I had been there to meet her, if only. Why did she have to die, she was just a kid. She was special, she had a future. She was my sister and I failed her.*
Rita started to walk towards the cemetery. A familiar route by now. Soon she found the place she was looking for, a line of graves was in front of her. Rita looked down at the recent grave, the grave of her baby sister, Carol. There was a simple tombstone on the grave, only her name was on it. Carol Saunders.
*I will not cry* Rita thought as she felt the tears behind her eyes. *I will not give in, not now* She kneeled down in front of the grave and began to speak with a whisper
"I'm sorry I couldn't protect you little sister, you weren't supposed to be home yet or I would have been there. I would have made sure he would never have touched you, I would have made sure you would have survived." Rita sighed, shivers crawling up her spine because of the cold. "I have to leave Carol, you were the only reason I was still here. I don't know what I will do now with you gone, you were the main reason I'm alive today. God I'm so stupid I'm talking to a stone for crying out loud."
With those words Rita jumped up. "Goodbye little sister" Rita passed other graves important to her as she started to run away, but she didn't linger. She had to leave NOW, before she was going to go insane.
She ran through a park, sometimes her hair got caught between some branches but she didn't mind that. She was running away from her past, her life and her future. Suddenly the ground disappeared and she started to fall, hands desperately trying to find something to cling on to.
*Well at least I'll be with Carol again* were her (well that's what she thought) final thoughts as she gave in to the darkness.
What do you think, is it total crap or what??? I promise there will be LotR characters in the next chapter.