First I want to thank my reviewers:
Lestat Lover: (cool name by the way) Legolas will be in the fic, cause he is one of my favorites too!!! ;)
Midnight: Thanks for reviewing cause I really didn't think people would like it. Rita will be ok, so don't worry about that.
Lady Fae: Thanks! But this will probably end up in a Leglolas Romance, because even though there are way to much out there, he's the easiest one to write a romance with. Cause Aragorn and Arwen belong together and Frodo isn't one of my favorite characters (hope that doesn't offend you *ducks thrown rocks*
Kitsune no heki: You're right this chapter was a little dark, but yours as far worse!!! :P Besides it was raining very bad here and I just watched a sad movie so..
DISCLAIMER: I own none of the characters you might recognize as a character from the book LotR, so don't sue me!!!!
Now on with the story:
A groan escaped from Rita's lips as she woke up. Her head was pounding and she couldn't see a thing, the dark surrounded her completely. Still blinking she felt around her, the ground was soft, a little muddy even and she felt a tree beside her.
*Well what kind of afterlife is this? Isn't there supposed to be a bright light or something?* The thoughts were going through her mind and suddenly she heard a low growl behind her. *Ok that's NOT good. There's probably a big bad wild animal behind me and I have nothing to defend myself with. Great job Rita, just great, what kind of trouble did you get yourself into this time*
A disgusting smell reached her nose and Rita forced herself to look around to see what the hell was behind her. When she did she wished she hadn't. About three or four pairs of bright-red eyes were staring back at her. *Now what kind of animal would have red eyes* Rita wondered. But as she thought this she gave in to her instinct.. She started to run, FAST.
Though it wasn't that fast, cause she had NO idea where she was going. Rita could here the heavy footsteps running behind her *Now what kind of animal runs on 2 feet and stamps like an elephant, just my luck, I survive a fall from god knows what height, and I get eaten by those big smelly things behind me* Then she tripped over a big branch that was on the road.
*Oof, auch, ok this is not good* Rita tried to get back to her feet but she slipped again in the mud. The growls of the beasts were coming nearer, as was the stench. Rita had to force herself not to hurl right there and then. She felt the big branch over which she had tripped, it was about the size of a baseballbat (A/N is that what it's called?? I have NO intelligence on sports whatsoever)
*This could come in handy, I'm not gonna get eaten without so much as a fight.* She smelt the bad breath of one of the creatures and swung the branch hard. Rita heard a groan after the branch slammed into one of the bodies. *YEAH take that you evil, bad-smelling, ungraceful, stamping, probably ugly, stupid animal.* She swung it again and she felt it hit another.
*Oh I rock, I can fight the big bad animals I.* Her gloating was rudely interrupted when the branch was knocked out of her hand. *Ohoh, that's not supposed to happen* She heard and felt them surround her (cause it was still too damn dark to see a thing) Rita tried to get up again but she was not succeeding. She tried to crawl away, but they kept getting closer. Rita closed her eyes. *I'm gonna die, I'm gonna die, I'm gonna die* was her mantra.
Suddenly she heard one of the beasts cry out in pain and it fell on the ground with a large thump. Then she heard another cry, and another, and another. *Now what on earth could be making those things cry out in pain, but it's probably a good thing for me* She felt somebody crouch besides her as she opened her eyes and saw absolutely nothing.
*Damn dark, can't see a thing. What if it's a rapist or a.whatever, what if it was something who was trying to hurt her? Now wait a minute Rita this person just saved your ass, so he's probably not that bad. No time like the present to find out*
"Who's there, what do you want" Her voice sounded raspy, fear and anger could be clearly heard.
"You are safe Lady, I will do nothing to harm you" a smooth and gentle voice answered hers.
"How do I know I can trust you, I don't even know you"
"You don't know Lady, all I can give you is my word that nothing will happen to you while I am with you." The 'voice' helped her stand up. "Do you believe you can walk, it is not a long distance to the house of my father. There you can rest and you will be safe"
Rita was silent, but there was a full war going on in her mind. *That sounds good, I should go with him. No I can't go with a stranger it would be the fastest way to get myself into trouble. But he could have left me fighting those things on my own, he didn't have to help me. Anyway I'm cold and I'm starving and I'm not gonna find my way around by myself so.*
"I can walk but how can you see where you are going, it's pitch black out there. And are you sure I wouldn't be in the way or something, cause you can drop me off at the nearest city if you like. I don't wanna be a burden"
"You would not be a burden Lady, as the nearest city is that of my fathers. Now let me help you and we will be on our way"
Rita felt an arm around her waist and she walked with the helpful stranger as he started to move away. *Things can only get better right?*
So what do you think about this chapter??? Good? Bad? Should I continue??? Remember this is my first fic so PLEASE review so I'll know what to change. ~~ Thanks, maybe I'll post a chapter again later on the day, now I'm gonna go and eat breakfast!!! (
Lestat Lover: (cool name by the way) Legolas will be in the fic, cause he is one of my favorites too!!! ;)
Midnight: Thanks for reviewing cause I really didn't think people would like it. Rita will be ok, so don't worry about that.
Lady Fae: Thanks! But this will probably end up in a Leglolas Romance, because even though there are way to much out there, he's the easiest one to write a romance with. Cause Aragorn and Arwen belong together and Frodo isn't one of my favorite characters (hope that doesn't offend you *ducks thrown rocks*
Kitsune no heki: You're right this chapter was a little dark, but yours as far worse!!! :P Besides it was raining very bad here and I just watched a sad movie so..
DISCLAIMER: I own none of the characters you might recognize as a character from the book LotR, so don't sue me!!!!
Now on with the story:
A groan escaped from Rita's lips as she woke up. Her head was pounding and she couldn't see a thing, the dark surrounded her completely. Still blinking she felt around her, the ground was soft, a little muddy even and she felt a tree beside her.
*Well what kind of afterlife is this? Isn't there supposed to be a bright light or something?* The thoughts were going through her mind and suddenly she heard a low growl behind her. *Ok that's NOT good. There's probably a big bad wild animal behind me and I have nothing to defend myself with. Great job Rita, just great, what kind of trouble did you get yourself into this time*
A disgusting smell reached her nose and Rita forced herself to look around to see what the hell was behind her. When she did she wished she hadn't. About three or four pairs of bright-red eyes were staring back at her. *Now what kind of animal would have red eyes* Rita wondered. But as she thought this she gave in to her instinct.. She started to run, FAST.
Though it wasn't that fast, cause she had NO idea where she was going. Rita could here the heavy footsteps running behind her *Now what kind of animal runs on 2 feet and stamps like an elephant, just my luck, I survive a fall from god knows what height, and I get eaten by those big smelly things behind me* Then she tripped over a big branch that was on the road.
*Oof, auch, ok this is not good* Rita tried to get back to her feet but she slipped again in the mud. The growls of the beasts were coming nearer, as was the stench. Rita had to force herself not to hurl right there and then. She felt the big branch over which she had tripped, it was about the size of a baseballbat (A/N is that what it's called?? I have NO intelligence on sports whatsoever)
*This could come in handy, I'm not gonna get eaten without so much as a fight.* She smelt the bad breath of one of the creatures and swung the branch hard. Rita heard a groan after the branch slammed into one of the bodies. *YEAH take that you evil, bad-smelling, ungraceful, stamping, probably ugly, stupid animal.* She swung it again and she felt it hit another.
*Oh I rock, I can fight the big bad animals I.* Her gloating was rudely interrupted when the branch was knocked out of her hand. *Ohoh, that's not supposed to happen* She heard and felt them surround her (cause it was still too damn dark to see a thing) Rita tried to get up again but she was not succeeding. She tried to crawl away, but they kept getting closer. Rita closed her eyes. *I'm gonna die, I'm gonna die, I'm gonna die* was her mantra.
Suddenly she heard one of the beasts cry out in pain and it fell on the ground with a large thump. Then she heard another cry, and another, and another. *Now what on earth could be making those things cry out in pain, but it's probably a good thing for me* She felt somebody crouch besides her as she opened her eyes and saw absolutely nothing.
*Damn dark, can't see a thing. What if it's a rapist or a.whatever, what if it was something who was trying to hurt her? Now wait a minute Rita this person just saved your ass, so he's probably not that bad. No time like the present to find out*
"Who's there, what do you want" Her voice sounded raspy, fear and anger could be clearly heard.
"You are safe Lady, I will do nothing to harm you" a smooth and gentle voice answered hers.
"How do I know I can trust you, I don't even know you"
"You don't know Lady, all I can give you is my word that nothing will happen to you while I am with you." The 'voice' helped her stand up. "Do you believe you can walk, it is not a long distance to the house of my father. There you can rest and you will be safe"
Rita was silent, but there was a full war going on in her mind. *That sounds good, I should go with him. No I can't go with a stranger it would be the fastest way to get myself into trouble. But he could have left me fighting those things on my own, he didn't have to help me. Anyway I'm cold and I'm starving and I'm not gonna find my way around by myself so.*
"I can walk but how can you see where you are going, it's pitch black out there. And are you sure I wouldn't be in the way or something, cause you can drop me off at the nearest city if you like. I don't wanna be a burden"
"You would not be a burden Lady, as the nearest city is that of my fathers. Now let me help you and we will be on our way"
Rita felt an arm around her waist and she walked with the helpful stranger as he started to move away. *Things can only get better right?*
So what do you think about this chapter??? Good? Bad? Should I continue??? Remember this is my first fic so PLEASE review so I'll know what to change. ~~ Thanks, maybe I'll post a chapter again later on the day, now I'm gonna go and eat breakfast!!! (