I'm back.. I know it's soon but I'm in no mood to study and I found a
sudden inspiration so I'll just type it out now before I loose it
Just wanted to thank: Lady Fae: Thanks for not throwing stuff at me *wipes sweat of brow* was kinda worried there for awhile. Glad you liked the story!!!! (
Innocent-penguin: Thanks for the tip, hope you'll tell me when I'm doing things wrong, cause I'm very new to this. Just read your bio, which is nice by the way, and I'm gonna warn you right now. Rita will probably end up in the Fellowship but she's not superwoman ok.so don't give up on me now. She knows NOTHING about fighting so PLEASE keep reading and reviewing. I'll need you to tell me when this story turns in a stupid and unoriginal Mary- Sue
This goes out to all who are reading my story, TELL ME if you think I can change things in the story to make it better, and do NOT hesitate to criticize me.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the characters you know from the books, Rita is mine though
Now the story continues...
They had been walking through the woods for a little while and the stranger still hadn't spoken a word. Rita was going nuts, she couldn't stand the silence. Reluctant to break the silence she decided to talk.
"So, this might be a lot to ask but what's our name. Because I can't keep calling you helpful stranger now can I? And hoe is it you can see anything in the dark? I can't see a thing and you just walk around and save people from big smelly animals and go home like it's nothing and."
"Orcs" the voice interrupted her tirade.
Rita was baffled. "Excuse me what."
"Orcs, the big smelly animals as you call them are called orcs. They are not animals though Lady, they are creatures of the darkness created by the Dark Lord."
*Well, doesn't that sound positive.Wait a minute, Dark Lord. and why does he keep calling me Lady*
The stranger kept talking while she was thinking this and she had to force herself to pay attention to him.
"As for my name, I will give that if you shall give me yours Milady."
"Uhm, I'm Rita, Rita Saunders"
"Pleased to meet you Rita Saunders, my name is Elladan, son of Elrond."
"Elladan, that's a weird name, I've never heard of it. It's nice though." *Oh great job Rita, you've probably offended the guy, why can't I just keep my mouth shut sometimes.* To her surprise Elladan started to laugh.
"You might find my name strange Rita, but I must admit that I've never heard your name either. It is very rare to hear such a name in these surroundings. It sounds like a human name, where are you from Rita Saunders, Gondor or Rohan possibly?"
Rita was confused she had never heard of those places before. "Rohan, Gondor, I have no clue what your talking about, I'm from Capetown in Florida." (A/N I have no idea if that place actually exists, cause I just made it up!!!)
"Capetown, I have never heard of a city like that. We will reach my father soon, maybe he can make sense out of all this."
"Speaking of your father, Elladan, how is he gonna help me and now I'm questioning you anyway, where are we going? Because you know where you are going right, I don't wanna get lost in the woods now."
"We are nowhere near being lost Milady, I have dwelled through these woods since I was a mere child. As for our destination, we are going to Rivendell the city in which my father rules. It is not much further now, we will reach Rivendell in a little while."
Rita sighed with relief. "Good cause my feet are killing me!"
Elladan chuckled. *What a strange girl this is, I wonder what father will say of her* "We are reaching the borders now Milady, do you see those lights in the distance, those are the lights of Rivendell."
A gasp could be heard from Rita. "It looks so pretty, it's like there are thousands of fireflies out there. Does it look this pretty too in daylight, cause that will come soon right?"
"Aye, Rivendell is a wondrous place, both during day and night. The sight never seizes to amaze me." Elladan stopped and suddenly there was another man in front of them talking to Elladan.
They were speaking in a language Rita had never heard and though it was beautiful, she didn't like the fact she couldn't understand a word they said. "Hello there, can I tell you it is really annoying not to mention really rude to hear people talk and not understanding a word they say. What is the language you're talking in anyhow, it's nice to listen to."
Nobody answered her though, Elladan and the rude stranger just kept talking. Rita was fuming, *What am I, a piece of furniture, can't they just shut up for ten seconds to answer my question. It's not like it's a hard question now is it?* "HEY" she jelled. "Standing right here you know."
"I apologize Rita, yet this is something of an important matter. I have to leave you now, this is Hamir a friend of mine. He shall know further escort you to my father." Elladan removed his arm from her waist and said some things in the other language to the person that was probably Hamir. Then he was gone.
"Follow me Milady" the new voice supposedly Hamir said. "Our destination is only a few minutes away."
Hamir grabbed her arm and started to guide her away. They were getting closer and closer to the beautiful lights and Rita was very happy about that. She was very tired and cold and she felt her eyes starting to droop. She was most likely not paying attention because they were standing in a huge building lit by a lot of candles.
She saw a few women and they took her away as Hamir was talking to another person. Rita was tired, too tired to notice her surroundings or to see the people around her. She felt herself being gently pushed in a room as a pair of hands started to strip her from her clothing. Rita wanted to protest but found she was even too tired to do that. She could feel a soft fabric on her skin as she was dressed in dry clothes. Then she was laid in a bed and she didn't even found the strength to thank the person who helped her before she fell asleep.
*Just have to thank these people tomorrow* Rita thought before she gave in to the need of sleep.
So Rita arrived in Rivendell, tell me what you think. I'm gonna update soon as this is my holiday.
Just wanted to thank: Lady Fae: Thanks for not throwing stuff at me *wipes sweat of brow* was kinda worried there for awhile. Glad you liked the story!!!! (
Innocent-penguin: Thanks for the tip, hope you'll tell me when I'm doing things wrong, cause I'm very new to this. Just read your bio, which is nice by the way, and I'm gonna warn you right now. Rita will probably end up in the Fellowship but she's not superwoman ok.so don't give up on me now. She knows NOTHING about fighting so PLEASE keep reading and reviewing. I'll need you to tell me when this story turns in a stupid and unoriginal Mary- Sue
This goes out to all who are reading my story, TELL ME if you think I can change things in the story to make it better, and do NOT hesitate to criticize me.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the characters you know from the books, Rita is mine though
Now the story continues...
They had been walking through the woods for a little while and the stranger still hadn't spoken a word. Rita was going nuts, she couldn't stand the silence. Reluctant to break the silence she decided to talk.
"So, this might be a lot to ask but what's our name. Because I can't keep calling you helpful stranger now can I? And hoe is it you can see anything in the dark? I can't see a thing and you just walk around and save people from big smelly animals and go home like it's nothing and."
"Orcs" the voice interrupted her tirade.
Rita was baffled. "Excuse me what."
"Orcs, the big smelly animals as you call them are called orcs. They are not animals though Lady, they are creatures of the darkness created by the Dark Lord."
*Well, doesn't that sound positive.Wait a minute, Dark Lord. and why does he keep calling me Lady*
The stranger kept talking while she was thinking this and she had to force herself to pay attention to him.
"As for my name, I will give that if you shall give me yours Milady."
"Uhm, I'm Rita, Rita Saunders"
"Pleased to meet you Rita Saunders, my name is Elladan, son of Elrond."
"Elladan, that's a weird name, I've never heard of it. It's nice though." *Oh great job Rita, you've probably offended the guy, why can't I just keep my mouth shut sometimes.* To her surprise Elladan started to laugh.
"You might find my name strange Rita, but I must admit that I've never heard your name either. It is very rare to hear such a name in these surroundings. It sounds like a human name, where are you from Rita Saunders, Gondor or Rohan possibly?"
Rita was confused she had never heard of those places before. "Rohan, Gondor, I have no clue what your talking about, I'm from Capetown in Florida." (A/N I have no idea if that place actually exists, cause I just made it up!!!)
"Capetown, I have never heard of a city like that. We will reach my father soon, maybe he can make sense out of all this."
"Speaking of your father, Elladan, how is he gonna help me and now I'm questioning you anyway, where are we going? Because you know where you are going right, I don't wanna get lost in the woods now."
"We are nowhere near being lost Milady, I have dwelled through these woods since I was a mere child. As for our destination, we are going to Rivendell the city in which my father rules. It is not much further now, we will reach Rivendell in a little while."
Rita sighed with relief. "Good cause my feet are killing me!"
Elladan chuckled. *What a strange girl this is, I wonder what father will say of her* "We are reaching the borders now Milady, do you see those lights in the distance, those are the lights of Rivendell."
A gasp could be heard from Rita. "It looks so pretty, it's like there are thousands of fireflies out there. Does it look this pretty too in daylight, cause that will come soon right?"
"Aye, Rivendell is a wondrous place, both during day and night. The sight never seizes to amaze me." Elladan stopped and suddenly there was another man in front of them talking to Elladan.
They were speaking in a language Rita had never heard and though it was beautiful, she didn't like the fact she couldn't understand a word they said. "Hello there, can I tell you it is really annoying not to mention really rude to hear people talk and not understanding a word they say. What is the language you're talking in anyhow, it's nice to listen to."
Nobody answered her though, Elladan and the rude stranger just kept talking. Rita was fuming, *What am I, a piece of furniture, can't they just shut up for ten seconds to answer my question. It's not like it's a hard question now is it?* "HEY" she jelled. "Standing right here you know."
"I apologize Rita, yet this is something of an important matter. I have to leave you now, this is Hamir a friend of mine. He shall know further escort you to my father." Elladan removed his arm from her waist and said some things in the other language to the person that was probably Hamir. Then he was gone.
"Follow me Milady" the new voice supposedly Hamir said. "Our destination is only a few minutes away."
Hamir grabbed her arm and started to guide her away. They were getting closer and closer to the beautiful lights and Rita was very happy about that. She was very tired and cold and she felt her eyes starting to droop. She was most likely not paying attention because they were standing in a huge building lit by a lot of candles.
She saw a few women and they took her away as Hamir was talking to another person. Rita was tired, too tired to notice her surroundings or to see the people around her. She felt herself being gently pushed in a room as a pair of hands started to strip her from her clothing. Rita wanted to protest but found she was even too tired to do that. She could feel a soft fabric on her skin as she was dressed in dry clothes. Then she was laid in a bed and she didn't even found the strength to thank the person who helped her before she fell asleep.
*Just have to thank these people tomorrow* Rita thought before she gave in to the need of sleep.
So Rita arrived in Rivendell, tell me what you think. I'm gonna update soon as this is my holiday.