I was positively thrilled by reading your nice reviews, but I have to agree
with Passion Lover, Aislin and Lady Death.
You three made me realize that last chapter could have been far more in depth and intense. And no, I did not take offense to your comments, you told me what you were thinking and you were absolutely right! I always encourage others to criticize my work, it gives me the extra edge to make it even better.
So I am going to rewrite it. I've been doing that for a couple of hours already, but I won't finish it today I think.
Seeing as how I am working on the rewrite, my new chapter will be delayed. I'm also starting a new job on Tuesday, but I promise to post the rewrite and a new chapter by the end of the week.
Hope you guys understand and will like the 'new' and improved version of chapter 57.
Tara
You three made me realize that last chapter could have been far more in depth and intense. And no, I did not take offense to your comments, you told me what you were thinking and you were absolutely right! I always encourage others to criticize my work, it gives me the extra edge to make it even better.
So I am going to rewrite it. I've been doing that for a couple of hours already, but I won't finish it today I think.
Seeing as how I am working on the rewrite, my new chapter will be delayed. I'm also starting a new job on Tuesday, but I promise to post the rewrite and a new chapter by the end of the week.
Hope you guys understand and will like the 'new' and improved version of chapter 57.
Tara