Author
Crazy-cherry
Hi people!
I would like to apologize for any grammar errors in advance. So I'm asking if there is would you please tell me!!!!! Because if I have time I well take it down and correct it. Thank you.
Oh and please if you don't like my story then don't say it in a review, I respect you if you do though its just people that flam never really have a good reason to flam other than they don't like how the story's going. okay then thank you for your time.
Summery:
Syaoran a cope for the Hong Kong Detective Agency comes home one night with his wife from the Agency's yearly Ball to a quiet home on the outskirts of Hong Kong. Sleeping for over an hour a noise from their son's room goes unnoticed until a door opening suddenly sets Syaoran off after hearing small noises and get out of bed to look.
Sending Syaoran on a chase that could loss him two people he love's dearly.
Chapter 1
"Syaoran hurry up!" Yelled his wife at the bottom of the stairs tapping her foot on the tile of the entranceway to the house.
Her long brown hair flowing down a little past her shoulders as she tried hard not to roll her eyes at the fact her husband was always late. She's gotten so used to it she actually tells him the wrong time to be on time.
She laughed as she look at her son and husband trying not to look rushed as they walked/ran from room to room trying to get things in order.
"CALM DOWN!" Syaoran yelled as he tripped over a suitcase trying to avoid his son tossing comic books left and right.
"What you looking for kiddo?" Syaoran asked as he tried to stand up right wall avoiding being bombarded with comic books.
"My DBZ comic book."
"Isn't that it right there?"
"NO!"
"Then what!"
"The new one!"
Down stairs his wife was sitting down with her head in her hands, her eyes were closed as she felt the cool breeze crept in through the crack in the door. Her hair gently sleds past her shoulders. As she hummed to herself she noticed a red light flash on and then off near the front door.
She stud up letting her skirt fall to her knee's, panic rose in her as her sandals clicked against the tile, her breath became uneven as she placed a small smooth hand on the cold brass door handle and opened the door slowly.
As the door opened more the bright hot rays of the sun shone in her emerald eye's causing her to shield them with her left hand. She looked out the door to her right first and noticed a wind chime with different sized circles the smallest being a small red circle that when at the right angle shown like a bright red laser.
Sighing with relief that it wasn't some kind of weirdo coming by their house like there had been to so many of their neighbors houses asking stupid questions like 'Have you seen any odd looking cats or dogs around here?' or 'Would you say this was a well secured area for living?' the Police Department was getting all kinds of calls about it saying it was scaring them that maybe people where sizing up the area so the department sent out copes to patrol the area round the clock.
"Alright lady look out because I don't really think you want to have a face lift right at the moment." Syaoran said earning him a slap to the shoulder, which cased him, to chuckle out loud seeing the sour face she gave him.
"Dear let's hope you don't pole your back out holding that bag hm." She said winking at her son that was smiling.
"Hey! I resent that!"
"You do really?"
"Sakura?"
"What."
"I think our son would like to stay home with us this summer, don't you?"
"NO!"
"MOM!" he cried
"Sorry, I would love to have you home its just." Glaring at her husband she continued "I have some things to paint and fix (If you don't get what she mean by fix she's referring to her husband) around here." She glared at her husband as she took her son's hand and walked out the front door with him. Her pink summer dress flowed to her knees and hugged her curves just right.
Syaoran looked at her and smiled to himself.
"DAD! Come on I don't want to be late for camp!"
"Its camp how can you be late?"
"With you darling anything's possible!" Sakura yelled wall throwing some of the bags in leaving the heavy one for her husband that at the moment looked confused.
"HEY!" He finally said as his son cracked up in the back seat.
"What makes you think you know what that meant?"
"Dad I'm six not three!"
"You don't act like it." He mumbled as he picked up the bright red bag with three side pouches on the ends. Closing the trunk to their Saad he walked around to the drivers side. Opening the door as fast as possible so not to burn his hand on the handle.
"First thing were doing when we get back is buy a NEW car." Syaoran said as he put the key in the ignition and started the car. Slowly coming out of the driveway he turned onto the road and drove off towered the camp.
"Okay what way do we use to get in?"
"The one that says e-n-t-r-a-n-c-e dad."
"Boy aren't you smart. Bet you got that mouth of yours from your mother."
"SYAORAN!"
"I was just kidding." He said chuckling to himself wall his wife sat next to him with her arms folded across her chest and a mad expression plastered on her face. Their son looking bewildered at the comment.
"All right look were here ten minutes early."
"No where here an hour early." Sakura stated with one finger in the air with a smug face.
"Is it that you don't trust me or."
"Hun its not that I don't trust you its just well I know you." She said giggling as she got out of the car.
"Dad it was for the best." His son said putting a hand on his fathers shoulder with a reassuring face.
"Your mother told you to say that didn't she?" he grumbled
"You better believe it!" He said laughing also exiting the car.
"This family is trying to kill me." He mumbled to himself opening the trunk and turning off the engine and hoping out of the car.
He walked behind his wife that was putting their sons things on a cart. Putting his arms around her causing her to jump and tense up but then relax feeling her husband's head rest on her shoulder resting.
"Tired?"
"Yup."
"Poor baby. You better not be tonight."
"Oh I think I could manage tonight." Syaoran said smiling and releasing her to finish.
"Could you go and check him in? I can finish this up."
"Sure thing sweet cake's!" He said slapping her butt and winking at his son that was looking disgusted at the sight of what his father just did to his mother.
Laughing Syaoran took his sons hand in his and walked to a cabin with a red roof and big old oak doors with old white paint on the loges that made up the walls. The rusty windows looked the same year in and year out. The area was covered in trees and wood cabins for kids that came here for the summer. Each cabin the same with a blue roof for boys and a pink one for girls. The doors were oak and the loges were painted white. The windows were nothing but screens and plastic zip covers.
"Sure you don't want to leave early this year and go to Grandma's house in Hong Kong?"
"Yeas dad I'm sure." He said wall walking faster so he could go to find his friends from last year.
THAT NIGHT
"Now what to do?'
"Your asking me like I know!"
"Nope."
"Syaoran?"
"Hm."
"Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"
"I don't know. Am I?"
"I'm hungry." She moaned
"Yup that's what I was thinking." He said rolling his eyes at her and getting up and heading to the kitchen to get something ready.
"God!"
"What?" he rushed back to the room thinking something was wrong.
"You are the slowest person in the world!"
"What's that's supposed to mean?" he asked mock hurt in present in his voice.
Sakura slowly walked up to him smiling evilly. "This is the first time in months that we've had this house to our selves. What did you think I meant?"
Sakura wrapped her arms around his neck smiling at him pressing her body to his. Syaoran catching on put his hands around her and leaned down and kissed her passionately. Guiding her to the couch he gently laid her down wall climbing on top of her. Smiling he kissed her passionately again wall taking of her tope. (God is it just me or is he slow in this story!?!? Lol!)
(What its PG-13 not R)
The morning sun made its way through the curtains. The phone rag from the side table by the couch as to figures moved from under the blanket and an arm came out from under it and slowly searched for the phone finding it the phone was soon covered up by the blanket.
"WHAT!" Syaoran yelled as his headshot up from under the covers and a now awake Sakura sleepily rubbing her eyes.
"Syaoran what is it?"
"Nothing."
"Fine!" Sakura tried to get out from under him but couldn't because every time she tried he would look at her in 'you better not' look. So she stayed where she was.
"No I well not come in today." Syaoran said sternly to the voice on the other end.
"Sya.Oran." Sakura moaned knowing where this conversation was going and didn't feel like being there for it.
"Yes sir she is." Syaoran looked at her horrified, and Sakura was only more helpful after figuring out what was happening. His boss heard her say his name and thought that they where doing something at the moment.
"No Sir." His face went bright red.
"Sir no were not, but sir she just woke up and. Yes sir you well." He hung up glaring her wall all she did was smile and wrap her arms around his neck and peck him on the lips fast before saying good morning and trying again to get up but was again pushed back down.
"Syaoran you know I didn't know you were on the phone all I heard was you yelling." Sakura whimpered as he glared at her. Getting up he picked up his cloths and put on his boxers and walked to the kitchen to make something for them.
"Oh I see blame it on the girl that you were crushing!"
No answer..
Picking up her cloths she wrapped herself in the blanket smiling to herself and walked up stairs.
Walking to her room she folded her clothing and put the blanket on the bed and went into the bathroom to take a shower.
Putting some batter on the pan he waited for it to bubble so he could flip it. Hearing walking up stairs and then water running he figured his wife was taking a shower. Sighing at what his boss figured out red appeared on his face.
-Flash back to phone conversation-
"You need to come in today."
"WHAT!"
'Syaoran what is it?' -aka Sakura
"Nothing!"
'fine.' - Sakura again
"Li we need you here today were swamped!"
"No I well not come in today!"
'Sya.Oran'
"Is your wife with you?"
"Yes Sir she is."
"Were you two doing 'cough' something before I called?"
"NO sir!"
"Li its alright if you two were doing something hell if I could I would go home to my wife right now. So don't say you weren't its not respectful to Ms. Li
"Sir no were not."
"LI!"
"But sir she just woke up and."
"All see you at noon today right."
"Yes sir you well."
End Flash Back
After making a few pancakes he heard the water stop and then more walking he smiled to himself as he made another round for himself. He couldn't help but think how wonderful his life was and how lucky he was to have a great wife and son that he loved.
He heard walking up stairs but it wasn't just one set of feet it was two he looked up hoping that God would make the floor see through so he could see but when nothing happened he panicked and walked backwards to the opening in the counter were he could get out.
When his wife scream went through the house and set him in his cope mode he went for the cadent over the stove and graded his .38 and ran to the stairs were his wife was now running down when she saw him she ran to his arms and hugged him. Syaoran looked at her and smiled a smile of relief that she was okay.
"What happened?"
"I though you were in our sons room so I went to see what you were doing but when I opened the door there was this man climbing out the window." Sakura cried as she clung to her husband as he made his way up the stairs with his .38 ready.
"Was the window open when we left?" Sakura asked as they reached the top.
"No I checked them all I even looked it before we left. Why?"
"Oh really?"
"Yes why Sakura?"
"Because it was open last night to when I went to change into my pajamas. But I could have sworn I went in and closed and locked it also." She whispered as they reached the room.
Later
"Sir your saying you locked the window before you left to take your son to camp and when you came home it was open, and you locked it again am I write so far?"
"Yeah that's right."
"And then this morning your wife went to take a shower and you went to make breakfast, wall you were doing that you mean to tall me you didn't hear anything at all. And you're a cope your self?"
"Every cope has his perks mine is when I'm home I'm just some old Joe. Not a cope but a husband and a father!"
"I under stand I'm the same way its just that you work for the Hong Kong Detectives Agencies as one of the head officers/detectives and you weren't at all paying attention to the extra set of feet moving around."
"Like I said I don't think about things like that here I happen to think this neighborhood is a pretty safe place now however I don't!"
"So your wife goes into your sons room after hearing something and catches a man leaving the house through the window. Then you came up with your gun after hearing her scream, and was told about the man your self and went to check the room. Well it looks like I got every thing needed."
"Thank you I think." Syaoran said as Sakura whimpered into his chest his arms around her protectively glaring at all the other copes that were there checking things out as well as his wife... = = = = = = = = = =
Well that's all for this chapter! Did you like it? Please tell me because I need to know if this idea of mine is worth the time or not. But I happen to think it is so yeah! Lol!!! ByE!!!
Crazy-cherry
Hi people!
I would like to apologize for any grammar errors in advance. So I'm asking if there is would you please tell me!!!!! Because if I have time I well take it down and correct it. Thank you.
Oh and please if you don't like my story then don't say it in a review, I respect you if you do though its just people that flam never really have a good reason to flam other than they don't like how the story's going. okay then thank you for your time.
Summery:
Syaoran a cope for the Hong Kong Detective Agency comes home one night with his wife from the Agency's yearly Ball to a quiet home on the outskirts of Hong Kong. Sleeping for over an hour a noise from their son's room goes unnoticed until a door opening suddenly sets Syaoran off after hearing small noises and get out of bed to look.
Sending Syaoran on a chase that could loss him two people he love's dearly.
Chapter 1
"Syaoran hurry up!" Yelled his wife at the bottom of the stairs tapping her foot on the tile of the entranceway to the house.
Her long brown hair flowing down a little past her shoulders as she tried hard not to roll her eyes at the fact her husband was always late. She's gotten so used to it she actually tells him the wrong time to be on time.
She laughed as she look at her son and husband trying not to look rushed as they walked/ran from room to room trying to get things in order.
"CALM DOWN!" Syaoran yelled as he tripped over a suitcase trying to avoid his son tossing comic books left and right.
"What you looking for kiddo?" Syaoran asked as he tried to stand up right wall avoiding being bombarded with comic books.
"My DBZ comic book."
"Isn't that it right there?"
"NO!"
"Then what!"
"The new one!"
Down stairs his wife was sitting down with her head in her hands, her eyes were closed as she felt the cool breeze crept in through the crack in the door. Her hair gently sleds past her shoulders. As she hummed to herself she noticed a red light flash on and then off near the front door.
She stud up letting her skirt fall to her knee's, panic rose in her as her sandals clicked against the tile, her breath became uneven as she placed a small smooth hand on the cold brass door handle and opened the door slowly.
As the door opened more the bright hot rays of the sun shone in her emerald eye's causing her to shield them with her left hand. She looked out the door to her right first and noticed a wind chime with different sized circles the smallest being a small red circle that when at the right angle shown like a bright red laser.
Sighing with relief that it wasn't some kind of weirdo coming by their house like there had been to so many of their neighbors houses asking stupid questions like 'Have you seen any odd looking cats or dogs around here?' or 'Would you say this was a well secured area for living?' the Police Department was getting all kinds of calls about it saying it was scaring them that maybe people where sizing up the area so the department sent out copes to patrol the area round the clock.
"Alright lady look out because I don't really think you want to have a face lift right at the moment." Syaoran said earning him a slap to the shoulder, which cased him, to chuckle out loud seeing the sour face she gave him.
"Dear let's hope you don't pole your back out holding that bag hm." She said winking at her son that was smiling.
"Hey! I resent that!"
"You do really?"
"Sakura?"
"What."
"I think our son would like to stay home with us this summer, don't you?"
"NO!"
"MOM!" he cried
"Sorry, I would love to have you home its just." Glaring at her husband she continued "I have some things to paint and fix (If you don't get what she mean by fix she's referring to her husband) around here." She glared at her husband as she took her son's hand and walked out the front door with him. Her pink summer dress flowed to her knees and hugged her curves just right.
Syaoran looked at her and smiled to himself.
"DAD! Come on I don't want to be late for camp!"
"Its camp how can you be late?"
"With you darling anything's possible!" Sakura yelled wall throwing some of the bags in leaving the heavy one for her husband that at the moment looked confused.
"HEY!" He finally said as his son cracked up in the back seat.
"What makes you think you know what that meant?"
"Dad I'm six not three!"
"You don't act like it." He mumbled as he picked up the bright red bag with three side pouches on the ends. Closing the trunk to their Saad he walked around to the drivers side. Opening the door as fast as possible so not to burn his hand on the handle.
"First thing were doing when we get back is buy a NEW car." Syaoran said as he put the key in the ignition and started the car. Slowly coming out of the driveway he turned onto the road and drove off towered the camp.
"Okay what way do we use to get in?"
"The one that says e-n-t-r-a-n-c-e dad."
"Boy aren't you smart. Bet you got that mouth of yours from your mother."
"SYAORAN!"
"I was just kidding." He said chuckling to himself wall his wife sat next to him with her arms folded across her chest and a mad expression plastered on her face. Their son looking bewildered at the comment.
"All right look were here ten minutes early."
"No where here an hour early." Sakura stated with one finger in the air with a smug face.
"Is it that you don't trust me or."
"Hun its not that I don't trust you its just well I know you." She said giggling as she got out of the car.
"Dad it was for the best." His son said putting a hand on his fathers shoulder with a reassuring face.
"Your mother told you to say that didn't she?" he grumbled
"You better believe it!" He said laughing also exiting the car.
"This family is trying to kill me." He mumbled to himself opening the trunk and turning off the engine and hoping out of the car.
He walked behind his wife that was putting their sons things on a cart. Putting his arms around her causing her to jump and tense up but then relax feeling her husband's head rest on her shoulder resting.
"Tired?"
"Yup."
"Poor baby. You better not be tonight."
"Oh I think I could manage tonight." Syaoran said smiling and releasing her to finish.
"Could you go and check him in? I can finish this up."
"Sure thing sweet cake's!" He said slapping her butt and winking at his son that was looking disgusted at the sight of what his father just did to his mother.
Laughing Syaoran took his sons hand in his and walked to a cabin with a red roof and big old oak doors with old white paint on the loges that made up the walls. The rusty windows looked the same year in and year out. The area was covered in trees and wood cabins for kids that came here for the summer. Each cabin the same with a blue roof for boys and a pink one for girls. The doors were oak and the loges were painted white. The windows were nothing but screens and plastic zip covers.
"Sure you don't want to leave early this year and go to Grandma's house in Hong Kong?"
"Yeas dad I'm sure." He said wall walking faster so he could go to find his friends from last year.
THAT NIGHT
"Now what to do?'
"Your asking me like I know!"
"Nope."
"Syaoran?"
"Hm."
"Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"
"I don't know. Am I?"
"I'm hungry." She moaned
"Yup that's what I was thinking." He said rolling his eyes at her and getting up and heading to the kitchen to get something ready.
"God!"
"What?" he rushed back to the room thinking something was wrong.
"You are the slowest person in the world!"
"What's that's supposed to mean?" he asked mock hurt in present in his voice.
Sakura slowly walked up to him smiling evilly. "This is the first time in months that we've had this house to our selves. What did you think I meant?"
Sakura wrapped her arms around his neck smiling at him pressing her body to his. Syaoran catching on put his hands around her and leaned down and kissed her passionately. Guiding her to the couch he gently laid her down wall climbing on top of her. Smiling he kissed her passionately again wall taking of her tope. (God is it just me or is he slow in this story!?!? Lol!)
(What its PG-13 not R)
The morning sun made its way through the curtains. The phone rag from the side table by the couch as to figures moved from under the blanket and an arm came out from under it and slowly searched for the phone finding it the phone was soon covered up by the blanket.
"WHAT!" Syaoran yelled as his headshot up from under the covers and a now awake Sakura sleepily rubbing her eyes.
"Syaoran what is it?"
"Nothing."
"Fine!" Sakura tried to get out from under him but couldn't because every time she tried he would look at her in 'you better not' look. So she stayed where she was.
"No I well not come in today." Syaoran said sternly to the voice on the other end.
"Sya.Oran." Sakura moaned knowing where this conversation was going and didn't feel like being there for it.
"Yes sir she is." Syaoran looked at her horrified, and Sakura was only more helpful after figuring out what was happening. His boss heard her say his name and thought that they where doing something at the moment.
"No Sir." His face went bright red.
"Sir no were not, but sir she just woke up and. Yes sir you well." He hung up glaring her wall all she did was smile and wrap her arms around his neck and peck him on the lips fast before saying good morning and trying again to get up but was again pushed back down.
"Syaoran you know I didn't know you were on the phone all I heard was you yelling." Sakura whimpered as he glared at her. Getting up he picked up his cloths and put on his boxers and walked to the kitchen to make something for them.
"Oh I see blame it on the girl that you were crushing!"
No answer..
Picking up her cloths she wrapped herself in the blanket smiling to herself and walked up stairs.
Walking to her room she folded her clothing and put the blanket on the bed and went into the bathroom to take a shower.
Putting some batter on the pan he waited for it to bubble so he could flip it. Hearing walking up stairs and then water running he figured his wife was taking a shower. Sighing at what his boss figured out red appeared on his face.
-Flash back to phone conversation-
"You need to come in today."
"WHAT!"
'Syaoran what is it?' -aka Sakura
"Nothing!"
'fine.' - Sakura again
"Li we need you here today were swamped!"
"No I well not come in today!"
'Sya.Oran'
"Is your wife with you?"
"Yes Sir she is."
"Were you two doing 'cough' something before I called?"
"NO sir!"
"Li its alright if you two were doing something hell if I could I would go home to my wife right now. So don't say you weren't its not respectful to Ms. Li
"Sir no were not."
"LI!"
"But sir she just woke up and."
"All see you at noon today right."
"Yes sir you well."
End Flash Back
After making a few pancakes he heard the water stop and then more walking he smiled to himself as he made another round for himself. He couldn't help but think how wonderful his life was and how lucky he was to have a great wife and son that he loved.
He heard walking up stairs but it wasn't just one set of feet it was two he looked up hoping that God would make the floor see through so he could see but when nothing happened he panicked and walked backwards to the opening in the counter were he could get out.
When his wife scream went through the house and set him in his cope mode he went for the cadent over the stove and graded his .38 and ran to the stairs were his wife was now running down when she saw him she ran to his arms and hugged him. Syaoran looked at her and smiled a smile of relief that she was okay.
"What happened?"
"I though you were in our sons room so I went to see what you were doing but when I opened the door there was this man climbing out the window." Sakura cried as she clung to her husband as he made his way up the stairs with his .38 ready.
"Was the window open when we left?" Sakura asked as they reached the top.
"No I checked them all I even looked it before we left. Why?"
"Oh really?"
"Yes why Sakura?"
"Because it was open last night to when I went to change into my pajamas. But I could have sworn I went in and closed and locked it also." She whispered as they reached the room.
Later
"Sir your saying you locked the window before you left to take your son to camp and when you came home it was open, and you locked it again am I write so far?"
"Yeah that's right."
"And then this morning your wife went to take a shower and you went to make breakfast, wall you were doing that you mean to tall me you didn't hear anything at all. And you're a cope your self?"
"Every cope has his perks mine is when I'm home I'm just some old Joe. Not a cope but a husband and a father!"
"I under stand I'm the same way its just that you work for the Hong Kong Detectives Agencies as one of the head officers/detectives and you weren't at all paying attention to the extra set of feet moving around."
"Like I said I don't think about things like that here I happen to think this neighborhood is a pretty safe place now however I don't!"
"So your wife goes into your sons room after hearing something and catches a man leaving the house through the window. Then you came up with your gun after hearing her scream, and was told about the man your self and went to check the room. Well it looks like I got every thing needed."
"Thank you I think." Syaoran said as Sakura whimpered into his chest his arms around her protectively glaring at all the other copes that were there checking things out as well as his wife... = = = = = = = = = =
Well that's all for this chapter! Did you like it? Please tell me because I need to know if this idea of mine is worth the time or not. But I happen to think it is so yeah! Lol!!! ByE!!!