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you people that have reviewed and hope you continue.but I'm not feeling too
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tells the writer what the hell needs improving and what makes the story
more better so.(You get the point) Well.PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!
Cinderkura
Part 12
By: Angela
Sakura got up early in the morning to take a bath in the old bathtub that was in the attic in the first place. The she got dressed and went down to make breakfast for her stepfamily.
"Why did you take so long?! Have you ever thought about the rest of us? We're hungry!" Then Fongling took walked towards Sakura and slapped her.
Sakura's head whipped to the side as Fongling's hand made contact with her left cheek. Sakura grabbed her red swollen face and looked at Fongling in shock. Sakura had never been hit in her whole life. Not even her brother had hit her before. Sakura had a very strong urge to start crying but she forced herself to stop. She was not going to show Fongling any tears. Crying was a weakness. Sakura straightened up and started to make breakfast. It was Fongling's turn to look shocked. She thought Sakura would start crying and be running to her room.
After breakfast, Sakura went up to her room. She heard Fongling downstairs getting ready to leave. Sakura was extremely bored and wanted to get revenge for the slap even though she was not a person who took revenge on people.
Sakura wanted some fun. She took out the Water Card to create a rain. When Fongling came out of the front door, a shower of rain fell on her.
Fongling screamed and ran back into the house. Then she slowly opened the door and peeked outside. It was calm and sunny outside. Fongling looked in puzzlement. Then she walked outside again. And yet again, it started raining. Fongling looked around and noticed that the clouds were only raining on her. Everything around her was sunny and calm.
Fongling went back into the house and took out an umbrella.
"You want to play games with ME?!" Fongling seethed looking up at the clouds.
Then Fongling went outside with an umbrella. As Fongling opened the umbrella, it stopped raining.
"Ha! I knew you clouds cannot beat my wisdom!" Fongling smiled and bound the umbrella up again.
As Fongling bundled the umbrella, it started raining again. Fongling seethed and opened the umbrella. Again, it stopped raining.
"UUGGG! I need to get to the modeling interview!"
Fongling walked into the driveway holding the umbrella and discovered that she lost the keys to her car. She sighed in anger and walked onto the sidewalk. Good thing the modeling center wasn't far. It had stopped raining but Fongling was afraid she'd get wet and look bad for the interview. As she walked, people looked at her strangely. Fongling stared in misunderstanding until she realized that she was still holding up her umbrella. She immediately closed it but as she started walking, a cloud blew over her and started raining as the cloud followed her to where she was walking. The people that were walking towards her quickly crossed to the other side of the road.
"That woman must have done bad things. Even the sky is playing tricks on her" A woman whispered to her husband.
Fongling stared in shock. Then she pulled her umbrella over her and tried to cover her face.
"Your name?" The manager asked.
"Oh! Fongling Yu!" Fongling answered.
Fongling was at the modeling interview and she was soaking wet. Even the manager looked in doubt if he should hire this woman.
"Have you ever modeled before?" The manager asked.
"Of course!" Fongling answered.
"Then do you always show up on interviews looking this bad?" the manager asked while getting up.
"No! I can explain!" Fongling knew the interview was over and that she couldn't change the man's decision.
Fongling was preparing to take a shower. She thought about the events of the day. Fongling was just starting to relax when the water suddenly stopped.
"What's going on! Is something wrong with the pipes?!" Fongling murmured to herself.
Fongling couldn't see. Shampoo was in her eyes and she was in pain. She tried to adjust the water, but still, no water came. Fongling climbed out of the tub blindly but was not careful and slipped.
"AAAIIII!" Fongling fell face first on the ground in a sickening THUD. "UGGG."
Fongling slowly climbed to her feet. Suddenly, the shower started again and Fongling, being careful this time walked into the shower.
Gosh. I don't know where on Fongling's face to place a bruise. Give me some suggestions and I'll consider! I am not a very good person to brainstorm so.UGG! Sorry it took so long to post this chapter up! Well.yea.that's all I have to say!
Cinderkura
Part 12
By: Angela
Sakura got up early in the morning to take a bath in the old bathtub that was in the attic in the first place. The she got dressed and went down to make breakfast for her stepfamily.
"Why did you take so long?! Have you ever thought about the rest of us? We're hungry!" Then Fongling took walked towards Sakura and slapped her.
Sakura's head whipped to the side as Fongling's hand made contact with her left cheek. Sakura grabbed her red swollen face and looked at Fongling in shock. Sakura had never been hit in her whole life. Not even her brother had hit her before. Sakura had a very strong urge to start crying but she forced herself to stop. She was not going to show Fongling any tears. Crying was a weakness. Sakura straightened up and started to make breakfast. It was Fongling's turn to look shocked. She thought Sakura would start crying and be running to her room.
After breakfast, Sakura went up to her room. She heard Fongling downstairs getting ready to leave. Sakura was extremely bored and wanted to get revenge for the slap even though she was not a person who took revenge on people.
Sakura wanted some fun. She took out the Water Card to create a rain. When Fongling came out of the front door, a shower of rain fell on her.
Fongling screamed and ran back into the house. Then she slowly opened the door and peeked outside. It was calm and sunny outside. Fongling looked in puzzlement. Then she walked outside again. And yet again, it started raining. Fongling looked around and noticed that the clouds were only raining on her. Everything around her was sunny and calm.
Fongling went back into the house and took out an umbrella.
"You want to play games with ME?!" Fongling seethed looking up at the clouds.
Then Fongling went outside with an umbrella. As Fongling opened the umbrella, it stopped raining.
"Ha! I knew you clouds cannot beat my wisdom!" Fongling smiled and bound the umbrella up again.
As Fongling bundled the umbrella, it started raining again. Fongling seethed and opened the umbrella. Again, it stopped raining.
"UUGGG! I need to get to the modeling interview!"
Fongling walked into the driveway holding the umbrella and discovered that she lost the keys to her car. She sighed in anger and walked onto the sidewalk. Good thing the modeling center wasn't far. It had stopped raining but Fongling was afraid she'd get wet and look bad for the interview. As she walked, people looked at her strangely. Fongling stared in misunderstanding until she realized that she was still holding up her umbrella. She immediately closed it but as she started walking, a cloud blew over her and started raining as the cloud followed her to where she was walking. The people that were walking towards her quickly crossed to the other side of the road.
"That woman must have done bad things. Even the sky is playing tricks on her" A woman whispered to her husband.
Fongling stared in shock. Then she pulled her umbrella over her and tried to cover her face.
"Your name?" The manager asked.
"Oh! Fongling Yu!" Fongling answered.
Fongling was at the modeling interview and she was soaking wet. Even the manager looked in doubt if he should hire this woman.
"Have you ever modeled before?" The manager asked.
"Of course!" Fongling answered.
"Then do you always show up on interviews looking this bad?" the manager asked while getting up.
"No! I can explain!" Fongling knew the interview was over and that she couldn't change the man's decision.
Fongling was preparing to take a shower. She thought about the events of the day. Fongling was just starting to relax when the water suddenly stopped.
"What's going on! Is something wrong with the pipes?!" Fongling murmured to herself.
Fongling couldn't see. Shampoo was in her eyes and she was in pain. She tried to adjust the water, but still, no water came. Fongling climbed out of the tub blindly but was not careful and slipped.
"AAAIIII!" Fongling fell face first on the ground in a sickening THUD. "UGGG."
Fongling slowly climbed to her feet. Suddenly, the shower started again and Fongling, being careful this time walked into the shower.
Gosh. I don't know where on Fongling's face to place a bruise. Give me some suggestions and I'll consider! I am not a very good person to brainstorm so.UGG! Sorry it took so long to post this chapter up! Well.yea.that's all I have to say!