You know what? Fanfiction keeps cutting off parts from my chapters. This
time they have cut off the middle, where Meiling and Feiling try to seduce
the Prince and made the middle of the chapter very awkward. I have now
split chapter eighteen and labeled it chapter nineteen. I hope you don't
mind reading the other half of chapter eighteen again, as it is a little
different and will fill in the empty parts that was missed in chapter
eighteen. From now on, I think I will make the chapters of my story shorter
but update more regularly. Thank you1 Read on!
Cinderkura
Part 19
By: Angela
Where did I see her before? Prince Syaoran thought to himself. He was so entranced by the girl that he didn't notice the girls hanging on to him.
"PRRIIINCEE SYAAAAAOOOORAAAANNNN" Two honey sounding voices said from both sides of him. That's when Syaoran noticed that almost every single girl in the ballroom was hanging onto him. Girls were holding on to his legs, feet, waist and arms. Prince Syaoran tried desperately to move but he couldn't. Syaoran looked at the two girls holding onto his shoulder. They were twins but were dressed in different color gowns. One was in a pale white gown, and the other was in a sick puke green gown. They were Meiling and Feiling (obviously). Syaoran stared at Feiling's gown color while Feiling blushed happily and held out her chest even more. Meiling glowered at her sister in jealousy.
All of a sudden, Prince Syaoran noticed that some of the girls were getting awfully close to his crotch. He gasped in fright as he flung the girls that were hanging onto him away with all his might.
Syaoran tore away from the desperate hands of the hungry girls leaving them on the ground. He straightened his outfit and started running back behind the stage, but Empress Yelan stopped him.
"Mother! (pant) Help me!" Syaoran begged.
Empress Yelan smiled and walked past her son to face the crowd.
"Everybody, please collect yourselves" Empress Yelan glared at the particular girls that had thrown themselves on her son. "Do not forget, that this is our PRINCE! You must treat him with RESPECT, or face the consequences" Empress Yelan threatened, then turned away to her seat somewhere in the room.
Sakura had ignored the screams of the females who had rushed to the Prince and had not participated in the ambush of the Prince. Instead, she had stayed to dance with the handsome man she had stolen from Fongling. Sakura's dancer had tried to talk to Sakura, but Sakura wasn't paying any attention at all. She was keeping her eye on Fongling and any new victims she's found.
When Sakura heard the voice of the Empress, she had stopped to listen, as everybody else had. When Sakura heard the Empress speak about the Prince, she had stood on her tiptoes to see. What she saw did not disappoint her. She saw a young man with amber eyes and messy chestnut hair that covered part of his eyes making them look mysterious and dark. His features were strong and delicate at the same time. Then Prince Syaoran turned towards Sakura and stared back at her. Sakura was startled and blushed turning away.
"Whot iz it?" The man that Sakura had stolen asked.
"Huh?" Sakura turned and smiled. Then she noticed that Fongling was dancing with another man! Sakura gasped than ran away from the guy she was dancing with to steal the one Fongling was dancing with.
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Cinderkura
Part 19
By: Angela
Where did I see her before? Prince Syaoran thought to himself. He was so entranced by the girl that he didn't notice the girls hanging on to him.
"PRRIIINCEE SYAAAAAOOOORAAAANNNN" Two honey sounding voices said from both sides of him. That's when Syaoran noticed that almost every single girl in the ballroom was hanging onto him. Girls were holding on to his legs, feet, waist and arms. Prince Syaoran tried desperately to move but he couldn't. Syaoran looked at the two girls holding onto his shoulder. They were twins but were dressed in different color gowns. One was in a pale white gown, and the other was in a sick puke green gown. They were Meiling and Feiling (obviously). Syaoran stared at Feiling's gown color while Feiling blushed happily and held out her chest even more. Meiling glowered at her sister in jealousy.
All of a sudden, Prince Syaoran noticed that some of the girls were getting awfully close to his crotch. He gasped in fright as he flung the girls that were hanging onto him away with all his might.
Syaoran tore away from the desperate hands of the hungry girls leaving them on the ground. He straightened his outfit and started running back behind the stage, but Empress Yelan stopped him.
"Mother! (pant) Help me!" Syaoran begged.
Empress Yelan smiled and walked past her son to face the crowd.
"Everybody, please collect yourselves" Empress Yelan glared at the particular girls that had thrown themselves on her son. "Do not forget, that this is our PRINCE! You must treat him with RESPECT, or face the consequences" Empress Yelan threatened, then turned away to her seat somewhere in the room.
Sakura had ignored the screams of the females who had rushed to the Prince and had not participated in the ambush of the Prince. Instead, she had stayed to dance with the handsome man she had stolen from Fongling. Sakura's dancer had tried to talk to Sakura, but Sakura wasn't paying any attention at all. She was keeping her eye on Fongling and any new victims she's found.
When Sakura heard the voice of the Empress, she had stopped to listen, as everybody else had. When Sakura heard the Empress speak about the Prince, she had stood on her tiptoes to see. What she saw did not disappoint her. She saw a young man with amber eyes and messy chestnut hair that covered part of his eyes making them look mysterious and dark. His features were strong and delicate at the same time. Then Prince Syaoran turned towards Sakura and stared back at her. Sakura was startled and blushed turning away.
"Whot iz it?" The man that Sakura had stolen asked.
"Huh?" Sakura turned and smiled. Then she noticed that Fongling was dancing with another man! Sakura gasped than ran away from the guy she was dancing with to steal the one Fongling was dancing with.
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