I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY!!!!!!
I was grounded, then I just didn't feel like writing and... yeah, well I'm here now and I'm making up for it by updating all my stories!
So If you're a fan of more than just this story, wait no longer, for the other stories will be updated!
BTW: BIRTHDAY WAS September 8th, 2004!
Also look out for my newest story: Twins of Ash
Coming soon! (Aka, as soon as I finish updating my other stories.)
Along with: Her Guardian
Coming soon! (Aka, let me finish de bloody chap. first!)
Okay now then, if you want a disclaimer, don't be lazy and look back a few chapters.
Last but not least!
Reviews!
Chap. V
saFire flamE - Dear, like I have explained before, I am trying to make them as long as possible without giving away too much in one chapter. I like being a tease! Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
T - Dear, the All-Starz aren't even in this story I don't think... okay, they might... Hmm... Let me ponder on that suggestion!
Kaiswings- Dear, It wouldn't ruin it. Just wait, you'll see. Hell by the time I'm done you'll probably like my Mariah, and if you keep R&Ring and you don't like her, then I'll make you a story, whatever pairing you want. By the way. It IS a Tala/Kai. It's just going to have Tala/Mariah on the side! Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
Dark Willow- BOOYAH!! ::Throws party streamers:: BOOYAH!! Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
Shindou-kun and Ryu-sama- Lol, err... thanks? ::Throws on some 3 Days Grace as she crashes de party:: Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
Devvy- ::Smiles:: I might make up for it this chapter or next... but I love that Theme song and I can't wait until you continue it!
Chap. VI
Yin Yang Tiger Girl - Dearest, I shall do for you what I will do for Kaiswings. (Chapter 5---) No Yaoi yet! I'm such a tease aren't I? Well don't worry, a small Bry/Rei Moment in this chappie. Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
T - Past Forgotten... they made up, (NOT LIKE THAT... D yet!) they aren't going to be all that awkward around each other. Because they forgot about their past history together... hence: Past Forgotten. Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
fireDragon & Tara- fire... I have no Idea how that rhymes... but... w/e floats ye boat!! Now I will do the same to you guys as with Yin Yang Tiger Girl and Kaiswings. But make sure you read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
Devvy - Here's you angst... and a Bry/Rei moment to celebrate you updating! Now all you have to do is update again, any one of your Bry/Rei stories (Or Master Among The Greater... I think that's it... xD) and I'll update again... what a joyous world in which we live! Read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
devilburns- Tell ye what babe. I'll make another story a 4some. Just for you! Now all ye got to do is read the important!!! section of the Authors Notes.
That's all for Reviews!
If you write one of these pairings I shall write a request with a pairing that you decide.
Here are the pairings:
Tala/Mariah
Tala/Kenny
Tala/Rei
Bryan/Rei
Tala/Kai/Rei/Bryan
Tala/Mariah/Kenny
Tala/Rei/Bryan
IMPORTANT!!!
I STILL haven't gotten help with the rating, if you do not understand, go back and read the important section in the other chapter/s. If you STILL do not understand Review telling me so and I will clarify it in here. Thank all of you for reading this; please continue to read this section of the Author's Notes.
IF I HAVE OFFERED TO GIVE YOU A ONE-SHOT OR IF YOU WISH TO MAKE A REQUEST THEN EITHER IM ME, E-MAIL ME, OR MAKE A REVIEW STATING THAT YOU WANT TO GIVE DETAILS ON YOUR REQUEST. I WILL THEN E-MAIL/IM YOU WITH A LINK TO A SITE WHERE YOU MAY DO SO!!!
Now, with no further adieu (::Sweat-drops:: 4 pages of AUTHOR'S NOTES?!?!?!) CHAPTER 7!!!
Upon The End, It Shall Begin
A World of Hurt,
Comfort of Foes
Rei moaned and rolled over, the other three glanced in his direction and sighed before looking at one another...
But Kai shook his head, "Don't, let him work it out."
They nodded, still casting glances at him every few seconds.
!$! Dream !$!
Rei smiled, walking down the river to his village when he was attacked from behind. He screamed in terror, knowing what was about to happen, when he was knocked unconscious.
When he awoke, he was in chains, hanging from the ceiling of the underground training room, blood was trekking down the side of his face, his feet were inches from the floor and his whole body was soaking wet. Not a good thing when they take you in here.
He tugged experimentally, then immediately winced, as he jarred his wrists, which were rubbed raw with the strain of holding him up, as the chains were so tight.
He looked up, as the door was pushed open with a small creak. His eyes widened slightly when he saw the wire in 'his hand. He smiled and walked forward, a cruel light in his eyes he raised his free hand and dragged it down his bare-chest. Rei's eyes narrowed, as did his pupils, and he instantly drew back.
He opened his mouth to speak but it was too late to correct his mistake and he let loose a scream instead as he dragged the wire down his wet flesh, efficiently electrocuting him.
!$! Back to Kai and the Others !$!
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!"
They ALL jumped up and snapped their heads in Rei's direction, his body was arched off the ground and convulsing.
"Kai..." Tala whispered, obviously recognizing the movement for what it was.
Kai's eyes closed a small hint of tears, hidden behind his eye lids. "We can't wake him."
"but.." Tala started, but was quickly interrupted.
"NO!"
Tala winced, sending a tearful look in Rei's direction, his eyes closed as well, and when he opened them, they were hard, cold. He wasn't distracted by the second yell... nor the third.
But neither noticed as Bryan walked over and sat near Rei, but they did notice when he started humming a Russian Lullaby.
!$! Dream !$!
When he drew the wire back at last, Rei's voice was so hoarse from screaming that his mouth hurt, even when closed. Tears went down Rei's face, un-noticed by him, but the other saw, and saw fit to lick them away.
"aww, my poor little Cat. Here... let me make you feel better." He dropped the wire and kissed the boy, who now knew better than to pull away, groaning as he forced open the bruised lips, and entered the sore mouth.
Rei's body shook with sobs as the older man continued to kiss him, a hand running over his burning chest. The other pulling free a knife.
!$! Kai and Others !$!
Bryan's voice simply grew louder with each scream, then fell quiet once more as they slowly stopped, all the while he yearned to wipe away the tears.
He had done this very thing so many times in the abbey... so many times.
His eyes closed, but whimpers and hoarse yelps forced him to push back the memory, right now he was needed.
!$! Dream !$!
Rei whimpered again, his mouth long since abandoned for his neck, as the knife dug into his skin once more, both opening old scars, and creating new ones.
When his teeth sunk into his neck, drawing blood, he almost arched away, but he couldn't, for the older man had wrapped his other arm around his waist as he ground against him, moaning repeatedly.
Rei was crying once more, as the blood was licked away and then his tears, then his pants, followed closely by his boxers, were removed; along with the older one's clothing. Once more, he ground against him, licking his fingers he slowly made circles around Rei's entrance, enjoying the whimpers he caused.
With another thrust he came, then he drew back and spun Rei around, then he wrapped his arms around the wet and bloody boy, and thrust into him, tearing flesh, making blood dribble down and drip softly on the floor.
Rei Screamed again, twice as loud as he ever had before, but then he gasped as one hand wrapped around his erection, the other pinching and tweaking his nipples.
Then, while continuing to stroke and torture Rei he began thrusting, slowly at first, but slowly gaining in speed. Continued to cry out in pain, part of him wanted to just ignore the pain and focus on the pleasure, but the other part of him just wanted him stop!
Then after a few more thrusts it was over, he came for the second time that night. And then he kissed Rei savagely and dressed, and walked out, leaving Rei with the solemn servant girls, who probably went through the same thing.
!$! END DREAM !$!
He bolted awake, without a sound, tears continuing to stream down his face. He looked over and saw Bryan, just looking at him. The song he had been humming died in his throat. They just looked at each other for a long while, then he put his hand on Rei's face and wiped away his tears.
No words were necessary, both knew what he had dreamed. But neither needed to discuss it. "Tala and Kai went off to gather more Fire wood. They'll be back any minute. We haven't decided on who will take watch... so... if you would rather stay up.."
A harsh tongue dragging across his cheek, a knife-
He jerked away from his touch, the soft look in Bryan's eyes slowly faded. "Yes. I'll... I'll do it."
"Okay. There's food near the fire, I'm going to bed. Tell them I call next watch." With that, he turned and walked to his pallet, on the other side of camp.
What did you think of my first ever Rape scene?
It was horrendous wasn't it?
Well at least I didn't copy parts of it from other authors... ::Has read many people with almost the same exact Rape scenes. (Shattered Mask and Resurfacing being one of the major two. Resurfacing came first... it's obvious in their techniques... but still.)
Anyway, Review!!
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