Chapter 2
Disclaimer: see chap 1
The first planet that Goten ever went to was the Planet Tfuuso it was inhabited by a race of people called Tfusonians. The Tfusonians resembled big eagles, They had beaks and feathers but also had arms and legs. They had wings growing out of their backs and deep golden eyes. Their life style was centred around their God. Their God had no name and no shape but was a divine being that interfered when the planet faced its greatest peril. They meditated for most of the day in communication with their God except for the warriors of the planet which functioned as its army. The warriors meditated as well but they also trained their bodies. The almost constant meditation that the Tfusonians participated it enhanced their natural mental abilities. The Kami of the planet had a special relationship with its people. She acted as the Chief Priestess for their God.
While Goten was there he followed their beliefs. He trained with their warriors learning Their peculiar way of martial arts.
"Hey Carrisa," he said to his training partner "How are you today."
"I am fine Karoshi (She is referring to Goten. Karoshi is the Japanese word for being worked to death) are you ready to start training today."
"Sure Carrisa, lets go." They walked off to a training room that was pure white. All the walls, the floor, and even the ceiling was white. When the door closed behind them it fused with the wall and did not let any sound in nor out. It looked like a single wall. They sat in the middle of the floor, eyes closed and legs crossed, breathing deeply. As their minds wandered, thoughts became a blur and finally faded into nothingness. The two met on the landscape of their minds. The sky was a dark swirling vortex of clouds and the ground was rocky and grey. The two faced off in preparation for a mental sparring match. Normally Karoshi would be more than a match for her but in their minds she had more experience and power.
Karoshi rushed towards her, fists outstretched as he took the offensive in their fight. She dodged his punch and countered the attack by kneeing him in the stomach. Karoshi took the hit and flew into the air he started to yell as he charged up in preparation for a KAMEHAMEHA. He threw the blast at Carrisa and she leapt towards it powering up her on blast as she did "RAKENOH" she screamed as she let the blast loose. The red blast met blue as the two attacks struggled for dominance. They both held their ground as the two warriors pumped more energy into the blasts. Ripples of energy were expanding from the blasts throwing up rocks and dust all over. Carrisa's blast started to over power Karoshi's and he finally let his blast go and jumped out of the way just in time as Carrisa's blast passed right underneath him. Her blast hit the ground and exploded and rocks were thrown everywhere. Carrisa turned around in time to get a kick to the face from Karoshi. She was shot back into a mountain behind her and was buried in the rocks. She jumped out of it and yelled to Karoshi. "Okay that is enough training for now."
"Sure, lets take a break for lunch now." He replied.
They sat down around a table that was only about 6 inches off the ground and was filled with food. So much food that it was straining under the weight. Karoshi soon rectified this as he gobbled down the food in a most Sayin fashion. Carrisa looked on in awe. Even after he had been there for a while she was still not used to the way he ate.
She remembered the first time she had seen him. He had been in the infirmary after his ship had crashed on the planet. His black hair had been covered up by a bandage and his left arm was in a sling. His right arm was a mangled mess and the bone showed through in several places. His face was a mass of bruises, both his eyes were swollen shut and his jaw had been set because it was broken. His left leg was wrapped in bandages because if severe burns. She had not seen in but had been told that the bone had gone through his leg. His chest was wrapped in bandages for most of his ribs were broken and his stomach had been cut open by a piece of metal that had imbedded itself there.
The Tfusonians had found him when his ship had crashed in a farmers field and his body was thrown into the farmers vegetables wrecking most of his crop. As soon as Karoshi was able he had to work for the farmer to repay him for the damages done to his property. He had completed that in no time and had soon requested to be allowed to train with the planets warriors.
Carrisa was snapped back into reality be Karoshi waving his hand in front of her saying her name "Hey Carrisa are we going to go back to training now." He asked as he stretched his arms behind him.
"Fine let's go, don't rush me." Carrisa told him.
They walked into a new room this time. The room was a very bright sky blue and again the door closed without a seam. Karoshi and Carrisa settled into fighting stances. Karoshi took the offensive again, and rushed towards her and aimed a punch at her head. She ducked away with ease and jumped up as he kicked at her legs. She countered his combo with a punch back at him at he went flying into the wall, she rushed after him in an attack but she only hit the wall. He grabbed her from behind and held her arms in place. She kicked at him but with great difficulty, because of the close quarters, dodged all her attacks. She finally stopped struggling and said, "all right Karoshi, I give up." He set her down and to his surprise she turned around and kicked him into the wall. "Come on Karoshi never trust your opponent that's basic knowledge." Carrisa lectured him. Then with great dignity she walked out the door. He dug himself out of the hole in the wall than faithfully followed her out.
Carrisa turned toKaroshi and said " You always let down your guard when you attack , you should always be aware of your opponent. Your fighting style relies on your strength but that will fail if you come up against a stronger opponent or a more skilled one. You have to perfect your fighting skills. Your stronger and faster than I am but I can anticipate your next move so I will always win. You have to learn to think like your opponent and you will win to. Now come on we have to go to the barracks General Manso is making a speech ."
They raced off to the barracks leaving several disgruntled people in their dust. They got to the barracks and barged in. The auditorium where the speech was going to be held was at the end of he main hallway on the right. As they walked down the plain blue corridor in occurred to Karoshi that these people liked light colours thinking about more serious matters he mulled over what the speech might be about. Karoshi's train of thought was cut off by their arrival at the auditorium
General Manso stood on a podium at the front of the auditorium dressed in a dark red military uniform. He opened his mouth to speak and the entire auditorium went quiet.
"I have called you here today to tell you of the danger that threatens to destroy our society. The Jerrium empire has come to our planet with the intent of taking over. They have asked us to join their empire but in reality they want slaves and our resources. Their army far outnumbers us but we have decided to fight to the bitter end. All those who wish to fight for their country will stay. Civilians and those who don't wish to fight will be evacuated. If you don't wish to fight stand up and leave now, sign the paper on your way out so we know who is not fighting." As soon as he finished, about a quarter of the audience stood up and left. "For those who remain. We thank you for your service. Please get into military uniform and assemble back here at 1400 hours when we will engage the enemy.
Karoshi stood up and turned to Carrisa "What should I do since I am not a soldier but I want to help your people, to repay them for the kindness they have shown me."
"Well Karoshi maybe you should talk to General Manso about it tell him you come with my recommendations ."
Karoshi walked up to General Manso who was surveying who was going and who staying. "Excuse me General" Karoshi asked " I have been on this planet only for a short while but I love it here and would hate for anything to happen to it and anyone on it. I am not a soldier but I am a very good fighter and Carrisa will recommend me."
"Well normally I would say no even with Carrisa's recommendation but in this time on dire need, we are in desperate need of soldiers right now so I will say yes, but first what is your name."
"It's, uh, Karoshi"
"Ok Karoshi, Carrisa will get you a uniform and than meet back her at 1400 hours."
"Thank you so much General I appreciate this more than you know." Karoshi walk back to Carrisa and told her about the conversation he had with the General. They walked off to get a uniform for him and he got to see more of the base. The uniform he got was white with black stripes running down both arms and legs of it. The cuffs and collars of it were outlined in gold and the buttons where silver. Karoshi and Carrisa went their separate ways. Him to change into his uniform and her to change into hers.
Karoshi got to his quarters and was about to pit on his uniform, when a sharp pain shot down his back and he fell to his knees in pain. About ten minutes later he had recovered enough to give himself a quick check for any permanent harm. His hand slid down his rib cage and his tail flickered in annoyance that he could not find the cause of the pain. Wait he though a tail? His hands went to his tail spot and he swore in annoyance. His tail was back and making itself noticed. He had not told them he was part Sayin yet since he know that Sayins were not exactly galactic heroes, but pretty much hated throughout the universe. He quickly put on his uniform and wrapped it around his waist to pass it off as a belt.
When he got to the auditorium he looked around for Carrisa and almost immediately saw her waving at him from the front of the auditorium right in front of the podium he walked up and they exchanged greetings.
"Hi Karoshi I forgot to tell you but I kinda forgot under the circumstances. We have a full moon now, its coming back into view after 35 years. Every 35 years we get a full moon which has restorative properties."
"So that's what happened, Karoshi thought. And since I am a Sayin and they are more in tune with the moon it means it has a greater effect on me than most.."
"Well" he asked Carrisa when is the invasion going to take place."
"I am not sure but I think the General will be telling us now." In perfect timing General Manso stood up at the podium to address them.
"My loyal soldiers the Jerrium empire is circling our planet like vultures and have issued an official declaration of war. We have one hour to prepare for the invasion." As if planned by some evil deity alarms started going off, signalling the start of the invasion. "Get to your posts people they attacked sooner than we thought, we are in for one hell of a fight." Yelled the General, keeping a cool head in a desperate situation. "Fighter we will fight to give the civilians time to flee, We fight to preserve our Nation, We fight for Freedom." The General ended with a shout. "Now lets take the fight to the God damned Devils."
The Warriors roared their approval at the General's words and surged to do his bidding. Karoshi rushed after them following Carrisa to intercept the enemy. They took off into the sky some to their deaths, but deaths as heroes to protect the lives of their loved ones. In the distance Karoshi saw huge ships landing and deploying soldiers. Soldiers poured of the ships in thousands. Karoshi powered up to just below Super Sayin and rushed off to meet them. The first soldiers saw the group of brave warriors and the bloody battle commenced.
Karoshi rushed the soldier leading the charge and quickly killed him with a blow to the head. He looked around to see how the others were doing and saw the first wave had been wiped out with minimal casualties taken. The second wave flew off the ships and rush towards them like a wave set to break on a rocky coast. Karoshi sensed that these soldiers were a bit stronger than the last ones but still not a problem for him. He powered up a Ki blast and destroyed almost have of the soldiers charging and the rest were killed when the other warriors entered the fray.
One final ship landed and Karoshi could sense that these were elite soldiers, the best of the best, and they were about as strong as him as a Super Sayin. Unlike the last two waves these soldiers exited in an orderly fashion and slowly formed into groups of five. When they were finished they flew up and advanced on the doomed warriors. " This is a serious fight the last two waves were nothing compared to these guys." The elite flew faster and soon fists were flying as the warriors of Tfuuso engaged the Elite of the Jerrium Empire. Karoshi found himself paired up with a reptilian alien who was quite a bit stronger than he was at the moment. Not wanting to go Super Sayin he tried his best against the alien. Karoshi was quickly beaten into the ground and he discovered that no only was this alien strong but he was skilled as well. In an explosion of golden power his eyes turned teal and his hair swept up in a golden flame and his tail flew out behind him showing itself in all its glory. Karoshi opponent was quickly dispatched in one blow.
Whispers of "Sayin" and "Oh hell No" reached Karoshi Super Sayin hearing as he turned into an angel of death. Blood rained all around him as he fought in a bitter struggle for his life and of those on the planet around him. Dust billowed up from the ground as the fighting seemed to go on forever a mass of blood and death. Blood cleared from Karoshi eyes as he looked around and saw that the fight was over. All of the remaining Tfuuso warriors were looking on at him with fear and respect in their eyes and in others loathing. As one the warriors attacked Karoshi screaming out phrases like "Fucking Sayin" "Dirty Monkey" and other insults at Karoshi. Almost by instinct he destroyed them with ease and when the deed was over and done, his mind cleared and he realized what happened. He powered down and sank to his knees in despair.
He felt a sharp pain at the back of his neck and a feeling of falling, That last thing that registered in his mind was the sight of Carrisa with a sad look on her face standing over him.
PLease review.
Also if anyone wants to tell me what genre this should be tht would be a big help:)
Not to mention i am cold at night so flames will go straight to the fire.
Disclaimer: see chap 1
The first planet that Goten ever went to was the Planet Tfuuso it was inhabited by a race of people called Tfusonians. The Tfusonians resembled big eagles, They had beaks and feathers but also had arms and legs. They had wings growing out of their backs and deep golden eyes. Their life style was centred around their God. Their God had no name and no shape but was a divine being that interfered when the planet faced its greatest peril. They meditated for most of the day in communication with their God except for the warriors of the planet which functioned as its army. The warriors meditated as well but they also trained their bodies. The almost constant meditation that the Tfusonians participated it enhanced their natural mental abilities. The Kami of the planet had a special relationship with its people. She acted as the Chief Priestess for their God.
While Goten was there he followed their beliefs. He trained with their warriors learning Their peculiar way of martial arts.
"Hey Carrisa," he said to his training partner "How are you today."
"I am fine Karoshi (She is referring to Goten. Karoshi is the Japanese word for being worked to death) are you ready to start training today."
"Sure Carrisa, lets go." They walked off to a training room that was pure white. All the walls, the floor, and even the ceiling was white. When the door closed behind them it fused with the wall and did not let any sound in nor out. It looked like a single wall. They sat in the middle of the floor, eyes closed and legs crossed, breathing deeply. As their minds wandered, thoughts became a blur and finally faded into nothingness. The two met on the landscape of their minds. The sky was a dark swirling vortex of clouds and the ground was rocky and grey. The two faced off in preparation for a mental sparring match. Normally Karoshi would be more than a match for her but in their minds she had more experience and power.
Karoshi rushed towards her, fists outstretched as he took the offensive in their fight. She dodged his punch and countered the attack by kneeing him in the stomach. Karoshi took the hit and flew into the air he started to yell as he charged up in preparation for a KAMEHAMEHA. He threw the blast at Carrisa and she leapt towards it powering up her on blast as she did "RAKENOH" she screamed as she let the blast loose. The red blast met blue as the two attacks struggled for dominance. They both held their ground as the two warriors pumped more energy into the blasts. Ripples of energy were expanding from the blasts throwing up rocks and dust all over. Carrisa's blast started to over power Karoshi's and he finally let his blast go and jumped out of the way just in time as Carrisa's blast passed right underneath him. Her blast hit the ground and exploded and rocks were thrown everywhere. Carrisa turned around in time to get a kick to the face from Karoshi. She was shot back into a mountain behind her and was buried in the rocks. She jumped out of it and yelled to Karoshi. "Okay that is enough training for now."
"Sure, lets take a break for lunch now." He replied.
They sat down around a table that was only about 6 inches off the ground and was filled with food. So much food that it was straining under the weight. Karoshi soon rectified this as he gobbled down the food in a most Sayin fashion. Carrisa looked on in awe. Even after he had been there for a while she was still not used to the way he ate.
She remembered the first time she had seen him. He had been in the infirmary after his ship had crashed on the planet. His black hair had been covered up by a bandage and his left arm was in a sling. His right arm was a mangled mess and the bone showed through in several places. His face was a mass of bruises, both his eyes were swollen shut and his jaw had been set because it was broken. His left leg was wrapped in bandages because if severe burns. She had not seen in but had been told that the bone had gone through his leg. His chest was wrapped in bandages for most of his ribs were broken and his stomach had been cut open by a piece of metal that had imbedded itself there.
The Tfusonians had found him when his ship had crashed in a farmers field and his body was thrown into the farmers vegetables wrecking most of his crop. As soon as Karoshi was able he had to work for the farmer to repay him for the damages done to his property. He had completed that in no time and had soon requested to be allowed to train with the planets warriors.
Carrisa was snapped back into reality be Karoshi waving his hand in front of her saying her name "Hey Carrisa are we going to go back to training now." He asked as he stretched his arms behind him.
"Fine let's go, don't rush me." Carrisa told him.
They walked into a new room this time. The room was a very bright sky blue and again the door closed without a seam. Karoshi and Carrisa settled into fighting stances. Karoshi took the offensive again, and rushed towards her and aimed a punch at her head. She ducked away with ease and jumped up as he kicked at her legs. She countered his combo with a punch back at him at he went flying into the wall, she rushed after him in an attack but she only hit the wall. He grabbed her from behind and held her arms in place. She kicked at him but with great difficulty, because of the close quarters, dodged all her attacks. She finally stopped struggling and said, "all right Karoshi, I give up." He set her down and to his surprise she turned around and kicked him into the wall. "Come on Karoshi never trust your opponent that's basic knowledge." Carrisa lectured him. Then with great dignity she walked out the door. He dug himself out of the hole in the wall than faithfully followed her out.
Carrisa turned toKaroshi and said " You always let down your guard when you attack , you should always be aware of your opponent. Your fighting style relies on your strength but that will fail if you come up against a stronger opponent or a more skilled one. You have to perfect your fighting skills. Your stronger and faster than I am but I can anticipate your next move so I will always win. You have to learn to think like your opponent and you will win to. Now come on we have to go to the barracks General Manso is making a speech ."
They raced off to the barracks leaving several disgruntled people in their dust. They got to the barracks and barged in. The auditorium where the speech was going to be held was at the end of he main hallway on the right. As they walked down the plain blue corridor in occurred to Karoshi that these people liked light colours thinking about more serious matters he mulled over what the speech might be about. Karoshi's train of thought was cut off by their arrival at the auditorium
General Manso stood on a podium at the front of the auditorium dressed in a dark red military uniform. He opened his mouth to speak and the entire auditorium went quiet.
"I have called you here today to tell you of the danger that threatens to destroy our society. The Jerrium empire has come to our planet with the intent of taking over. They have asked us to join their empire but in reality they want slaves and our resources. Their army far outnumbers us but we have decided to fight to the bitter end. All those who wish to fight for their country will stay. Civilians and those who don't wish to fight will be evacuated. If you don't wish to fight stand up and leave now, sign the paper on your way out so we know who is not fighting." As soon as he finished, about a quarter of the audience stood up and left. "For those who remain. We thank you for your service. Please get into military uniform and assemble back here at 1400 hours when we will engage the enemy.
Karoshi stood up and turned to Carrisa "What should I do since I am not a soldier but I want to help your people, to repay them for the kindness they have shown me."
"Well Karoshi maybe you should talk to General Manso about it tell him you come with my recommendations ."
Karoshi walked up to General Manso who was surveying who was going and who staying. "Excuse me General" Karoshi asked " I have been on this planet only for a short while but I love it here and would hate for anything to happen to it and anyone on it. I am not a soldier but I am a very good fighter and Carrisa will recommend me."
"Well normally I would say no even with Carrisa's recommendation but in this time on dire need, we are in desperate need of soldiers right now so I will say yes, but first what is your name."
"It's, uh, Karoshi"
"Ok Karoshi, Carrisa will get you a uniform and than meet back her at 1400 hours."
"Thank you so much General I appreciate this more than you know." Karoshi walk back to Carrisa and told her about the conversation he had with the General. They walked off to get a uniform for him and he got to see more of the base. The uniform he got was white with black stripes running down both arms and legs of it. The cuffs and collars of it were outlined in gold and the buttons where silver. Karoshi and Carrisa went their separate ways. Him to change into his uniform and her to change into hers.
Karoshi got to his quarters and was about to pit on his uniform, when a sharp pain shot down his back and he fell to his knees in pain. About ten minutes later he had recovered enough to give himself a quick check for any permanent harm. His hand slid down his rib cage and his tail flickered in annoyance that he could not find the cause of the pain. Wait he though a tail? His hands went to his tail spot and he swore in annoyance. His tail was back and making itself noticed. He had not told them he was part Sayin yet since he know that Sayins were not exactly galactic heroes, but pretty much hated throughout the universe. He quickly put on his uniform and wrapped it around his waist to pass it off as a belt.
When he got to the auditorium he looked around for Carrisa and almost immediately saw her waving at him from the front of the auditorium right in front of the podium he walked up and they exchanged greetings.
"Hi Karoshi I forgot to tell you but I kinda forgot under the circumstances. We have a full moon now, its coming back into view after 35 years. Every 35 years we get a full moon which has restorative properties."
"So that's what happened, Karoshi thought. And since I am a Sayin and they are more in tune with the moon it means it has a greater effect on me than most.."
"Well" he asked Carrisa when is the invasion going to take place."
"I am not sure but I think the General will be telling us now." In perfect timing General Manso stood up at the podium to address them.
"My loyal soldiers the Jerrium empire is circling our planet like vultures and have issued an official declaration of war. We have one hour to prepare for the invasion." As if planned by some evil deity alarms started going off, signalling the start of the invasion. "Get to your posts people they attacked sooner than we thought, we are in for one hell of a fight." Yelled the General, keeping a cool head in a desperate situation. "Fighter we will fight to give the civilians time to flee, We fight to preserve our Nation, We fight for Freedom." The General ended with a shout. "Now lets take the fight to the God damned Devils."
The Warriors roared their approval at the General's words and surged to do his bidding. Karoshi rushed after them following Carrisa to intercept the enemy. They took off into the sky some to their deaths, but deaths as heroes to protect the lives of their loved ones. In the distance Karoshi saw huge ships landing and deploying soldiers. Soldiers poured of the ships in thousands. Karoshi powered up to just below Super Sayin and rushed off to meet them. The first soldiers saw the group of brave warriors and the bloody battle commenced.
Karoshi rushed the soldier leading the charge and quickly killed him with a blow to the head. He looked around to see how the others were doing and saw the first wave had been wiped out with minimal casualties taken. The second wave flew off the ships and rush towards them like a wave set to break on a rocky coast. Karoshi sensed that these soldiers were a bit stronger than the last ones but still not a problem for him. He powered up a Ki blast and destroyed almost have of the soldiers charging and the rest were killed when the other warriors entered the fray.
One final ship landed and Karoshi could sense that these were elite soldiers, the best of the best, and they were about as strong as him as a Super Sayin. Unlike the last two waves these soldiers exited in an orderly fashion and slowly formed into groups of five. When they were finished they flew up and advanced on the doomed warriors. " This is a serious fight the last two waves were nothing compared to these guys." The elite flew faster and soon fists were flying as the warriors of Tfuuso engaged the Elite of the Jerrium Empire. Karoshi found himself paired up with a reptilian alien who was quite a bit stronger than he was at the moment. Not wanting to go Super Sayin he tried his best against the alien. Karoshi was quickly beaten into the ground and he discovered that no only was this alien strong but he was skilled as well. In an explosion of golden power his eyes turned teal and his hair swept up in a golden flame and his tail flew out behind him showing itself in all its glory. Karoshi opponent was quickly dispatched in one blow.
Whispers of "Sayin" and "Oh hell No" reached Karoshi Super Sayin hearing as he turned into an angel of death. Blood rained all around him as he fought in a bitter struggle for his life and of those on the planet around him. Dust billowed up from the ground as the fighting seemed to go on forever a mass of blood and death. Blood cleared from Karoshi eyes as he looked around and saw that the fight was over. All of the remaining Tfuuso warriors were looking on at him with fear and respect in their eyes and in others loathing. As one the warriors attacked Karoshi screaming out phrases like "Fucking Sayin" "Dirty Monkey" and other insults at Karoshi. Almost by instinct he destroyed them with ease and when the deed was over and done, his mind cleared and he realized what happened. He powered down and sank to his knees in despair.
He felt a sharp pain at the back of his neck and a feeling of falling, That last thing that registered in his mind was the sight of Carrisa with a sad look on her face standing over him.
PLease review.
Also if anyone wants to tell me what genre this should be tht would be a big help:)
Not to mention i am cold at night so flames will go straight to the fire.