Ok, here's a story I'm writing. I hope it's good. R/R please

It was a very stormy day in Bikini Bottom that night, About 2:00 AM. Everything, every shop was closed. The rain drops echoed along the wall in the building gaps. Nobody was driving the streets and everyone was in their homes. It was pretty much pitch black everywhere in Bikini Bottom. Then a mysterious flash of red lightning hit the roads. Out of there came a mysterious figure. It glowed in the dark and it had a cape. It was holding really dirty, smashed-up box, on the label it read: "Death awaits you if you open this box" The glow-in-the-dark man started walking up the road stiffly as if he was hypnotized or something. He kept on walking until he came to a stop at the Krusty Krab. He set the box down and then came out an evil laugh from him. The man disapeared into the darkness.

Then the hooded man appeared in a dirty place that appeared to be a cave. It was about 3 hours away from Bikini Bottom. He uncovered his cape, reveiling a strange, red face with spiky hair. He took off his cape too. It then reveiled scaley skin, a pair of wings, and bright green eyes. He spoke out a loud voice:

"The command has been completed, sir"

Across the room, in the darkness was another strange creature also. Except It had better wings and looked a lot more advanced. It had a computer in front of him and he had a bucket by his side. He didn't appear to be happy

"You're late! No bed for you. Go scrub the toilets you ugly, filthy slave" He spat out.

And with that, he gave him a kick in the stomach and he spat in his bucket. The slave coughed out blood.

"(cough) please sir! I've been working for 7 hours straight and my wings hur..."

The master rudely interupted him.

"Stop whining and scrub the god damn toilets!"

"But, sir.."

The master then grew into a victious monster, grabbing his slave by the neck, nearly suffocating him. He took his huge fist out.

"DO YOU WANT ME TO BEAT YOU AGAIN?"

The slave wimpered in fear.

"No! Anything but the beating!"

"THEN SCRUB THE TOILETS, FOOL"

He grew back into his normal self.

"Yes, master!"

The master started laughing

"Ha! You are a pathetic, weak demon! Just as much of a weakling as the fish species around these parts... if not MORE."

The slave was very insulted by his remark but he kept his mouth shut or else his master would beat the living hell out of him. He ran off to the toilets. He had to think of a plan to escape, something that would set his life free and finally get him out of theclaws of his master, too bad he's not.He's aslave. He had to do commands for him everyday and occacionally gets beatby his master. Today he almost did get beat but fortunatly he onlyhas to clean the toilets. He took out a sponge and started scrubbing. He officially had the worst life in the world. As he cleans the toilets all night, lets go back to Bikini Bottom.

Spongebob's house, 7:36 AM-

That morning Spongebob got up and started streching. He happily turned to gary, who was inside of his shell. He tapped on him. One eye peeked out.

"Meow?" (Yes?)

Suddenly, Spongebob had a disapointed expression.

"God, I hate Mondays. Don't you gary?"

"Meow, meow!" (I only hate it when you bother me! Freakin' moron.)

Gary slid back into his shell hoping Spongebob would just go to work already.

"Hmmph, ignore me then"

Spongebob went downstairs to prepare for work.

"I outta to be going now, don't want to be late for work"

He went outside, got his bike, and rode it up to Patricks' house (erm... rock) to greet him, and flattly said:

"Hey Patrick!"

Patrick didn't answer for some reason. He was probably too busy eating. Anyway, Spongebob rode over to the Krusty Krab and set his bike next to to it. He went in.

"Erg, hello Mr. Krabs" he said.

"Me boy! You're late! You were supposed to be here 2 minutes ago. I already lost 2 customers! crys I think I'm going to be sick!"

"Whatever"

He went into the kitchen very slowly. He arrived at the grill and started getting patties.

"Okay, Squidward. What are the orders?"

Squidward was too busy reading a magazine.

"Ooh! The new shampoo designed for losers has come out!"

"Squidward, what are the damn orders!" He shouted.

Squid turned around. "What? Oh, ok."

"One double krabby special"...

"Nine mini patties"...

And it went on so boringly that I don't want to type all of it. Spongebob headed out the door as he was done with work that day.

"See ya tomarrow boy!" Said Mr. Krabs.

He didn't bother to respond. If only he didn't have to go to work everyday! If only he could stay home playing with Patrick and Gary! That would really be the life. As Spongebob was slouching home, he tripped over something and he got knocked down hard on the floor.

"Son of a bitch, OW!"

He looked behind him. It was a cube like figure that looked like a box. He wondered what it was. He put his ear close to it... he heard rattling! Now this could really be something. Probably a million dollers, a rare collectable, or... dare I say it? A stale potato chip! He had to take this home. He wondered what awesome thing would be init. Andonly time will tell what would be in it.

Next Chapter coming soon. I hope you guys liked it.