I got lots of reviews I was so surprised!! looks shocked
And does anyone know any good Kai, Ray and Tala shrines on the web??
Anyway here are your answers:
Forfirith on a sugar high: He hit Tyson because Johnny's a jackass and because Tyson was annoying he and Tyson wouldn't leave.
Tai-Writer: I'll make it John is simple and I'm too tired to think of one, Ray's in deep shit.
SchoolBoredom: That's a secret smirks evilly
Imari: I'm just so evil to poor Ray but it's the best idea I've had from one of my faithful reviewers
Galy: Should I make is angst as well then??
Darksaphire: you're forgiven for whatever knowledge you knew so now you can get all the twists and surprised up next.
Kawaii Neko-jin Lover: I'm still not sure if it will be a KaiRay fic yet so give me time.
Danya2: let's go find out how Kai will react to Ray's burst of news.
TNTiggris: Thanx for review!!
Truth Be Told
Ray slipped the note under Kalai's locker.
He sighed, he hoped this would work, no matter what cost he would help his friend.
He sighed and turned around to see Jackie standing there chewing some gum, her face was emotionless but he eyes told a whole different story.
"You really want that money don't you?" she asked, her voice was softer from when they met in the alley.
"Yeah, I do".
Jackie looked at Ray up and down and shook her head, "I've been reading about this money scheme of yours in the local paper, says your making money for a blind boy who's going to have an operation to see".
Ray nodded.
She popped the gum and said, "Lucky bloke", turning around she started to walk off.
She turned around and suddenly stated, "Don't let Kalai intimidate you".
Ray nodded and she carried on walking, not looking back.
He also turned and began to walk to the exit door.
With Kai
Ray knocked on the door, Mrs Clot looked relived to see him yet annoyed, but mostly relived.
"Thank god you're here Ray; Kai's locked himself in his room and won't let anyone inside".
Ray hurried to the door.
The door was shut locked, "Kai its Ray, please open the door", he banged on it there was answer, "Go away".
Ray sighed and said, "Listen I'm sorry for what I did, agreeing to Johnny without think it was stupid I know but I had a reason".
"What" spat Kai from behind the door?
"Kai, we need that money for the operation and without it you would never be able to see again".
There was a pause when Kai asked, "But why didn't you ask me".
Ray looked down at the carpet, sat down, his head against the door and explained.
"It was bad timing I know, for everyone, you see Kai, my dad…we well…my dad he died".
There was a silence from behind the door and Ray heard the door being leaned against, "Ray…why you didn't tell me".
"I really don't know really, I guess I was ashamed, afraid".
There was more silence when Ray asked if he was still there and Kai answered, "I'm still here, um Ray, can I ask you something".
"Sure".
"Is the White Tigers still playing at the concert"?
"Hell yes"
Ray could almost hear Kai smirk.
"Well go practice".
"Not without seeing you".
There was movement and the door opened, Ray and Kai stood face to face and then they were embraced in a hug, tears running down Ray's face, "I'm so sorry", h kept on whispered in Kai's ear.
Kai and Ray ended up sitting on the floor, with Ray still crying on Kai's shoulder.
"I'm here Ray, and I'm not going anytime soon".
"I know that now".
Next Day (five days till the concert 6 till operation)
Ray once again found himself in the alley with Kalai, Jackie, Zak and Roxy all standing there.
Ray handed Zak the folder with the exam cheats, Zak's smile broaden as he glanced at the answers.
Kalai stepped foreword and said, "But yet you still owe us something".
Ray backed away and caught Jackie's eyes who looked away, "young Ray I would like you to leave those goodie-to-shoes for this gang, you'll have enough money and you'll be one of the most feared people".
Ray stared at them; Jackie was shaking her head looking dead serious.
"Thank you for the request but no, I can't I have someone who needs me".
Kalai took a step forward a meter away from Ray's face.
He lifted a fist and punched him like lightning in the eyes, Ray staggered back, Jackie had a look of surprise and fright as she watched Kalai beat up the helpless Ray.
When, "Stop it!"
All motion stopped and they were looking at Jackie as if she were from another planet, "Stop it, don't tell me what to do girl", spat Kalai.
"I'm sick of it, leave him alone, you got the cheats lets just go".
Kalai looked down at Ray and sniggered, "got a girl standing up for you Ray, that's pathetic" he looked to see Jackie standing there half afraid half angry with herself. "Let's go", he said and kicked him on last time and they left.
Ray looked up to see Jackie's face looked back at him single tears down her face, she was crying for him.
She wiped them and looked straight ahead at the others, she knew she would be punished but as long at Ray was able to help his friend she was happy.
Ray looked, watched them leave.
She had risked everything.
For what
Him
Loneliness of My Empty Heart
When
you left
It
was like a winter
Nothing
but cold
That left me bitter
waiting by the phone
Waiting
by the door
All
I did was waiting
For
you
It
always rain
I
hate it
Nothing
but cold water
To drown my sorrows
a river of tears
Flow
from my eyes
You're
no longer here
To hold me when I cry
I tried to find you
Look
places where
You
would be
But you weren't there
I tried calling you
At
your home
But
you were
Never home
days have gone by without you
Days
turned into weeks
I'm
all alone
Nothing for me to do
days turned into weeks
The
night holds loneliness
Nothing
but still darkness
Just like my empty heart
since you've been gone
Nothing
but loneliness
In
my empty heart
Nothing
but blackness
Like
the darkest of night
What
made you leave me?
I
know I didn't do anything wrong
So
can you tell me?
What I did wrong?
I know this poem has nothing to do with the story but I thought you'd like it I did
Note: This was very boring but the next chapter will be the concert night because I need to skip to it.
And I know its short just bear with me.
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