Alright so I was thinking about the story itself and realized something. Y'all prob gon hate me but this would be much more fun(for me) if I spread the gamers across the world, bringing one with me makes the crew too strong. Ima rewrite the story and Kura will be elsewhere in the world with another certain crew. If you like romance don't worry there will still be some in the story. Our Mc Jay may or may not be paired later on but for now he will be solo. Sorry about this but it has to happen. I want the gamers separate so that the story has a bit more impact. Hopefully it goes well, though it might take me a week or two to reach chapter 3 again. We will see. Once the changes are made this chapter will change. Almost everything remains the same, only difference is no Kura.
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Real Obito: Thanks I plan to stick to I and me. That other shit is way too hard to start. I'm already used to talking in fist person when it comes to Jay. Also the Buggy switch is a bit off but his character is a bit confusing, good but also bad.
Gamelover41592: Thanks though I ain't gonna lie I had to look up what a script flip is.
Vincent1875: Slight inspiration on this, I plan on taking some but not all advice. Most things ain't gon change.