The Image on the hill

"The Gate of Zion?" asked Silos. The Aesir Lord gazed towards the group of Aesirs and Naridons that started carrying the glimmering golden arc sitting peacefull amounst the rocks surrounded by the Naridon slaves that we unchained and set free.

The Aesir Lord turned back to Silos with sadness in his eyes, "The omniscient one has long abused this world and as well as the worlds he conquered. He Turned young men and women as slaves for his dark minions. He poisoned the earth in which we stand inhibiting the growth of a single blade of grass. Now he seeks for all the holy relics of this world in order to collect the Celestial Particle and to destroy it and so far he as succeed. The arc of the covenant which was brought by the Adamast battalion is the last of all the holy relics.

With growing power of the Dwethnors of Naridon the faith of the Etherium upon God grows less causing the Holiness in this universe to diminish. The Church is losing it faith upon God for they don't longer wait for the coming of the Revelation," he stared towards the ground with sorrow and grief.

"My Lord I still have hope that we can bring faith back into this universe. The only thing that stand againsts the Omniscient one is Hope, my Lord, Hope one of the greatest treasures in this world, believe me, my lord, hope can save us." Said Lord Gathonir with a roaring tone.

The Aesir Lord gazed up towards Lord Gathonir, "Come I shall bring you to a safe spot. The Araedarns may come back to seek their attacker." And with that he quickly turned into a Falcon and perched on the rocks and stood in a position that allowed King Silos to sit upon his feathery back. Two other aesirs did the same allowing Jack and Lord Gathonir to sit on their packs. Then one of the Naridon fighters hold a giant horn began to blow it signaling the troops to press on back to their camp.

Flapping their wings intensify the Falcons and hawks soared through the cloudy air over the dense crowd of Naridon freedom fighters and Aesirs.

The Wind swept through their faces blowing Jack's tail causing it to flap in the wind. The Flew at a low altitude know that the Naridons were cold blooded species since they were lizards. King Silos spoke into Ethnylor's ear,

"Tell me Ethnylor what caused the Aesirs to end up here in Naridon?"

"My people are people of Science and faith. And we try to balance the waring forces of Science and the forces of Faith. 300 years ago the church condemn those who wish to follow the path of science and deride their faith because they wanted to seek the thruth causing an ongoing war between Science and Faith but little did they know that each must depend on each other. Science will be destructive without faith and faith will die without the miracles of Science and with that idea we chose to mend the two forces into one and for that we were punished.

We were part of a very secret experiment to try to summon and prove the existence of the Celestial Particle. The Very thing that is Holy and the very thing that created the universe and we saw the coming of the Omniscient one causing us to act and help find a way to protect the universe from the growing evil. When the Omniscient one found out we were framed by Will the traitor and we were exiled in this place under the watchful eye of evil."

"What do you thing that so many people joined the omniscient one?" ask Silos.

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"The Omniscient one says that God is a Tyrant. He says that God expects us to submit our very lives to him and says that he is wants use to sacrifice every thing we have for him. That is why so many have join the Omniscient one because he promises to create rebellion against the Almighty father to gain freedom and to have a chance to grow wiser and smarter. Very very dreadfull for those who have fallen, for they do not know that God expects us to follow him because he doesn't want us to perish in death but to have eternal life in Paradise and also that God has already given us wisdom, wisdom on how to use the knowledge we gain and how not to abuse it to evil because he loves us like a father."

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The last few words that Ethnylor said shook the very foundations of Silos' faith because that was the center of his belief and very essence of his faith. The sun began to set low in the distant horizon as the flying Aesirs began to descend slowly among the rock plains of the several sloping hills. King Silos, Lord Gathonir, and Jack we lead into a camp that was half concealed by the tall rocks that serve as protection. The Camp was like a tent city. With hundreds of people preparing meals in there tents, cleaning themselves and walking here and there to trade and barter but the strange thing was that almost every one in the camp held a weapon in their hand even in the children who were watched closely by their mothers who held a rifle in their hand. The tents were also filled with weapons of all sorts like rifles, rapiers and sabers and swords. They were lead down a path and as Silos walked almost everyone bowed lowly to their king.

The stopped and stayed in a large pavilion and inside was decorated by banners suits of armor and shields. During that night they ate a small meal consisting of only bread and cheese. Then after they set up a fire beside a low hill, as night began to descend upon the camp dots of twinkling flame began to appear around the camp as the hustle of bustle of people grew silent. Lord Gathonir and King Silos sat next to Ethnylor and several Naridons and Aesirs while Jack sat alone wrapped in a thick blanket under a willow tree with its branches arching down over him. Jack gazed at the twinkling light of the camp while fiddling on the golden amulet that hung around his neck. Then suddenly the amulet began to flicker slightly causing Jack to look at it. It flickered out sparkes of golden light for several times and each time it flickered faster and faster until suddenly a large golden beam of light shoot out of the amulet and into the middle of the hill. Where it began to create a ball of intense light that floated several feet above the ground. Then it turned into a shape of a women with golden wings spread across her back.

Jack stood there frighten by the image. He stood up and wrapped his blanket tightly around his body. Then the floating image of the women began to raise her right arm and pointed her index finger towards a large mountain range in the north west. Then a small beam of golden light shot out of her finger tip toward the mountain range that moments later a large flash of light appeared in the top of the largest peak in the mountain range.

Jack gasped as the image of the angel disappeared into the dark of the night leaving a glowing could in the spot where she stood. Jack now knew where the gate of Zion was.

Author's note: tell me if the eigth paragraph is correct tell me. And please read the chapter twice I don't want anyone getting angry about the tenth paragraph. Just read that paragraph twice please!!!!! AND REMEMBER I AM NOT TRYING TO DERIDE CHRISTIANTIY BECAUSE I AM A CHRISTIAN MY SELF! TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT PLEASE!