Hi goldentails here! I love you guys!! You know that right? Plus I was expecting up to two reviews at most!! Not 36!! You guys are wonderful. You make me feel talented... Sorry in advance for any typeos or grammar/spelling mistakes, I was never very good with those and Microsoft almost never catches them. I'll try my best to keep the plot original and interesting. And I'm going to keep Kyubi as the nice granny type. =^-^= Read on!!!
Insert a witty disclaimer and pretend it's mine, okay?
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Demonic Rights
General POV~
All was quite calm in the leaf village that morning, everybody was sleeping and not even the village ninjas would have wanted to get up, seeing how it was only four in the morning. Everybody, except the man who just got himself a new body and of course the first thing that he did with it was falling out of bed with a solid thump. The dreaded demon Kyubi to most, now had a body once more.
Kyubi rubbed the back of his head, wrinkled his nose and thought about the situation. Not good in many respects. He had a body. Good for him, right? Maybe not, because as soon as the village finds out he's going to burn at the stake or worse... they could make him spend time with Gai and Lee. The horror. (note = I don't hate those two, they're hilarious but I guess that Kyubi thinks they're scary -_-;;)
Anyway, Kyubi soon noticed Naruto's shaking, remembering that earlier he had to knock Naruto unconscious so that the poor thing wouldn't be in to much pain. After deciding to help keep Naruto comfortable though the transformation, he tried to get up several times only to fall back on his but. He tried again and managed to get to his feet, only accomplishing this because he had been holding on to Naruto's dresser. He cautiously made his way to the bathroom to get a wet towel to place on his kitling's brow. (me = aw how cute!!!)
Placing the towel on Naruto's forehead, Kyubi sat back on his heels and watched as Naruto's face contorted in pain. Kyubi sighed, Naruto looked drastically different already, like a younger version of the fourth. Slightly longer blond hair so that it hung in his eyes that were scrunched up in pain. He was taller now, almost six feet tall, but the transformation wasn't complete yet. Kyubi knew that at least.
His little kitling had started to shake, he was probably cold. It was to be expected, Kyubi rose to get another blanket. Grabbing a light blue quilt from the closet, Kyubi took a quick look at the mirror for the first time in exactly sixteen years. His appearance hadn't changed at all, he was still a dark blond with hair down to the waist, six foot one, with dark red eyes and claws, fangs, cute little fox ears perched on the top of his head and nine wispy gold tails. Kyubi shook his head to clear it and proceeded back to Naruto. He placed the blanket on him and moved to the dresser to find something to wear. Putting
on some short, only because he thought that Naruto would appreciate it, the demon settled down to wait for Naruto body's alteration to finish.
Several hours later, Kyubi opened his eyes to find Naruto sleeping normally. The transformation seemed complete and at that very moment Iruka, had decided to come to check on him. "Fudge," muttered Kyubi, mainly because there was no way that he could fool that particular teacher. Iruka had been on Naruto's case forever, and it was near impossible to dupe him with petty ninja tricks and Kyubi had yet to recover enough strength to do a kitsune trick. Steeling himself, Kyubi got ready for the first and worst confession of his life, that he most likely have to repeat to Naruto in a few hours. Kyubi was sure that none would fancy being him right now.
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Well? I know it's short but I really wanted to update quickly. I'll try to make long chappies and more character POVs in the next one, k? I repeat.... I LOVE all of you! 36 reviews, your so nice to me. Anyways, I'll get started on the next chapter as soon as I post this one so that you don't have to wait. Ja ne, reviews are welcome again.
Insert a witty disclaimer and pretend it's mine, okay?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Demonic Rights
General POV~
All was quite calm in the leaf village that morning, everybody was sleeping and not even the village ninjas would have wanted to get up, seeing how it was only four in the morning. Everybody, except the man who just got himself a new body and of course the first thing that he did with it was falling out of bed with a solid thump. The dreaded demon Kyubi to most, now had a body once more.
Kyubi rubbed the back of his head, wrinkled his nose and thought about the situation. Not good in many respects. He had a body. Good for him, right? Maybe not, because as soon as the village finds out he's going to burn at the stake or worse... they could make him spend time with Gai and Lee. The horror. (note = I don't hate those two, they're hilarious but I guess that Kyubi thinks they're scary -_-;;)
Anyway, Kyubi soon noticed Naruto's shaking, remembering that earlier he had to knock Naruto unconscious so that the poor thing wouldn't be in to much pain. After deciding to help keep Naruto comfortable though the transformation, he tried to get up several times only to fall back on his but. He tried again and managed to get to his feet, only accomplishing this because he had been holding on to Naruto's dresser. He cautiously made his way to the bathroom to get a wet towel to place on his kitling's brow. (me = aw how cute!!!)
Placing the towel on Naruto's forehead, Kyubi sat back on his heels and watched as Naruto's face contorted in pain. Kyubi sighed, Naruto looked drastically different already, like a younger version of the fourth. Slightly longer blond hair so that it hung in his eyes that were scrunched up in pain. He was taller now, almost six feet tall, but the transformation wasn't complete yet. Kyubi knew that at least.
His little kitling had started to shake, he was probably cold. It was to be expected, Kyubi rose to get another blanket. Grabbing a light blue quilt from the closet, Kyubi took a quick look at the mirror for the first time in exactly sixteen years. His appearance hadn't changed at all, he was still a dark blond with hair down to the waist, six foot one, with dark red eyes and claws, fangs, cute little fox ears perched on the top of his head and nine wispy gold tails. Kyubi shook his head to clear it and proceeded back to Naruto. He placed the blanket on him and moved to the dresser to find something to wear. Putting
on some short, only because he thought that Naruto would appreciate it, the demon settled down to wait for Naruto body's alteration to finish.
Several hours later, Kyubi opened his eyes to find Naruto sleeping normally. The transformation seemed complete and at that very moment Iruka, had decided to come to check on him. "Fudge," muttered Kyubi, mainly because there was no way that he could fool that particular teacher. Iruka had been on Naruto's case forever, and it was near impossible to dupe him with petty ninja tricks and Kyubi had yet to recover enough strength to do a kitsune trick. Steeling himself, Kyubi got ready for the first and worst confession of his life, that he most likely have to repeat to Naruto in a few hours. Kyubi was sure that none would fancy being him right now.
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Well? I know it's short but I really wanted to update quickly. I'll try to make long chappies and more character POVs in the next one, k? I repeat.... I LOVE all of you! 36 reviews, your so nice to me. Anyways, I'll get started on the next chapter as soon as I post this one so that you don't have to wait. Ja ne, reviews are welcome again.