Hello, sorry to take so long with the update, but, I seem to be missing three of the suggestions that I needed in order to continue. But since I'm nice, I'll let that pass. Thank you to the few people that did listen to me and gave me suggestions, but I don't think I'll use them, I recently got out of my writers block. Alright to the story... No Hating me for the use of a scene, but slightly different. Did that make sense? Guess not... ^^;;; Onward to the story!!!!
Disclaimer: Yes, my name is (insert name of Naruto's Author). Seriously, don't think if I was him, that I'd know my own name?
General POV~
Silence was all that could be heard from all sides. All of the genin stared at Naruto. The boys and the adults out of shock and the girls were in awe at how HOT he was now. Iruka was now squiming even worse than before due to Kakashi's staring. As for Kyubi, he was glaring at the girls thinking, 'They're staring at MY kitling, BACK OFF!! My poor kitling.'
Naruto looked nervously around at the people around him, they were confused and propably thought that he had answers. But, as usual, before anybody could saw something smart......
Sasuke POV~
This isn't right, Naruto must be using Henge or something. It's impossible that Naruto could be the holder of the Kyubi, right? Though it would explain a lot, like the villagers reaction to him, the whisker marks and his chakra. (An: did I spell that right?) About to tell him off for not telling me about it sooner, I walked up to him close enough to look him in the eye took another step and.... fell right on top of him.
And much to my dismay ending up with us both on the floor, me on top of him and me kissing him right on the lips. Just like a incident four years ago. Pushing myself of, I started to gag. Everybody was in shock. Naruto hadn't moved and his eyes were really big. I guess I ha missed a complete step when I was walking up to him. Damn.
I heard growling. Coming from the man that called himself Kyubi. Shoot, he looks like he's going to kill me. "I am going to KILL YOU!!! You DEFILED my KITLING!!! DIE!!!" the man screamed, foaming at the mouth. Needless to say I started to run. He's a demon for goodness sake, a pissed off demon.
Strange person that just so happens to be waching POV~
Wow. The kid's running like death was on his heels. Which, I guess it is.The demon chasing him is screaming random profanities like, my kitling and you will die. Charming. Poor kid, he's going to die a painful death. Shaking my head I looked at the other demon, The one that got kissed and noticed that he had gotten up. Close lined the running kid. Ouch that got to hurt and tackled the older demon in the space of seconds.
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I'm sorry, It's short. But thats what you all get if you don't listen to me. *pouts* Now, REMEMBER, i would like FIVE suggestions yet again. I don't care if they aren't good. I just want them. I updated anyway because i felt like i needed to warn you all. I can't seem to remember my plot, yet again and might be giving this story up. Convince me othervise if you REALLY want me to keep going, alright?? If you give the suggestion i'll continue. I promise, if not, I'll try but there are no garanties okay? Really sorry. Ja Ne, Goldentails.
Disclaimer: Yes, my name is (insert name of Naruto's Author). Seriously, don't think if I was him, that I'd know my own name?
General POV~
Silence was all that could be heard from all sides. All of the genin stared at Naruto. The boys and the adults out of shock and the girls were in awe at how HOT he was now. Iruka was now squiming even worse than before due to Kakashi's staring. As for Kyubi, he was glaring at the girls thinking, 'They're staring at MY kitling, BACK OFF!! My poor kitling.'
Naruto looked nervously around at the people around him, they were confused and propably thought that he had answers. But, as usual, before anybody could saw something smart......
Sasuke POV~
This isn't right, Naruto must be using Henge or something. It's impossible that Naruto could be the holder of the Kyubi, right? Though it would explain a lot, like the villagers reaction to him, the whisker marks and his chakra. (An: did I spell that right?) About to tell him off for not telling me about it sooner, I walked up to him close enough to look him in the eye took another step and.... fell right on top of him.
And much to my dismay ending up with us both on the floor, me on top of him and me kissing him right on the lips. Just like a incident four years ago. Pushing myself of, I started to gag. Everybody was in shock. Naruto hadn't moved and his eyes were really big. I guess I ha missed a complete step when I was walking up to him. Damn.
I heard growling. Coming from the man that called himself Kyubi. Shoot, he looks like he's going to kill me. "I am going to KILL YOU!!! You DEFILED my KITLING!!! DIE!!!" the man screamed, foaming at the mouth. Needless to say I started to run. He's a demon for goodness sake, a pissed off demon.
Strange person that just so happens to be waching POV~
Wow. The kid's running like death was on his heels. Which, I guess it is.The demon chasing him is screaming random profanities like, my kitling and you will die. Charming. Poor kid, he's going to die a painful death. Shaking my head I looked at the other demon, The one that got kissed and noticed that he had gotten up. Close lined the running kid. Ouch that got to hurt and tackled the older demon in the space of seconds.
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I'm sorry, It's short. But thats what you all get if you don't listen to me. *pouts* Now, REMEMBER, i would like FIVE suggestions yet again. I don't care if they aren't good. I just want them. I updated anyway because i felt like i needed to warn you all. I can't seem to remember my plot, yet again and might be giving this story up. Convince me othervise if you REALLY want me to keep going, alright?? If you give the suggestion i'll continue. I promise, if not, I'll try but there are no garanties okay? Really sorry. Ja Ne, Goldentails.