A/N: I hope you liked it. I apologies if it sucked but I wrote it between
Midnight and
3:45 in the morning after a day of being drug around the mall by my Girlfriend so I'm a
little tired. I want to say sorry to the guys from Sugarcult for stealing your song but it
inspired this fic so just so you guys know I did not write Saying Goodbye. Review or I'll
hunt you down and chop your body parts off one by one with a dull spork.
P.S. Thanks for all the reviews they were grate. In response to Prince of Dark Heaven's
review I did write this for myself and I'm not init for the glory, its called criticism. Some
people use it as a reference for improving mistakes and such. Don't get me wrong I
totally agree with you but if I had been looking for congratulations I would have shown
my family. The beauty of fan fics is that they allow people to judge your work mostly
anonymously, and so they can be truthful. The only reason I push for people to sign their
reviews is that I find it disrespectful.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters and if you think I do then you are as dumb
as my brother
Chapter 3
Tenchi sat in his room quietly contemplating calling Ryoko. There was a party
that night at Mike's house, so he was going to take Ryoko if she wanted to go but he still
had to ask. Finally he worked up his nerve and picked up the phone "Hi is Ryoko there?"
he asked "speaking, Tenchi I was hoping you'd call." "Yah? I was wondering if you
would like to go to a party with me at Mike's house, what do you think?" "I was starting
to think you would never ask. So I'll be at your house in 30 minuets. Ok?" "but wh."
"I still have to meat your parents silly. Any way this is the second date right?" "sure"
"well then we are officially going out." "bu." "no buts see you in half an hour bye"
and with that she was gone. Tenchi just shrugged and walked towards the shower.
The door bell rang and Tenchi got up from his couch and opened the door slowly.
He was glomped by the weighting Ryoko "Hi Tenchi did you have a nice day?" she
asked as she released him. He nodded in response hiding a smile, she was a lot happier
these days and that was a good thing. "so where's the family huh?" she asked looking
around. "They aren't here. That's what I was trying to tell you on the phone." "Oh well
I guess we'll just have to have diner some night wont we." Noticing the quizzic look on
Tenchi's Ryoko asked "What are you embarrassed by me?" "no, no that's not it its just
. Oh I don't know. Can we just go?" "sure why not."
The party was going pretty good. Ryoko and Tenchi had danced a little and
mingled a little to let Ryoko show off her new boyfriend, of course every one thought
that Tenchi shouldn't have any thing to do with her but they didn't care and now the were
sitting out back talking. Or at least they had been, Tenchi had gone in for drinks. Ryoko
was so immersed in her thoughts that she didn't notes the man approaching her from
behind. "Hello my Ryoko." Said the shadowy figure. Ryoko spun around to see a tall
white hared man. She jumped back with a start "Kagato, what do you want?" "Well I
was back in town and looki'n for some fun so I looked you up." He reached out and
grabbed her pulling her into a ruff kiss. He was interrupted by someone clearing their
throat. He turned to see Tenchi with an angry look on his face. Ryoko pulled away from
Kagato and ran over to Tenchi. "Come on lets get out'a hear, this party is starting to
suck." Ryoko said, Tenchi just nodded. "Hey Mike see you tomorrow for practice Ok."
He yelled before they exited through the side gate.
"So who was that guy?" Tenchi asked as he and Ryoko walked towards his house
"I don't want to talk about it." She replied with a growl. Tenchi shrugged and they
continued on in silence. As they walked across the small park in the town Tenchi thought
he saw something fallowing them and when he turned to look he was pounced o by a
dark figure. He went tumbling backwards to the ground. He crawled to his feet just in
time to take a foot to the side of his face witch sent him back to the ground with a dull
thud. He quickly rolled away narrowly avoiding a foot that had been intended to finish
him off. He wiped his foot around knocking the dark figure to the ground. Using the
brief respite to regain his composure before the figure was on him, punching at his head.
Tenchi ducked to the side and the figures hand smashed into a tree. The man gave a yelp
and Tenchi rammed his fist into the man's stomach. He doubled over and Tenchi kneed
him in the face. The man fell to the ground unconscious. "Kagato" Ryoko gasped,
"come on Tenchi lets get out of hear before he wakes up."
Tenchi sat on the couch in his living room as Ryoko disinfected the cut on the
side of his face. "Ow.careful, that stuff stings." Tenchi wined. "Oh stop complaining
you baby, by the way where did you learn to fight like that." "Well.My Grandpa
insisted I train in kendo, so I. you know." Ryoko nodded "same hear, but my training
was manly with a boken. Without a weapon I'm pretty helpless." After a few moments
of silence Ryoko asked "Tenchi can I stay hear tonight?" "What?" "Well I'm kind of
afraid of Kagato and since your mom is going to be gone for a wile. There is an extra
room right?" "All right but call your mom and make sure its ok." He handed her the
phone. Wile she talked to her mother he walked to the guestroom and started making the
bed. He was putting the pillows in place when she found him. "Ok mom doesn't want
me away from you until Kagato is gone." "Umm. I guess that works. Well here's your
room. Bathrooms in there, there is a shower in there to. Come on Ill show you around
the hou.mmm" he was interrupted by a long gentle kiss from Ryoko. As they broke
apart Ryoko smiled at the stunned look on his face. "Thank you for helping me and for
saving me. I really appreciate it." She blushed slightly.
The next morning Tenchi was awakened by the doorbell ringing. He pulled
himself out of bed and walked to the door. It was Mike and Steve. "What are you guys
doing here?" "Dude band practice remember." Tenchi just groaned. Suddenly Ryoko
walked out only wearing one of Tenchi's shirts, her hair all disarrayed. "Tenchi who is
it?" she asked. "Wow" Mike exclaimed "have some fun last night did we?" Tenchi
suddenly became aware of his fresh-out-of-bed-ness. He wore only boxers and his hair
was in worse condition than Ryoko's. "I think I'm going to take a shower" Ryoko said as
she waked up to Tenchi kissed him on the cheek, and walked off to the bathroom
adjoining the guest room. "you guys make yourselves at-home I need to clean up too."
Tenchi walked out of the bathroom scrubbing at his still damp hair with a towel.
"So Tenchi, have some fun last night or what?" Mike called from the other room.
Tenchi walked in and yelled "IT WASEN'T ANY THING LIKE THAT, SHES JUST
STAYING HERE." Steve pointed to the cut on Tenchi's head questioningly "Oh, I got
in a fight last night on the way home from the party." "With who?" "This guy Kagato.
He was after Ryoko at the party and was fallowing us when we left." Tenchi said with a
shrug and they all set out to the wan that held the equipment.
The first week passed quickly and before they new it, it was Saturday again.
Tenchi and Ryoko had spent the evening on the town. It had started with diner at a small
café then a walk through the park and now was coming to an end with the last few
minuets of Clockwork Orange. We find Ryoko and Tenchi curled up on the couch half
asleep and totally oblivious to the dark figure creeping along the hall and into the
guestroom. Tenchi stands up and helps Ryoko to her feet kissing her on the cheek he
says "goodnight Ryoko." She barely nodes in response before stumbling into her room.
Ryoko is laying on her bed sleeping as the closet door begins to creep open, and
the dark figure makes its way out and into the bed. Ryoko unconsciously snuggles up
against it. "mmm.Tenchi" she whispers. The figure moves its hand up her shirt and
under her braw, grasping her breast firmly. She moans slightly in response. So he
advances his other hand down her panties and slides his fingers between her legs. Ryoko
awakens with a start. She jumps out of the bed and the figure looks at his burnt hands
then up to Ryoko a aura is glowing around the woman. She glares at him forming an
energy sword. He just wiggles his finger at her "Ahah Ryoko, this time I'm ready for
you." Suddenly he is behind her a black energy sword hovering inches from her neck.
The door bursts open "Tenchi" Ryoko gasps "get out of here you cant help." But Tenchi
fuming with anger doesn't budge. Her eyes widen as a blue glow surrounds him and
three strips of blue energy form in front of him. He grasps one and it becomes a sword.
Kagato grins evilly and charges. But Tenchi is expecting this. He dodges to the right
bringing his sword down. Kagato's severed hand falls to the ground with a thud. He
halers in pain and grasps the smoldering stump. He growls at Tenchi "this isn't over,"
grabs his severed appendage and is gone. Tenchi flicks the bed side table then walks
over to the still gawking Ryoko "are you ok?" "Hu. Yah I'm fine just a little stunned
thank you." "I guess I've got some explaining to do don't I?" Ryoko pressed a hungry
kiss against his lips pushing him slowly back. As the backs of his legs hit the bed he
gently pushed her away but before he could protest Ryoko shoved him on the bed
grinning seductively "explain tomorrow tonight your mine." She said as she crawled on
top of him. Straddling him at the waist she leaned over kissing him as she turned off the
light.
A/N: sorry this chapter is so short but I was kind of uninspired but I am going to write a
subchapter( my first lemon I'm so exited) any way I would like to thank and apologize to
my girlfriend she has a major help and inspiration, plus I feel bad about what I said in the
last chapter. Review please E-mail is EvoDH@aol.com
3:45 in the morning after a day of being drug around the mall by my Girlfriend so I'm a
little tired. I want to say sorry to the guys from Sugarcult for stealing your song but it
inspired this fic so just so you guys know I did not write Saying Goodbye. Review or I'll
hunt you down and chop your body parts off one by one with a dull spork.
P.S. Thanks for all the reviews they were grate. In response to Prince of Dark Heaven's
review I did write this for myself and I'm not init for the glory, its called criticism. Some
people use it as a reference for improving mistakes and such. Don't get me wrong I
totally agree with you but if I had been looking for congratulations I would have shown
my family. The beauty of fan fics is that they allow people to judge your work mostly
anonymously, and so they can be truthful. The only reason I push for people to sign their
reviews is that I find it disrespectful.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters and if you think I do then you are as dumb
as my brother
Chapter 3
Tenchi sat in his room quietly contemplating calling Ryoko. There was a party
that night at Mike's house, so he was going to take Ryoko if she wanted to go but he still
had to ask. Finally he worked up his nerve and picked up the phone "Hi is Ryoko there?"
he asked "speaking, Tenchi I was hoping you'd call." "Yah? I was wondering if you
would like to go to a party with me at Mike's house, what do you think?" "I was starting
to think you would never ask. So I'll be at your house in 30 minuets. Ok?" "but wh."
"I still have to meat your parents silly. Any way this is the second date right?" "sure"
"well then we are officially going out." "bu." "no buts see you in half an hour bye"
and with that she was gone. Tenchi just shrugged and walked towards the shower.
The door bell rang and Tenchi got up from his couch and opened the door slowly.
He was glomped by the weighting Ryoko "Hi Tenchi did you have a nice day?" she
asked as she released him. He nodded in response hiding a smile, she was a lot happier
these days and that was a good thing. "so where's the family huh?" she asked looking
around. "They aren't here. That's what I was trying to tell you on the phone." "Oh well
I guess we'll just have to have diner some night wont we." Noticing the quizzic look on
Tenchi's Ryoko asked "What are you embarrassed by me?" "no, no that's not it its just
. Oh I don't know. Can we just go?" "sure why not."
The party was going pretty good. Ryoko and Tenchi had danced a little and
mingled a little to let Ryoko show off her new boyfriend, of course every one thought
that Tenchi shouldn't have any thing to do with her but they didn't care and now the were
sitting out back talking. Or at least they had been, Tenchi had gone in for drinks. Ryoko
was so immersed in her thoughts that she didn't notes the man approaching her from
behind. "Hello my Ryoko." Said the shadowy figure. Ryoko spun around to see a tall
white hared man. She jumped back with a start "Kagato, what do you want?" "Well I
was back in town and looki'n for some fun so I looked you up." He reached out and
grabbed her pulling her into a ruff kiss. He was interrupted by someone clearing their
throat. He turned to see Tenchi with an angry look on his face. Ryoko pulled away from
Kagato and ran over to Tenchi. "Come on lets get out'a hear, this party is starting to
suck." Ryoko said, Tenchi just nodded. "Hey Mike see you tomorrow for practice Ok."
He yelled before they exited through the side gate.
"So who was that guy?" Tenchi asked as he and Ryoko walked towards his house
"I don't want to talk about it." She replied with a growl. Tenchi shrugged and they
continued on in silence. As they walked across the small park in the town Tenchi thought
he saw something fallowing them and when he turned to look he was pounced o by a
dark figure. He went tumbling backwards to the ground. He crawled to his feet just in
time to take a foot to the side of his face witch sent him back to the ground with a dull
thud. He quickly rolled away narrowly avoiding a foot that had been intended to finish
him off. He wiped his foot around knocking the dark figure to the ground. Using the
brief respite to regain his composure before the figure was on him, punching at his head.
Tenchi ducked to the side and the figures hand smashed into a tree. The man gave a yelp
and Tenchi rammed his fist into the man's stomach. He doubled over and Tenchi kneed
him in the face. The man fell to the ground unconscious. "Kagato" Ryoko gasped,
"come on Tenchi lets get out of hear before he wakes up."
Tenchi sat on the couch in his living room as Ryoko disinfected the cut on the
side of his face. "Ow.careful, that stuff stings." Tenchi wined. "Oh stop complaining
you baby, by the way where did you learn to fight like that." "Well.My Grandpa
insisted I train in kendo, so I. you know." Ryoko nodded "same hear, but my training
was manly with a boken. Without a weapon I'm pretty helpless." After a few moments
of silence Ryoko asked "Tenchi can I stay hear tonight?" "What?" "Well I'm kind of
afraid of Kagato and since your mom is going to be gone for a wile. There is an extra
room right?" "All right but call your mom and make sure its ok." He handed her the
phone. Wile she talked to her mother he walked to the guestroom and started making the
bed. He was putting the pillows in place when she found him. "Ok mom doesn't want
me away from you until Kagato is gone." "Umm. I guess that works. Well here's your
room. Bathrooms in there, there is a shower in there to. Come on Ill show you around
the hou.mmm" he was interrupted by a long gentle kiss from Ryoko. As they broke
apart Ryoko smiled at the stunned look on his face. "Thank you for helping me and for
saving me. I really appreciate it." She blushed slightly.
The next morning Tenchi was awakened by the doorbell ringing. He pulled
himself out of bed and walked to the door. It was Mike and Steve. "What are you guys
doing here?" "Dude band practice remember." Tenchi just groaned. Suddenly Ryoko
walked out only wearing one of Tenchi's shirts, her hair all disarrayed. "Tenchi who is
it?" she asked. "Wow" Mike exclaimed "have some fun last night did we?" Tenchi
suddenly became aware of his fresh-out-of-bed-ness. He wore only boxers and his hair
was in worse condition than Ryoko's. "I think I'm going to take a shower" Ryoko said as
she waked up to Tenchi kissed him on the cheek, and walked off to the bathroom
adjoining the guest room. "you guys make yourselves at-home I need to clean up too."
Tenchi walked out of the bathroom scrubbing at his still damp hair with a towel.
"So Tenchi, have some fun last night or what?" Mike called from the other room.
Tenchi walked in and yelled "IT WASEN'T ANY THING LIKE THAT, SHES JUST
STAYING HERE." Steve pointed to the cut on Tenchi's head questioningly "Oh, I got
in a fight last night on the way home from the party." "With who?" "This guy Kagato.
He was after Ryoko at the party and was fallowing us when we left." Tenchi said with a
shrug and they all set out to the wan that held the equipment.
The first week passed quickly and before they new it, it was Saturday again.
Tenchi and Ryoko had spent the evening on the town. It had started with diner at a small
café then a walk through the park and now was coming to an end with the last few
minuets of Clockwork Orange. We find Ryoko and Tenchi curled up on the couch half
asleep and totally oblivious to the dark figure creeping along the hall and into the
guestroom. Tenchi stands up and helps Ryoko to her feet kissing her on the cheek he
says "goodnight Ryoko." She barely nodes in response before stumbling into her room.
Ryoko is laying on her bed sleeping as the closet door begins to creep open, and
the dark figure makes its way out and into the bed. Ryoko unconsciously snuggles up
against it. "mmm.Tenchi" she whispers. The figure moves its hand up her shirt and
under her braw, grasping her breast firmly. She moans slightly in response. So he
advances his other hand down her panties and slides his fingers between her legs. Ryoko
awakens with a start. She jumps out of the bed and the figure looks at his burnt hands
then up to Ryoko a aura is glowing around the woman. She glares at him forming an
energy sword. He just wiggles his finger at her "Ahah Ryoko, this time I'm ready for
you." Suddenly he is behind her a black energy sword hovering inches from her neck.
The door bursts open "Tenchi" Ryoko gasps "get out of here you cant help." But Tenchi
fuming with anger doesn't budge. Her eyes widen as a blue glow surrounds him and
three strips of blue energy form in front of him. He grasps one and it becomes a sword.
Kagato grins evilly and charges. But Tenchi is expecting this. He dodges to the right
bringing his sword down. Kagato's severed hand falls to the ground with a thud. He
halers in pain and grasps the smoldering stump. He growls at Tenchi "this isn't over,"
grabs his severed appendage and is gone. Tenchi flicks the bed side table then walks
over to the still gawking Ryoko "are you ok?" "Hu. Yah I'm fine just a little stunned
thank you." "I guess I've got some explaining to do don't I?" Ryoko pressed a hungry
kiss against his lips pushing him slowly back. As the backs of his legs hit the bed he
gently pushed her away but before he could protest Ryoko shoved him on the bed
grinning seductively "explain tomorrow tonight your mine." She said as she crawled on
top of him. Straddling him at the waist she leaned over kissing him as she turned off the
light.
A/N: sorry this chapter is so short but I was kind of uninspired but I am going to write a
subchapter( my first lemon I'm so exited) any way I would like to thank and apologize to
my girlfriend she has a major help and inspiration, plus I feel bad about what I said in the
last chapter. Review please E-mail is EvoDH@aol.com