There and back again
Disclaimer: I still own all my characters, Amanda, Hebeny, Nurbie.... etc, and I still wish I owned SG-1.
Previously on Amanda
"Amanda" whispered a voice, looking around the room wildly she couldn't find the source.
"Honey?" asked Ashley, taking deep breaths Hebeny raised her eyes, closing them as the room began to spin, she fell into a heap at Jack's feet.
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Cursing under her breath Nurbie struggled to carry Amanda's unconscious body to the Stargate, pushing her body through the gate. Nurbie smiled, no one would ever know what had happened to their golden Amanda.
Placing a hand on her head Amanda opened her eyes blinking several times before her eyes refocused. She found herself back in her personal quarters. Was is all a dream, going home and Nurbie trying to steal her identity, rolling over where she expected to see Nurbie sleeping, instead Ma'at sat quietly. She's meditating, thought Amanda, waiting for the System Lord to notice her.
"What...what happened?" slurred Amanda.
"The jaffa found you at the base of the chappai" replied Ma'at, getting up like she was using muscles no one else had. "The Tok'ra spy now has something in her possession.... my key". Fumbling around her clothes in a pile on the ground, she could feel it, slipping it into her pocket Amanda stood up. "WHERE IS IT?" yelled the System Lord, the Tau'ri in front of her was disturbing serene, which wasn't good if there was an extremely pissed off Gou'ld in the same vicinity as her.
"I have no idea" said Amanda sweetly, shrugging her shoulders. Stomping out of the room, the doors slid shut as Ma'at disappeared from view.
I am so screwed, thought Amanda. Okay so I can't fight my way out, I wonder. Pulling part of her bed from the wall Amanda pulled out a crystal Thor had given her, smiling as she activated the crystal. Placing the crystal under her heel Amanda crushed it, picking up the remains she spread them around her old quarters.
I wonder, began Amanda, as she pulled apart Nurbie's side of the room, she found her old pocket knife and a roll of duct tape, her father made sure she took it everywhere. Kicking out the grate covering an air vent, Amanda lay on her stomach and wriggled her way down the shiny air vent. A marching sound altered her that something wasn't right.
"Lady Ma'at" started a jaffa, "we can not find the Tau'ri".
"It appears she thinks she can out smart me, find her" ordered Ma'at, a chill ran down her spine at the sound of the Gou'ld's voice, smiling she wondered it Ma'at would realise her precious 'key' was right under her nose, well not for long anyway. Finding herself at a dead end, Amanda could feel her knees beginning to hurt, the artificial light shone through the grill on her left hand side, peering though she could see a few scattered jaffa.
I really wish I had taken dad up on those flying lessons, she thought, seeing a bay full of death gliders. Yippee, my only way out and I can't even fly the bloody things. Dropping her head in defeat, sighing Amanda knew her likely chance of making it across the bay without a distraction was low. Taking her chance when the jaffa began to march away, nosily kicking the grill out Amanda clumsily climbed out of the air vent.
Placing his head in his hands, Jack sat on his daughter's bed in solitary confinement, he could remember when she disappeared on her graduation, he never thought that she would actually finish school from the way she got in trouble with the school.
Looking around the corner Nurbie smiled her plan was going to plan, with a few minor inconveniences.
"Are you okay?" asked Nurbie, stepping into Hebeny's room, she curled her nose up at the mass of clothes shewn all over the floor.
"GO away" snapped Jack, getting up off the bed he roughly brushed past Nurbie.
Stealthily creeping up to a death glider Amanda blindly fumbled around for a switch. Oh crap, she thought as she heard jaffa marching towards her. Lovely just what I need, thought Amanda, slipping behind a crate. She peaked over the top of it, carefully watching as a jaffa opened the hatch. Thank you, mouth Amanda, her luck was beginning to look up.
Softly stalking the jaffa, which she was amazed she could do after all the time she spent around the jaffa they always appeared to notice their surroundings, but obviously not this one. Pulling the zat out of the pocket of her jacket and pulling the hood down over her eyes, she shot the jaffa struggling to pull him behind the crates, she could feel the muscles both in her fore arms and calves begin to strain at the amount of dead body weight she had to pull. Straightening up Amanda softly strolled over to the death glider, like she knew what she was doing, of coarse she had no idea how the pilot the bloody thing and still was in the service of Ma'at. Stopping, as she was about to climb into the death glider, behind her she heard a click, like someone was flicking off the safety on a 9-millimeter pistol. Finally something came in handy, she thought, after all the training her father had put her through she was now going to find out if it would actually work.
"Turn around slowly" commanded a voice, it sounded familiar to her but she could but her finger quite on it.
"If you're going to shoot me, why do you want me to face you?" asked Amanda calmly, which was the quite opposite of how she was feeling in this predicament.
"I think it is cowardly to shoot someone in the back, but if you want I will, just for you" the person said tersely, slowly with her hands in the air Amanda turned around, coming face to face with.....
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Please review, plus tell me if I should make the ending happy or should I do a squeal, and if you want a squeal tell me about it.
Disclaimer: I still own all my characters, Amanda, Hebeny, Nurbie.... etc, and I still wish I owned SG-1.
Previously on Amanda
"Amanda" whispered a voice, looking around the room wildly she couldn't find the source.
"Honey?" asked Ashley, taking deep breaths Hebeny raised her eyes, closing them as the room began to spin, she fell into a heap at Jack's feet.
--------------------------------------Now------------------------------------------
Cursing under her breath Nurbie struggled to carry Amanda's unconscious body to the Stargate, pushing her body through the gate. Nurbie smiled, no one would ever know what had happened to their golden Amanda.
Placing a hand on her head Amanda opened her eyes blinking several times before her eyes refocused. She found herself back in her personal quarters. Was is all a dream, going home and Nurbie trying to steal her identity, rolling over where she expected to see Nurbie sleeping, instead Ma'at sat quietly. She's meditating, thought Amanda, waiting for the System Lord to notice her.
"What...what happened?" slurred Amanda.
"The jaffa found you at the base of the chappai" replied Ma'at, getting up like she was using muscles no one else had. "The Tok'ra spy now has something in her possession.... my key". Fumbling around her clothes in a pile on the ground, she could feel it, slipping it into her pocket Amanda stood up. "WHERE IS IT?" yelled the System Lord, the Tau'ri in front of her was disturbing serene, which wasn't good if there was an extremely pissed off Gou'ld in the same vicinity as her.
"I have no idea" said Amanda sweetly, shrugging her shoulders. Stomping out of the room, the doors slid shut as Ma'at disappeared from view.
I am so screwed, thought Amanda. Okay so I can't fight my way out, I wonder. Pulling part of her bed from the wall Amanda pulled out a crystal Thor had given her, smiling as she activated the crystal. Placing the crystal under her heel Amanda crushed it, picking up the remains she spread them around her old quarters.
I wonder, began Amanda, as she pulled apart Nurbie's side of the room, she found her old pocket knife and a roll of duct tape, her father made sure she took it everywhere. Kicking out the grate covering an air vent, Amanda lay on her stomach and wriggled her way down the shiny air vent. A marching sound altered her that something wasn't right.
"Lady Ma'at" started a jaffa, "we can not find the Tau'ri".
"It appears she thinks she can out smart me, find her" ordered Ma'at, a chill ran down her spine at the sound of the Gou'ld's voice, smiling she wondered it Ma'at would realise her precious 'key' was right under her nose, well not for long anyway. Finding herself at a dead end, Amanda could feel her knees beginning to hurt, the artificial light shone through the grill on her left hand side, peering though she could see a few scattered jaffa.
I really wish I had taken dad up on those flying lessons, she thought, seeing a bay full of death gliders. Yippee, my only way out and I can't even fly the bloody things. Dropping her head in defeat, sighing Amanda knew her likely chance of making it across the bay without a distraction was low. Taking her chance when the jaffa began to march away, nosily kicking the grill out Amanda clumsily climbed out of the air vent.
Placing his head in his hands, Jack sat on his daughter's bed in solitary confinement, he could remember when she disappeared on her graduation, he never thought that she would actually finish school from the way she got in trouble with the school.
Looking around the corner Nurbie smiled her plan was going to plan, with a few minor inconveniences.
"Are you okay?" asked Nurbie, stepping into Hebeny's room, she curled her nose up at the mass of clothes shewn all over the floor.
"GO away" snapped Jack, getting up off the bed he roughly brushed past Nurbie.
Stealthily creeping up to a death glider Amanda blindly fumbled around for a switch. Oh crap, she thought as she heard jaffa marching towards her. Lovely just what I need, thought Amanda, slipping behind a crate. She peaked over the top of it, carefully watching as a jaffa opened the hatch. Thank you, mouth Amanda, her luck was beginning to look up.
Softly stalking the jaffa, which she was amazed she could do after all the time she spent around the jaffa they always appeared to notice their surroundings, but obviously not this one. Pulling the zat out of the pocket of her jacket and pulling the hood down over her eyes, she shot the jaffa struggling to pull him behind the crates, she could feel the muscles both in her fore arms and calves begin to strain at the amount of dead body weight she had to pull. Straightening up Amanda softly strolled over to the death glider, like she knew what she was doing, of coarse she had no idea how the pilot the bloody thing and still was in the service of Ma'at. Stopping, as she was about to climb into the death glider, behind her she heard a click, like someone was flicking off the safety on a 9-millimeter pistol. Finally something came in handy, she thought, after all the training her father had put her through she was now going to find out if it would actually work.
"Turn around slowly" commanded a voice, it sounded familiar to her but she could but her finger quite on it.
"If you're going to shoot me, why do you want me to face you?" asked Amanda calmly, which was the quite opposite of how she was feeling in this predicament.
"I think it is cowardly to shoot someone in the back, but if you want I will, just for you" the person said tersely, slowly with her hands in the air Amanda turned around, coming face to face with.....
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Please review, plus tell me if I should make the ending happy or should I do a squeal, and if you want a squeal tell me about it.