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Bakuten Shoot Revolution: Bladebreakers Unite!
Chapter 11: Uh Oh...Busted...
At the dojo
"WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! YOU WANT US TO GO TO THE BEACH?!?!?!?!" everyone exclaimed in amazement as Mr. Kai Hiwatari sat there with his arms and legs crossed.
"That's unlikely of you to ask us that," Tyson said.
"I know..." Max agreed.
"Are you sick Kai?" Ray asked as he was about to touch his forehead.
Kai swipped it away. "Leave my forehead alone!!! Anyways, the reason is..."
"I said so!!!!" Kiara exclaimed as she just popped out of nowhere behind him.
Everyone fell backwards.
"And also," Kai continued, "she's high on POCKY at the moment...."
"I only ate 3 boxes..."
"THAT'S TOO MUCH MISS JEWEL HIWATARI!!!"
"Why do you always have to pick on my middle name when you're mad?"
"Just because to get your attention...you know that..."
Kiara sighed.
"I'll shut up if you give me a Pocky box..."
"ahem...no swearing...and a small pack..."
"Why only a pack?"
"Because we're short of Pocky..."
"WHAT!?!?!?!?! NO MORE POCKY!?!?!?!?!"
Kiara was about to burst into tears.
"I know how much you feel..." Kyle agreed as he tapped his hand on her shoulder. "There there..."
"I know Kiara...I know your sorrow..." Kai thought. "I would like to have it for myself...but you have to always put up a deal for my Pocky..."
"Alright then!!! We'll go to the beach together on Sunday!!!!! Meet over here at 7:30am!!!!" Tyson exclaimed.
"Isn't that tomorrow?" Hilary asked.
"Oh yea! Tomorrow then!!!"
"Yeah!!!" everyone agreed.
Tate's House
Max and Maxine were packing their things for the trip to the beach the next day. "This is going to be exciting!!" Maxine said.
"Yeah, that's true!" Max replied with a smilie. "Having fun in the water!!!"
"Maybe I could go surfing later..."
"Hmmm...that's a good idea too...I gotta do that once I get there..."
There was a high pitch hissing coming from the kitchen.
"Ahhh!!! The water!!!" Max exclaimed as he ran to the kitchen. "Maxine!! The noodles are ready!!!"
"Alright then, dad!!!" she replied as she ran to the kitchen.
2 bowls of fresh noodle soup stood in front of the Tates. They smelled the tastey aroma. Each of them added a squirt of mustard on it. They split their chopsticks and used it to eat some of their noodles.
"Mmmmm...good..." They both said.
The Kon House
"Mariah!!! We're back!!!!" Ray called out.
"Mom!!! Where are you?" Rei Ling asked.
"I'm at the kitchen you two," she yelled back.
They went to the kitchen.
"So, who are your friends Ray?" she asked with a smile.
"They're fine....and they have the same situation as I do..." Ray replied.
"That's good to hear that you're not the only one..."
"Yeah, listen Mariah...you should go on a break because we're going to the beach tomorrow..."
"Really? In that case, ALRIGHT!!!!"
Mariah threw her arms around as she hugged Ray tightly.
"Argh...Mariah...you're...choking...me..."
"Oh yea, sorry Ray....I forgot that you're a teen right now..."
"It's alright...."
"Let's start packing now!!!" Rei Ling exclaimed.
The dojo
"Mom!!! Where's my bathing suit?!?!?!" Takara asked as she threw multiple of clothes around the room.
"I left it in the 2nd drawer down!!!!" Hilary yelled back.
"AHHHH!!! DAICHI!!!! I TOLD YA ALREADY!!! THAT'S MY SWIMMING TRUNKS!!!!" Tyson exclaimed.
"THEN WHERE'S MINE?!?!?!" Daichi asked.
"HOW SHOULD I KNOW!?!?!?!"
"Aren't you wearing them now?" Takara asked.
Daichi looked down and scratched behind his head as he blushed.
"Oh yea...I knew that..."
"Right..." Tyson said as he sweatdropped. "Can't even find your boxers when you're a teen...."
"NOT FUNNY!!!!"
The Hiwatari Residence
Kiara and Kyle were walking against the wall as they were trying to hide Kai behind them so that their mother doesn't find out that Kai's a teen again. "How long do we have to do this?" Kyle whispered.
"Until we're in my room," Kai whispered back.
"Is there sign of mom?"
"So far, no sign..." Kiara whispered.
"Good keep going..." Kai whispered.
"Why do we have to whisper so often?" Kyle asked.
"Nevermind that...just go to my room..."
They cautiously went throught the hall, up the stairs and in front of Kai's room. "I think it's safe..." Kiara said.
"Yea...I hope so..." Kyle said.
"Alright then...let's just pack and then...sneak out again tomorrow morning..."
"Ok then..."
Kiara and Kyle left their father alone.
Kai sighed in relief that his wife is not here. He opened the door, went through and shut it behind him. The room was dark. So, Kai turned on the light switch.
Once the lights turned on....
"AHHHH!!!! Kaoru!!!!!"
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END OF CHAPTER
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