Ooo, goody! This is another Nolan chappie. I edited this one too ^-^;;. I
think the chapters Nolan writes are going to take longer than the ones I
write. And also, there will probably be a huge break soon where I wont be
writing for a while because I have a ton to do. I recently started working
with my fellow authoress, Mistress-Koneko, on the eighth grade literary
magazine, which no one else thought of doing. Also, the eighth grade play
is coming up soon, and I have a pretty major, though not totally, role, and
so have to be there a lot. But if I get at least 10 reviews, I'll speed up
my work.
If there are any mistakes that Nolan or I missed, I'm SOOO sorry!!!
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I belong to my parents. I have no free will!!! ----
Hiei felt Kuwabara's spirit energy completely go out, and he knew why. Yusuke had found them. He had to get there before anyone else died, especially Yukina and his niece and Nephew. He was so close to the Mukuro too, but he had to be there for his family.
Hiei finally returned to human world somewhere in Tokyo. He immediately tried searching for any kind of sprit energies of his friends. His blood ran cold when he realized that there were none. Hiei flashed from the streets of Tokyo to the top of a near by tall building.
Hiei began to concentrate again and still could not sense any kind of sprit energy. 'Damn,' he spoke to himself, 'I should have sensed Yusuke, or at least one of the others. Wait.Kurama, YUKINA, RYUZO, UMIYOU!' Hiei became slightly panicked at the thought of his sister, Kurama and their children. 'All right no more playing around, even if it is a risk for Yusuke to sense my energy,' Hiei quickly removed the cloth from his forehead and the third eye opened quickly as his sense of awareness increased dramatically. He sensed two energies after a second or two. One was very faint and the other was not much better. 'Wait, I can't sense Yukina or...'
Hiei could sense some enormous power a little way's outside Tokyo. Hiei directed his Jaganshi toward it. It immediately detected Yusuke and he was surely different looking, more demon like than anything. He looked like his demon form, only different, more demonic. Hiei put the band quickly around his Jaganshi. He new Yusuke had sensed him and was probably on his way toward him. Hiei knew he could not risk the safety of his sister and Kurama and the kids by rushing over to help them, he would end up leading Yusuke to them.
Hiei squirmed and began to speak again, "I have no Choice, and I must battle Yusuke and buy Kurama time to escape with Yukina and the kids. I swear Kurama and Yukina on my life I will buy you time to escape." Hiei dashed to the outer parts of Tokyo and headed toward a great power heading directly to him as well, ignoring the rain and thunder that surrounded the area.
*****
Kurama woke up under the debris of his once beautiful house. He was extremely dazed. Rain and lighting had been coming down from the sky for a while now. The house was completely blackened, which probably meant the rain had saved him from a fire of sorts.
Kurama finally came to his full senses. 'Damn, I was way off my guard for that.' As he started to think of Yusuke, Kurama's eyes twitched with anger. 'How could you do this to us, you no good bastard? You attacked my fam-.' at the thought of this Kurama's eye's widened as far as they could as terror crept to his soul. His family, where was his family?
Kurama stood up with some trouble and then began running as fast as he could out of the rubble. As soon as he reached the familiar grass, he started calling out Yukina's name. He was about to call out his son's name just then a flash of distant lightning brightened the view of what his eyes saw for a moment and deepened the bitter terror. He started walking toward what he had seen, where he saw a green haired woman and the remained bits of a red haired boy motionless on the ground only a couple of feet apart. No Kurama whispered while coming next to the motionless bodies of his wife and son. Tears pricked at his eyes as he fell to his knees besides his wife's body. "Yukina," he whispered between a small sob. Kurama gently flipped her body over to meet glazed over burgundy eyes. Kurama was at a total loss; his dead wife was in his arms and only a couple of feet away was his mutilated son.
It took every ounce of energy to hold back from the pure adrenalin rage that would consume him if he looked at his son's body again. But for the moment Kurama was concentrating on his dead wife. "Yukina," Kurama barely got threw his trembling voice before braking down into a flood of tears, which he dammed up for what seemed a gruesome eternity to hide.
Kurama pulled her body close to his and buried his head into her shoulder as deep as he could. All of his thoughts removed focus from his child as he thought of his beautiful perfect wife, and finally let out all his tears and sobs, with nothing but pure pain gripping the very pits of his eternal soul.
No, Kurama would surely never feel pain as scaring as this ever gains, not even close. After grieving for what seemed like hours for Kurama, he all in one motion stopped to glance at his son's body, the sight of which he had been avoiding, all pain and sadness took a one hundred eighty degree turn to pure rage.
In an instant Kurama stood to his feet and spirit energy flowed around him, like white wind, encircling him. "YUSUKE!" he screamed with bitter loathing toward his former friend, hoping Yusuke could hear him. Kurama started changing into Youko, letting his spirit energy rise to its full. 'Yusuke I don't care if it's me who does it, but I will witness your execrating death mark my words you will.'
He froze and all his power went to normal in seconds. He could have sworn he heard a baby cry. "AH, OH NO RYUZO!" Kurama cursed him self for forgetting his baby daughter so easily. He was in the wreckage in seconds searching and searching. After looking for what seemed like ages to Youko, he finally found her under some boards with her blankets being wet and ripped somewhat. Bedside's a small cut on her cheek was fine, but cold and scared. It was a wonder she had survived the collapse of the building. Kurama started crying again, weeping over and to his daughter that he was sorry for everything. That he would watch over her forever. She was all he had left of his family.
Kurama finally finished burying his son and wife next to each other in the forest. They were next to each other, their gravestones made out of plain wood with crosses engraved. Kurama put one flower each on of the graves. While he did this he had his daughter bunched in his back in a plastic basket that Yukina some times used when carting her around the house while cleaning. It was one of few things that had survived the collapse.
Two tears slid down his check and a few more came. Kurama finally spoke out "I'm sorry, but I can't say I can ever forgive him. I'll hate him even when he's dead." Kurama then bravely like with a forced smile. "I'll see you again, both of you, but until then, I'll miss you every moment Ill live here in this world." With that, Kurama was finished and turned around, ready for his quest to stop Yusuke Urameshi.
*****
"Well, well," muttered Yusuke "it took you long enough to get here Shorty." He said this very arrogantly and slyly.
"Well if you hadn't turned and started flying away from me like a coward we would have already been done with our fight." Retorted an irritated and angry Hiei.
"Why did you lead me out here Hiei?" asked Yusuke in an amused tone. Hiei smirked
"To show you the true power of the Jagan" and energy surrounded Hiei's body as he reached back and grabbed his Katana.
"Hold on," Said an annoyed Yusuke, "You know perfectly well you have absolutely no chance against me," Yusuke muttered confidently. "But I must admit your power is impressive, you would put up a fight better then anyone else."
Hiei stopped charging up and put back his katana back. "What are you getting at Yusuke?" Hiei stated plainly with all his power settling down.
"What I mean Hiei is a proposition," Yusuke looked at Hiei seriously "I'll give you exactly one week to train and prepare for another Makai Tournament." Hiei stared at Yusuke with big eyes as he heard the unfolding words from his rival's mouth. "This will be your last stand against me because I will kill you, and knowing this, I hope you train real hard so I can have at least one more challenge before total dominance and Rule of the three worlds," Yusuke stared laughing as he finished "I cant wait to win and kill you all and gain the power that you all hold power."
Hiei stared and Motioned to Yuskay that he was Crazy. Yuskay stopped at that statement and charged Hiei with such speed that Hiei only was able to take a step back and was punched in the gut viscously. Hiei coughed up blood and clutched to his stomach and fell to his knees. "That's a taste of things to come, Hiei the Forbidden Child. Your death will come to you in exactly one week. Too bad your sister wont be here to see it because I broke her frail little neck."
With that said, Yusuke disappeared, opining his portal and leaving the shocked Hiei alone in the wilderness. No Yu.kina was Hiei's word before he saw nothing but darkness.
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I'm sorry this took so long. THANK YOU NOLAN FOR PUTTING IN SOME EXTA EFFORT!!! I was being really mean about the last section of this chapter because it was beyond correction (I had been staring at it for three days trying to figure it out). I was being such a nag, and I now feel really bad. But anyway, I was being a snot and saying that he wasn't working hard enough on the grammar (even though he was). So I sent it back to him, and he rewrote it, twice!! He deserves the honorable mention award!!!! YAY NOLAN!!!
If there are any mistakes that Nolan or I missed, I'm SOOO sorry!!!
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I belong to my parents. I have no free will!!! ----
Hiei felt Kuwabara's spirit energy completely go out, and he knew why. Yusuke had found them. He had to get there before anyone else died, especially Yukina and his niece and Nephew. He was so close to the Mukuro too, but he had to be there for his family.
Hiei finally returned to human world somewhere in Tokyo. He immediately tried searching for any kind of sprit energies of his friends. His blood ran cold when he realized that there were none. Hiei flashed from the streets of Tokyo to the top of a near by tall building.
Hiei began to concentrate again and still could not sense any kind of sprit energy. 'Damn,' he spoke to himself, 'I should have sensed Yusuke, or at least one of the others. Wait.Kurama, YUKINA, RYUZO, UMIYOU!' Hiei became slightly panicked at the thought of his sister, Kurama and their children. 'All right no more playing around, even if it is a risk for Yusuke to sense my energy,' Hiei quickly removed the cloth from his forehead and the third eye opened quickly as his sense of awareness increased dramatically. He sensed two energies after a second or two. One was very faint and the other was not much better. 'Wait, I can't sense Yukina or...'
Hiei could sense some enormous power a little way's outside Tokyo. Hiei directed his Jaganshi toward it. It immediately detected Yusuke and he was surely different looking, more demon like than anything. He looked like his demon form, only different, more demonic. Hiei put the band quickly around his Jaganshi. He new Yusuke had sensed him and was probably on his way toward him. Hiei knew he could not risk the safety of his sister and Kurama and the kids by rushing over to help them, he would end up leading Yusuke to them.
Hiei squirmed and began to speak again, "I have no Choice, and I must battle Yusuke and buy Kurama time to escape with Yukina and the kids. I swear Kurama and Yukina on my life I will buy you time to escape." Hiei dashed to the outer parts of Tokyo and headed toward a great power heading directly to him as well, ignoring the rain and thunder that surrounded the area.
*****
Kurama woke up under the debris of his once beautiful house. He was extremely dazed. Rain and lighting had been coming down from the sky for a while now. The house was completely blackened, which probably meant the rain had saved him from a fire of sorts.
Kurama finally came to his full senses. 'Damn, I was way off my guard for that.' As he started to think of Yusuke, Kurama's eyes twitched with anger. 'How could you do this to us, you no good bastard? You attacked my fam-.' at the thought of this Kurama's eye's widened as far as they could as terror crept to his soul. His family, where was his family?
Kurama stood up with some trouble and then began running as fast as he could out of the rubble. As soon as he reached the familiar grass, he started calling out Yukina's name. He was about to call out his son's name just then a flash of distant lightning brightened the view of what his eyes saw for a moment and deepened the bitter terror. He started walking toward what he had seen, where he saw a green haired woman and the remained bits of a red haired boy motionless on the ground only a couple of feet apart. No Kurama whispered while coming next to the motionless bodies of his wife and son. Tears pricked at his eyes as he fell to his knees besides his wife's body. "Yukina," he whispered between a small sob. Kurama gently flipped her body over to meet glazed over burgundy eyes. Kurama was at a total loss; his dead wife was in his arms and only a couple of feet away was his mutilated son.
It took every ounce of energy to hold back from the pure adrenalin rage that would consume him if he looked at his son's body again. But for the moment Kurama was concentrating on his dead wife. "Yukina," Kurama barely got threw his trembling voice before braking down into a flood of tears, which he dammed up for what seemed a gruesome eternity to hide.
Kurama pulled her body close to his and buried his head into her shoulder as deep as he could. All of his thoughts removed focus from his child as he thought of his beautiful perfect wife, and finally let out all his tears and sobs, with nothing but pure pain gripping the very pits of his eternal soul.
No, Kurama would surely never feel pain as scaring as this ever gains, not even close. After grieving for what seemed like hours for Kurama, he all in one motion stopped to glance at his son's body, the sight of which he had been avoiding, all pain and sadness took a one hundred eighty degree turn to pure rage.
In an instant Kurama stood to his feet and spirit energy flowed around him, like white wind, encircling him. "YUSUKE!" he screamed with bitter loathing toward his former friend, hoping Yusuke could hear him. Kurama started changing into Youko, letting his spirit energy rise to its full. 'Yusuke I don't care if it's me who does it, but I will witness your execrating death mark my words you will.'
He froze and all his power went to normal in seconds. He could have sworn he heard a baby cry. "AH, OH NO RYUZO!" Kurama cursed him self for forgetting his baby daughter so easily. He was in the wreckage in seconds searching and searching. After looking for what seemed like ages to Youko, he finally found her under some boards with her blankets being wet and ripped somewhat. Bedside's a small cut on her cheek was fine, but cold and scared. It was a wonder she had survived the collapse of the building. Kurama started crying again, weeping over and to his daughter that he was sorry for everything. That he would watch over her forever. She was all he had left of his family.
Kurama finally finished burying his son and wife next to each other in the forest. They were next to each other, their gravestones made out of plain wood with crosses engraved. Kurama put one flower each on of the graves. While he did this he had his daughter bunched in his back in a plastic basket that Yukina some times used when carting her around the house while cleaning. It was one of few things that had survived the collapse.
Two tears slid down his check and a few more came. Kurama finally spoke out "I'm sorry, but I can't say I can ever forgive him. I'll hate him even when he's dead." Kurama then bravely like with a forced smile. "I'll see you again, both of you, but until then, I'll miss you every moment Ill live here in this world." With that, Kurama was finished and turned around, ready for his quest to stop Yusuke Urameshi.
*****
"Well, well," muttered Yusuke "it took you long enough to get here Shorty." He said this very arrogantly and slyly.
"Well if you hadn't turned and started flying away from me like a coward we would have already been done with our fight." Retorted an irritated and angry Hiei.
"Why did you lead me out here Hiei?" asked Yusuke in an amused tone. Hiei smirked
"To show you the true power of the Jagan" and energy surrounded Hiei's body as he reached back and grabbed his Katana.
"Hold on," Said an annoyed Yusuke, "You know perfectly well you have absolutely no chance against me," Yusuke muttered confidently. "But I must admit your power is impressive, you would put up a fight better then anyone else."
Hiei stopped charging up and put back his katana back. "What are you getting at Yusuke?" Hiei stated plainly with all his power settling down.
"What I mean Hiei is a proposition," Yusuke looked at Hiei seriously "I'll give you exactly one week to train and prepare for another Makai Tournament." Hiei stared at Yusuke with big eyes as he heard the unfolding words from his rival's mouth. "This will be your last stand against me because I will kill you, and knowing this, I hope you train real hard so I can have at least one more challenge before total dominance and Rule of the three worlds," Yusuke stared laughing as he finished "I cant wait to win and kill you all and gain the power that you all hold power."
Hiei stared and Motioned to Yuskay that he was Crazy. Yuskay stopped at that statement and charged Hiei with such speed that Hiei only was able to take a step back and was punched in the gut viscously. Hiei coughed up blood and clutched to his stomach and fell to his knees. "That's a taste of things to come, Hiei the Forbidden Child. Your death will come to you in exactly one week. Too bad your sister wont be here to see it because I broke her frail little neck."
With that said, Yusuke disappeared, opining his portal and leaving the shocked Hiei alone in the wilderness. No Yu.kina was Hiei's word before he saw nothing but darkness.
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I'm sorry this took so long. THANK YOU NOLAN FOR PUTTING IN SOME EXTA EFFORT!!! I was being really mean about the last section of this chapter because it was beyond correction (I had been staring at it for three days trying to figure it out). I was being such a nag, and I now feel really bad. But anyway, I was being a snot and saying that he wasn't working hard enough on the grammar (even though he was). So I sent it back to him, and he rewrote it, twice!! He deserves the honorable mention award!!!! YAY NOLAN!!!