Disclaimer: Sorry to inform all of you, but I do not own Sailor Moon. But then it might be a good thing, because I'd never get it finished and published in time, so then you won't be able to see the show, therefore I won't be writing the fanfic right now, and …yeah, I'll stop now.
Hey everyone!
Guess what, today is my birthday! Isn't it awesome? I'm 14 now! Wait…I never did tell you guys that I was 13 before…did I? Well…now ya know. I'm so happy I finally turned 14!!!
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I wish all of you a late Merry Christmas and a late Happy New Year! Btw, did any if you made your New Year's Resolutions yet? I have a long, long list!!! LOL!
I had this story written out on December 31, 2004, and I haven't edited it…yet. So anyone wanna help?
Yep, I know…I always put things off to the last minute. But I was pretty busy during the vacation time. Just imagine, I've already had 5 Christmas Feasts at 5 different houses, and my family doesn't even live around here! Anywayz, I'm all stuffed up.
For a period of time, I actually thought about abandoning this fan fiction, because my brain was so drained, but then came all of your reviews. So I really wanna thank all of you. I can't believe I got 106 reviews!!! That's really awesome!!! You guys are what are keeping me from quitting. I really appreciate it!
I know I sorta promised you guys I'll update every other week, bust as you can see, that's quite impossible right. I have no idea when the next update will be, but just keep a look out. I just might surprise you! )
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Here is a list of things that prevented me from updating the story:
1. You all know that school started, so that limited my time on the computer.
2. Two weeks after school started, the roof of my school got hit by a lightning during a really bad thunderstorm, which resulted burning up the roof, and flooding the building.
3. Because of that, we have to move to another school, and share a building with the other students, which then resulted our schedule to change to 11:30 a.m. to 5:00 p.m., which totally jumbled up MY schedule.
4. As if that wasn't enough, I'm sure you all heard of Hurricane Ivan, and guess what. It headed straight at us! Which then in turn turned my schedule further more, because we lost electricity, and everything.
5. After 3 month, we finally went back to our school, which has been fix, and returned to our normal schedule, but guess what, we were hit head on with 3 projects, and 6 tests! There was even one time that we had to take a test in every subject on the same day!
6. So school totally sucks (I can't believe I actually said that!).
7. You say I could probably finish the story during vacation times, but I can't. During Thanksgiving, I had to go to 3 thanksgiving diners! It's enough to put anyone to sleep!
8. After that, I had to study for the most important test of the quarter, which takes up 20 of our final average.
So as you can see, I was pretty banged up that half of the year, hopefully the next half will be much more smooth.
Another reason I have updated this story for so long, is because I keep on getting new ideas, and I had to write them down, which in turn formed new stories. (I haven't posted them yet…I'm gonna wait until I basically have a story line for every one of them…then I'll post them.) I tried to combine them into this fanfic, but it didn't working very well. And plus the fact I'm a bit stumped by where this fanfic is going. I have no idea how I'm going to end this, so suggestions are welcome!
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NEWZ:
For those who still want to know the site please continue on emailing me your email address, or rather yet…just check out my profile. It's my homepage.
I wrote a few more songs that might or might not go with this story. I'll update it on Sweet Song, so you can have a look.
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CLUES:
Why did I make Serena forgive the scouts so easily?Because I wanted to show that she has a big heart, and will forgive people easily.
Is this a Serena/Darien story? Yes, it is. I know it doesn't look like it, but it is.
I think you guys had enough of my rumblings now…so on with the reason why you are really here…and no, you cannot have a piece of my birthday cake. ::stucks my tongue out and blew raspberries:: the cake is all mine! Mwhahahahahaha!
(A/N sry to interrupt you again, but know that this story has not been edited…so, bear it with me, and whoever wants to help me edit it, please leave a review!)
" Are you sure, are you ready for this?" Asked a concerned Diane.
"Of course," answered Serena, " I'm as ready as I'll every be."
Smirking, Violet said, " You go girl! Show that Rei bitch what you are made of!"
"Yea! Show her who you really are!" Said Rose.
"Thank you guys so much!" Said Serena, smiling, with tears in her eyes." I don't think I would have the courage to do this, if it weren't for you guys."
Silently Serena prayed, Goddess Selene please watch over me. Please let me win. Please let me beat Rei.
With that said, the girls had a group hug.
Then, they heard the announcement: "Ladies and gentlemen! Welcome! Welcome to the contest of Miss Rei against the Angel of All, Miss Angelina DeVine, lead singer of Lustful!"
And…the crowd went wild!
Chants of "Angelina" echoed throughout the stadium.
After awhile, the crowd finally quieted down, so the announcer continued, "Well…seems to me that everyone is eager to see both young beautiful ladies competing as much as I do. So, without farther delays, please welcome…Miss Rei Hino!"
The crowds clapped politely, and some even whistled.
Entering from the left side of the stage, Rei, wearing a revealing, blood red dress with a low neckline…let me rehearse that. A very, very low neckline, which exposed much of her cleavage, leaving almost nothing to the imagination. The dress cascaded down to the floor in waves of orange flames, and the sleeves trailing down to her ankle. Her hair was shimmering with glitter, and flowed down her back. All in all, she looked like a princess from hell.
After the crowds finished admiring Rei's beauty. The announcer shouted, "Now, please give it up for the one you've all been waiting for…Miss Angelina DeVine!"
Catcalls, whistles, scream, and shouts can all be heard in every corner of the stadium. The entire audience rose up as one, welcoming their Queen of Music.
Smiling warmly, Serena entered the right side of the stage in her silvery shear gown, that hugged her every curve, and emphasized her long smooth legs. The gown is made of pure silk, accessorized with wavy gold trims, and soft, pink ribbons intertwined around her breast line and her sleeves' edge.
Whenever she moves, the gown moved with her as one. The sheer layers of silk swirled in delight, the stage light reflecting the glow of her golden tiara, and her silvery blond hair cascaded down her bare back in waterfalls of curls and tangled with light pink ribbons.
Everything about Serena gave one a feeling of elegance, royal, and poised. She was everything a princess should be, and everything a girl want to be.
Her pink glossy lips widened into a grin, when Serena spotted her family sitting in the crowd. Flashing everyone a confident grin, and waving her hands in hello, she sat down on a chair next to Rei.
"Well, well, well. Now we have seen both of their beauty, it's time to hear their talent! Don't you all agree with me?" The announcer shouted into the microphone.
Waves of screams of yes thundered the crowded stadium.
"Then let's not wait any longer! Through flipping a coin, we have already decided that Miss Rei will go first. Then Miss Angelina will follow, and then back to Miss Rei, and so on. Miss Rei and Miss Angelina will both sing three songs. The first song has to be a popular one that we already know, and cannot be composed by her. The second one has to be one that they each had picked for the other. And the last one needs to be a song, composed by her, and it needs to be a brand new song. One nobody has heard before! So let's welcome Miss Rei, and wish her good luck!"
Cause she is going to need it. Thought Serena, as she watched the crowd go wild for Rei, and then finally quieting down to let her give her speech, and then sing.
You better watch out, Rei. I'm serious. I'm not a naïve, crybaby teenager, anymore. I'm all grown up, and know what the world is like out there. You better give your best shot here, because I'm not going to go easy on you any longer! Today is the day that you are going to be humiliated, like I was. You are going to be beaten, like I was, and guess what? I'm going to enjoy every single little bit of it! I'm going to let you see what I had to go through, feel the pain I had to endure, and hear the crowd laughing at you, like you did to me. Today is the day you are going to pay! ……
With a smirk on her face, Serena continued to listen to Rei's speech.
"… So I hope you all will vote for me. Singing had always been my hobby. It's my life. And I don't what I'll do if I ever lose it. Please don't take it away from me, help me win this contest. Now on with my first song, Skater Boy by Avril Lavigne. I'm going to dedicate this song to my boyfriend, Darien. "
The crowd went wild again, wondering what Miss Rei has in store for them. The spotlights flew to Darien's face, where he was grinning at Rei, who on the stage was blowing him kisses.
Ugh! Though Serena. Just seeing them together made her sick.
Softly, music flowed in to the crowded room, and everyone went quiet.
Then Rei's voice broke through the silence.
He was a boy
She was a girl
Can I make it anymore obvious?
He was a punk.
And she did ballet.
What more can I say?
At that point, Rei walked right next to Serena and sang in her face.
He wanted her.
She'd never tell.
Secretly she wanted him as well.
And all of her friends
stuck up their nose.
And they had a problem with his baggy clothes.
After glaring at her, long and hard, Rei walked down the stage and went to Darien.
He was a sk8er boy she said see ya later boy.
He wasn't good enough for her.
She had a pretty face but her head was up in space.
She needed to come back down to earth.
Five years from now
She sits at home
Feeding the baby she's all alone.
She turns on TV
And guess who she sees.
Sk8er boy rocking up MTV.
She calls up her friends.
They already know
and they've all got tickets to see his show.
She tags along,
Stands in the crowd.
Looks up at the man that she turned down.
Again, Rei looked pointedly at Serena, which by now caused confused murmurs to travel through the crowd. Everyone was wondering what's going on between the two singers.
He was an sk8er boy she said see ya later boy.
He wasn't good enough for her.
Now he's a superstar slamming on his guitar
to show pretty face what he's worth.
Sorry girl but you missed out.
Well tough luck that boy's mine now.
We are more than just good friends.
This is how the story ends.
Too bad that you couldn't see…
See the man that boy could be.
There is more than meets the eye,
I see the soul that is inside.
Rei then boldly sat on Darien's lap, and Darien intertwined his arms around her slim waist. Leaning back, she softly sang:
He's just a boy,
And I'm just a girl.
Can I make it anymore obvious?
We are in love.
Haven't you heard how we rock each other's world?
I met the sk8er boy I said see ya later boy.
I'll be backstage after the show.
I'll be at the studio singing the song he wrote about a girl he use to know.
I met the sk8er boy I said see ya later boy.
I'll be backstage after the show.
I'll be at the studio singing the song he wrote about a girl he used to know.
The music then ended, with Rei and Darien sharing a passionate kiss.
The crowd again went wild, and Rei and Darien both smirked against each other's lips.
Serena feels like she's about to throw up, but she put on a brave face, and smiled a huge fake smile at Rei, when she finally finished making out with Darien.
Smiling at the crowd, especially her family, and the gang of girls, Serena started her speech.
"Hello, everyone. I know that all of you were probably amazed by Rei's singing as I was. However I'm sorry to inform you, but now it's time for you to hear me sing. I know that doesn't sound like fun, but please bear it with me. To those who still don't know my real name, it's Serena Tsukino. But you can still call me Angelina. Tokyo is my hometown. I grew up here, and lived here most of my life. I have two wonderful parents and a devastatingly handsome brother! Hehehe…you can see him blushing in the back, over there. Anyways, that's enough about my background, and let's get on with my songs, shall we?"
The crowds roared with approval, after turning their heads from Shingo's beet red face.
Smiling happily, Serena continued, "the first song I'm going to sing is Break away, by Kelly Clarkson. It sort related to me as to how I started my career."
Again, the stadium went as quiet as a mouse.
And slowly a sweet voice drifted through, followed by flowing music.
Da, da, da, da, da..
Da, da, da, da, da, da
Da, da, da, da, da, da...
Da, da, da, da, da.
Da, da, da, da, da.
Da, da, da, da, da, da, da ...
Serena started walking off the stage with the spotlight glowing around her.
Grew up in a small town
And when the rain would fall down
I'd just stare out my window
Dreaming of what could be
And if I'd end up happy
I would pray
Trying hard to reach out
But when I tried to speak out
Felt like no one could hear me
Wanted to belong here
But something felt so wrong here
So I'd pray
(I would pray)
I could breakaway.
Slowly, while singing, she made her way up to her family.
I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes till I touch the sky
Make a wish, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I wont forget all the ones that I love
Take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway.
Softly, she added a part of her own to the song. While the music got softer, Serena took the chance and said softly in to the microphone, "Mom, dad, and Shingo. Me going away had nothing to do with you. I just needed a little change, that's all. I hope you guys would all forgive me."
And the crowd went aww, while Rei's eyes threw dagger at Serena.
Da, da, da
Da, da, da, da
Da, da, da, da, da, da ...
The music continued, as Serena moved back up to the stage.
Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleeping under palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Getting on a fast train
Travel on an airplane
Far away
And breakaway
I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes till I touch the sky
Make a wish, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
I wont forget all the ones that I love
I gotta, take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Standing in the middle of the stage, Serena sang her heart out.
Buildings with a hundred floors
Swinging on the run down doors
Maybe I don't know where they'll take me
But, gotta keep moving on, moving on
Fly away!
Breakaway!
I spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
Though its not easy to tell you good bye
Gotta, take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I wont forget the place I come from
I gotta
Take a risk, take a chance, make a change
and breakaway
Breakaway
Breakaway.
Softly the music faded out, and Serena smiled as the entire stadium echoed with applause and shouts of approval.
The only two people who weren't clapping were Rei and Darien, even though Darien did have to admit that Serena was pretty good.
Grabbing the microphone away from Serena, Rei went up to the stage again, and smiled lightly.
"Well, Serena certainly lived up to her title. She is a very good singer, but now let's what her imagination brings, shall we?"
Still plastering the fake bright smile on her lips, Rei asked Serena, "Now it's the second round, and I'm suppose to sing a song you've picked for me. So, what is it?"
Smirking at Rei, Serena replied, " I have chosen Shadow, by Ashlee Simpson."
"Perfect," Said Rei. "That song will just describe how I feel."
And she started singing.
I was six years old
When my parents went away
I was stuck inside a broken life
I couldn't wish away
She was beautiful
She had everything and more
And my escape was hiding out and running for the door
Rei sang melodically, while holding out her hands to Serena. Now the crowd was really puzzled. What's going on?
Somebody listen please
It used to be so hard being me
Living in the shadow
of someone else's dream
trying to find a hand to hold
But every touch felt cold to me
Living in a nightmare
a never-ending sleep
but now that I am wide-awake
My chains are finally free
Don't feel sorry for me
Rei turned back to face the crowd, and continued to sing the song, while moving her body, dramatically.
All the days collided
One less perfect than the next
I was stuck inside someone else's life and always second best
Oh, I love you now 'cause now I realize
That it's safe outside to come alive in my identity
So if you're listening
There's so much more to me you haven't seen
Living in the shadow
Of someone else's dream
Trying to find a hand to hold but every touch felt cold to me
Living in a nightmare
A never-ending sleep
But now that I am wide awake
Then I can finally be
Don't feel sorry-
Rei then gestured up to the sky, the heaven, while her parents rest.
Mother, sister, father, sister, mother
Everything's cool now
Mother, sister, father, sister, mother
Everything's cool now
Oh, my life is good
I've got more than anyone should
Oh, my life is good
And the past in the past
I was living in the shadow
Of someone else's dream
Trying to find a hand to hold but every touch felt cold to me
I'm living in a new day
I'm living it for me
And now that I am wide awake
I can finally be
Don't feel sorry for me
Don't feel sorry, don't feel sorry for me
Living in, living in, living in the shadow
Living in, living in, living in a new day
Smiling happily, Rei sat down, while handing the microphone to Serena.
Clapping along with the rest of the audience, Serena said, "Well…that was quite a performance, Rei. It was great! Now please tell me what song am I going to sing next?"
Rei smirked, " I picked What dreams are made of, by Hilary Duff."
"Very well," Said Serena, "I dedicated this to Mina, Ami, and Lita!"
The stage dimmed again, the ceiling now shimmered with lights, pretending to be stars. And Serena begins to sing, while jumping up and down.
Hey now
Hey now
Hey now
Hey now
Have you ever seen such a beautiful night?
I could almost kiss the stars for shining so bright
When I see you smile and I go
oh oh oh
I would never want to miss this
cuz in my heart I know what this is
While still singing, Serena moved down to where Ami, Mina, and Lita were seated.
Hey now
Hey now
This is what dreams are made of
Hey now
Hey now
This is what dreams are made of
I've got somewhere I belong
I've got somebody to love
This is what dreams are made of
Squeezing herself between the girls, Serena hugged them, and continued singing. Happily, the girls giggled, while Serena pointed up to the ceiling.
Meanwhile Darien was gazing at Serena in awe. He couldn't believe even at such an age, she was still like a child, so bubbly, and cute. So naïve, and innocent. He could just picture her cuddling a white, fluffy bunny. Never had he realize how sweet Serena was, and how beautiful she was right now, gazing at the ceiling, while she sang. Her cerulean eyes were filled with joy and happiness, while the white gown made her look like the Moon Princess she was.
The song continued on, while Darien was lost in his thought, unaware of Rei's piercing gaze.
Have you ever wondered what life is about?
You could search the world and never figure it out
you don't have to sail all the oceans
no no no
happiness is no mystery and
here now it's you and me
Open your eyes
(This is what dreams are made of)
shout to the sky
(This is what dreams are made of)
Then I see u smile and I go
oh oh oh
Yesterday my life was duller
Now everything's Technicolor
(Hey now)
(Hey now)
Hey now
This is what dreams
this is what dreams are made of
I've got somewhere I belong
I've got somebody to love
this is what dreams are made of
this is what dreams are made of
With the crowd applauding in the background, the girls shared one last hug, before Serena moved back up to the stage.
"Well, that was fantastic Miss Angelina," came the announcer's booming voice. "Now it's down to the final round. This round is where both ladies will sing a song written by themselves, and a song which no one has heard of before."
The noise level increased 100 times, as the crowd all stood up and encouraged both girls to sing.
Rei gave a wave at everyone, and said, "This is my last, and most treasured song. It will be dedicated to everyone. Please live your life the way you wanted, and please fight for what you want!"
Then she sat down on her piano and started to play the melody to match the song.
(A/N I wrote this song, about 5 minutes before I got to this part of the chapter. Hope you like it!)
Smile!
The sun shines down on you!
Laugh!
The wind dances in your hair!
Forget about the worries,
And clear your clouded mind.
Open up your big wide heart,
And search inside to see what you find!
The big screen behind Rei started showing images of children dancing, people laughing, families enjoying a picnic.
The atmosphere of the room kind of glowed with the thought of the happiness.
Everyday is a whole new day,
It's when another adventure begin.
Know that everything is okay,
You won't make the same mistake again!
Live like you've never lived before!
Loosen up, there's nothing to fear,
Just enjoy you life without a care.
Do what you want,
Forget the taunt.
Live like you've never lived before!
Curl you hair up frizzy!
And dance like you are crazy!
Break the rules!
Act like fools!
Live like you've never lived before!
Suddenly giggles filled the room. A bunch of toddlers, and little kids were being lead up to the stage, and jumped around Rei, as she continued to sing.
It's a wonderful world
Waiting out there.
So dry up you tears,
And you can see clear!
Free your soul!
And fly in your wing!
Reaching up to your goal,
And let your heart sing!
Everyday is a whole new day,
It's when another adventure begin.
Know that everything is okay,
You won't make the same mistake again!
Live like you've never lived before!
Loosen up, there's nothing to fear,
Just enjoy you life without a care.
Do what you want,
Forget the taunt.
Live like you've never lived before!
Bending down, Rei gently picked up a child, and played with her hair, while continued to sing, and playing the piano with the other hand.
Curl you hair up frizzy!
And dance like you are crazy!
Break the rules!
Act like fools!
Live like you've never lived before!
Da la lala lalalala
Da la lalala
Da la lala lalalala
Da la lalala
Smile!
The sun shines down on you.
Laugh!
The wind dances in your hair!
Live like you've never lived before!
And the song ended. All the little kids were lead down the stage. With one last wave, Rei sat down.
"That was another awesome performance!" Said Serena, into the microphone. "It was also inspiring. I was sitting there over in that seat, and I thought, Rei was right. We shouldn't be afraid. We should let our feelings out, and be happy. And that's why I decided to change my song at the last minute. This song I'm about to sing is from my heart. I just made it up. So of course no one has heard of it before, not even me."
The crowd gasped in shock, and murmurs spread out.
On the back stage, the girls wondered, what is Serena doing?
But Serena ignored everyone, "Since this is a brand new song, my band will not be able to play with me, therefore I'll just have to play for it myself. I'm going to warn you, this song contains lyric that I don't think is appropriate for little children, so you might want to lead them to the play room that is set up in the next door."
After another agonizing 30 minutes, the little children were all gone, but not with out a little whining on their part. And Serena continued, " Like I said, this song is from my heart. It expresses how I feel about my past, my life, and…betrayal. You all know I ran away from home, and now you will know why. This song expresses words from the deepest corner of my heart. And I thank Rei very much for giving me the inspiration and courage to make and sing this song. Its title is…Pay back's a Bitch!"(A/N I just got this song, out. I still have to edit it. But please just bear with me for now.))
The stadium got dark again, but unlike before, this time, you can't even see you hands in front of your eyes!
Then all of a sudden, the spotlight shined on Serena, who is holding an electric guitar.
Serena's fingered moved, and…
The guitar's sound vibrated off the walls.
Watch out!
Wacha looking at?
Chill out!
Are ya a scardy cat?
Pay back's a bitch!
Face up bitch!
It's time for you to pay!
I'm gonna make you regret
All the things you had to say
To meeeeeeee! Yeah!
Shut up!
I've heard enough of your lies!
It hurts so bad!
To think you would've just left me there
In the cold, dark night to die!
Well, it's time me to return the favor,
Payback's a bitch!
And to think I though you were my best bud
Now I realize how stupid I was
It's time for me to clean away the mud
And stop my crying for you cause.
It won't happen again!
Fire sprout from the corners of the room, and shocked gasp followed.
The spotlight disappeared, and everyone got quiet again.
It's all dark again, when all of a sudden…
Watch out!
Wacha looking at?
Chill out!
Are ya a scardy cat?
Serena appeared right in front of Darien, who looked like he had seen a ghost.
How can you cheat
With my ex-boyfriend to be!
I had to flea
From what my eyes had to see!
I would've trusted you with my very won life a few days ago!
I don't understand how you can sink so low!
Pay back's a bitch!
Fire sprouted out again, and lightning like light flew across the stage, lighting up the stadium for a second.
How can you come to my face?
And taint me with your dirty grace!
Just pack up your stupid suitcase
Cause you've lost the race!
Go back to your stinky rat hole!
Take away you heart that's as black as coal.
Just leave now and don't ever come back
You better start moving or I'll help you pack!
Get your big fat ass out the door!
Darkness engulfed the crowd yet again. This time everyone waited patiently to see where Serena would appear again…
Watch out!
Wacha looking at?
Chill out!
Are ya a scardy cat?
How can you cheat
With my ex-boyfriend to be!
I had to flea
From what my eyes had to see!
Serena appeared on stage again, right in front of Rei.
She has tipped over Rei's chair and was standing face to face with her, while shouting into her microphone.
I would've trusted you with my very won life a few days ago!
I don't understand how you can sink so low!
How could you hook up with Darien knowing it would break me heart?
Hope you are happy cuz the world knows your dirty little part!
How can you just go around and pretend everything is okay?
Do you feel good about what you did, Rei?
This time the crowd all gasped as one. Rei's secret was out.
And everyone was disgusted with the news.
How could you, bitch!
What did I tell ya
Pay back's a bitch
There's only so much a girl can take
So take your lies back to your ditch!
Fire sprouted again, and gunshots can be heard in the background, while lights flew in every direction blinding everyone.
Watch out!
Wacha looking at?
Chill out!
Are ya a scardy cat?
How can you cheat
With my ex-boyfriend to be!
I had to flea
From what my eyes had to see!
I would've trusted you with my very won life a few days ago!
I don't understand how you can sink so low!
Pay back's a bitch!
Pay back is a bitch!!!
Right in ya face!
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So,
What do you guys think? This is the longest chapter I've ever written in my life! 26 pages!!! So hopefully, it will make up for the lost time...ne? I was gonna cut this into 2 chapters, but I decided not too in the end.
Well…my hands are tired from typing and rushing to finish this.
This story still has a bit to go, but as you can see, Darien is starting to like Serena again, and yes don't worry he will pay.
Anywayz, I'll probably be busy for the next half of the year, so I'll make a deal with you.
If I get over 300 reviews for this chapter (which I'm sure I won't), I will finish the next chapter and posted it during spring break. (See? I know what I'm doing. ))
And if I don't get over 300 reviews…well…you guys will probably have to wait until summer vacation.
I'm sorry if I sound really mean. Believe me, I want the next chapter out ever more than you do. But I'm just too busy to write it; besides, I'm sorta outta idea right now. I just don't really have that much time to write stories. But the more review I get, the more enthusiasm I'll have to finish the story!
Here is a hint for the next chapter, because more than likely you won't be seeing it anytime soon.
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HINT:
Serena and Rei will have a lively debate. All their feelings will be out in the open, the world will finally know how those two feels about everything. And with the two strongest sailor scouts so distracted, and emotionally drain…who wouldn't think that it would be the best time to engage an attack?
(LOL, I'm not giving out any more information. ::sticks my tongue out:: Hopefully this will give you the courage to review, and the patience to wait for the next chapter! Mwhahahahaha!!!)
Besides, like I said, I sorta started a few new stories, so I have to distribute my ideas evenly.
Well…I'm off to my birthday party, so see you next time!
Also checkout my other stories, and my sailor moon site! (It's my homepage!)
Luv always!
Princess Of Star
THANKS: (I've put the review's in alphabetical order, so it would be easier for you to find your screen name!)
First of all, I wanna thank all of you for waiting so patiently for my story.
….: I really have no idea who you are, but thx for the…scolding? I have no idea what you meant by my grammar. I take it that you don't like it. Well…do you want to edit for me? I know I shouldn't be asking for more reviews that way, but I was in a bad mood. I was about to give up the story, so you have to give me some kind of encouragement. Oh, Canada was cool, literally. LOL. I had fun.
Alexis De Silva: LOL. Great French! LOL. You vote will be counted.
Allison: Thx for the great review!
Allison: I'm not sure if you are the same Allison as above, but um…thx? I know I have a lot of reviews, but still. It could be better don't you think? Always reach for the best…right?
AngelicDevil28: thx for the review! But the vote is your choice!
Ania: aww, that's really sweet of you! Well, I've updated, and you can tell your friends that too. Hope I haven't kept you guys waiting too long! Please continue to read my story! Hope you and your friends enjoy the site! Your idea was good, but I'm thinking of doing that after the contest.
Anonymous: sorry, I don't know your name. Maybe because you wanted to hide your identity, or maybe you are in such a hurry to review me, you forgot to post your name. Or maybe you think that I might be mad at you, so you didn't put your name. I think I prefer the second one. LOL. Um…thx for the review. I understand you don't like this fanfic very much, but may I ask why? Should I add something to it? Please tell me! And I know there are more stories that are better than mine. Heck, I'm even surprised I got this many reviews!
Archangel Rhapsody: thx for the review!
A source: thx for adding my fan fiction to your fav. List!
a-unique-rose: thx for the idea, but there are already too many fanfics like that, and I don't wanna mine to be just like that. Thx for the review though.
Babe-galanime: yes, Serena and Darien will be together in the end.
Beebeekee: Thx a bunch for the review! Aww! I'm glad my story is so emotional, but please stop crying, I'll feel bad.
Bianca Knight: LOL. Thx for the review! Yes, it is Darien/Serena pairing. I know it doesn't look like it, but it will.
Black Lion: thx for the review!
Black wolf girl: Thx for the review! Your vote has been counted!
Bradybunch4529: you vote has been counted! I know, I'm glad that Serena is so brave too.
Cassandra: Thx for the compliment, I liked the songs too. They are actually part of the reason why I started this fanfic! Sorry to keep you waiting!
CatWomen88: Thx for the compliment! You vote has been counted!
Chelsea: yes, Rei will be humiliated, I think this chapter just proved it, but I don't know if there will be anything worse for her.
Cherryblows01: LOL. Thx for the compliment. You vote has been counted.
Crystal-starlight: um…thx? I'm not really sure about what you said, because you used a lot of very big words. sweat drops hopefully, you have not forgotten this story yet.
Daffodil: aww! Thx so much! Now you've made me blush! LOL.
Dafodile: I'm not sure if you are the same person as above, but thx. You are very sweet!!!
Darklady-reaper: Thx for reviewing… I would love to read your fanfic, but unfortunately for me, DBZ gets me confused quiet easily, but I'm sure you are a fantastic author!
DarkParis: thx for the review. Sorry to say, but the story will remain a Serena/Darien fanfic. Sorry, but I wouldn't go with any other. )
Deathblade Prime: thx for the review. Overused? Maybe, but I just really wanted the scouts to sound harsh. Thx for waiting! Hope you enjoyed the site!
Deewee: yes, the song was suppose to rhyme.
Devilsfire666: thx for the review! Hope you liked the site!
Devilsheart: your vote has been counted!
Diamond: thx for the review!
Emily Suos: Sorry, but I'm not sure if I understand your review. Would you mind repeat that again?
Emmastarz: thx for the review. I did add you!
Enchanted-Princess: aww, thx! I'm glad I have reviewers like you! You cried? Is that bad or good? It is too emotional? Hope you liked this chapter!
EoAngel: Your vote has been counted! Thx for the review!
Erica6060: I'm really sorry that you didn't enjoy chapter 7. I hope you liked this one better. Your vote has been counted!
EternalStar: LOL! Well…hope you like this chapter! Hopefully, Serena has enough attitudes for you in this chapter. Thx so much for your review! Do you think you can be my beta?
Fallen Dragon: sighs sadly you don't leave me much choice, do you? LOL. Your vote has been counted!
Fantasy-monkey: aww! You are so polite! Thx for the review, and your vote has been counted!
Fiery-Hogosha: LOL! Hope you enjoy the site!
FireFlamezZzZ: LOL. Cool ideas, but unfortunately, I don't know how to 'go from there'. But you can do that yourself.
Fon murasaki-chan: you vote has been counted! Thx for the review!
Friends1004: thx for the review! Your vote has been counted!
Galactic Crystal: Thx for the review! Your vote will be counted!
Greta: LOL. Sorry to inform ya, but I'm a major Darien/Serena fan. But don't worry, Darien will pay for what he did, and he will get better.
GoddessSerenity: thx for the review!
GothShadows-hime: Thx for the review!!! I loved your story too! Btw, have you updated yet?
HOPE: thx for your reviews! You vote has been counted!too bad, but I don't plan on letting Chad into the picture.
Inu-chan: LOL! Thx for the review! Your vote has been counted! Btw, You said you wanna be my friend, but your review is an anonymous one, so I can't add you. If you have a screen name on , please tell me.
JasMiaka: Thx for the review! Hope you like this chapter!
Jess: LOL! I'm sure you won't be the only one! Thx for the fantastic review!
Karla: um…thx. I know my fanfic isn't the best, but thx for being so nice about it. Many other reviews I got were really rude. Do you enjoy this fanfic?
Kay-pee16: thx for the compliment, and the review!
Kellybug: LOL. As you can see, I didn't not drop my story. I hate it too, when the Internet won't accept my format. That's what happened to me on asmr, so I gave up on that site.
KoKo Belle: Thx for your ideas! I'll see what I can do! And your vote has been counted!
Koldy: Thx for the review!
Kris: LOL. Loved your review! Don't worry you vote will be counted!
Krista: thx for the review! I did enjoy Canada. It was fun!
Ladybug: thx for the ideas! Sorry to say, but I'm going to stick to Serena/Darien. Luna and Artimes were mean to Serena, but not anymore. And yes, Serena has been training so far, but she hasn't transformed to train, just the basic stuff.
Lady Isis: LOL. You go girl! Your vote has been counted! Thx! I loved your story too!!!
Lady Sage: LOL, I got your point! Thx for the review!
Lauren: thx for the compliment! Even though I don't entirely understand why you like my story so much, but hey, as long as you like it, who am I to complain!
Lil-harry-hobo: thx for the review! Your vote will be counted! Btw, are you a Harry potter fan? If yes, please check out my profile, there are two Harry potter sites you can go to! They are all mine, and I'd like for you to join! Thx for adding me to your fav. List!
Lillie chan: no I'm not 12, I turn 14 today. Do you think my writing is much better in this chapter?
LuckyGurl07: LOL. I'm so glad I updated too!
Magician: thx for the compliment! I know my spelling is terrible, but I'm trying. Every one says that I made Serena forgive the scout a bit too easy, but you see, that's the point. I want people to see what a big heart Serena has, and how she can forgive you easily.
Margie: Aww! I feel so special that you reviewed for me! I hope you liked this chapter!
Moonchik: thx for waiting and the wonderful compliments!!! Your vote has been counted!!!
MoonGirl5657: Thx for the review! Hope you liked the site!
Moonlady: thx for the review, and yes Serena Rei will have a fight. In the next chapter they will have a debate, so that'll be the fight. No, I don't think there will be a physical fight.
Moonlight Flow: Thx for the helps! I know conversations are not like that, but, I do that because, not all the readers are American, so it makes it easier for people from other country to read it. I just wanted to clear up the confusion.
Moonlightrosegoddess: thx so much for the review! And thx for volunteering to be my beta reader! It's a gruesome task! And your vote has been counted! Also, thx for wanting to be my friend!
MoonlightUsa: Thx for volunteering to be my beta! And the awesome review! LOL!
Moon's Rose: Thx for the review! Your vote has been counted! Sorry I wasn't able to update every week. Please forgive me!
Ms. Sakura Moon: LOL. Thx for the review! I hope you liked this chapter! Your vote will be counted.
MuwLafllage101: Thx for the review!
Myd05: LOL. Thx for the reminder! And the compliments!
Nada: you said it yourself; nothing ruins a good story with a pathetic author. Then let me ask you, how can a pathetic author write a good story? It's impossible! I'm sorry if I made you mad, but there is absolutely no point to cuss at me! I know I shouldn't have put an author's note, but then again, how am I suppose to let people know that I won't be posting for awhile??? Should I just leave them in the dark? You said that my story isn't worth your time, then why the hell are you reading it? It really doesn't take much to click the back button! My story has poor characters? Poor plot? And no point? Excuse me? But do I see you writing a story? No! So don't even get started with me! At least I have a story!
Nedz: Thx for the review! LOL!!! And thank you so much for the compliments!!! Your vote has been counted! Hope you liked this chapter!
Nichi-chan: aww, thx so much for the compliments! You made me blush so much, that me cheeks are now permanently red! LOL! Really… I loved your review, and no, I think you are a MUCH better author than I'll ever be!
Nikki95: aww thx! It's compliment like your that keep me going!
Nitengale: thx for the compliments and the review!
Pudding: I'm sorry about the author's note, but I had to do something to inform you guys. I can't just leave you in the dark now…can I?
Pyre: um…sorry? Yes, I do love writing, but if I only write because I want to, then you wouldn't be reading this chapter right now! I probably won't update this for quite awhile! I write this partly because I like writing, and partly because for the enjoyment of others. Well…if no one's reading, then, I wouldn't be posting this. I know I'm not paid for writing this, because if I were, then I'd have to update this a lot sooner! I'm doing this because I like writing, and because I want the people who are reading this to be happy. So I'm actually volunteering to make people happy. (I don't mean to sound obnoxious)
Random: Thx for the review and compliment!
Redroses: thx for the review! Hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Rockfreak2003: thx for the review! Hope you enjoyed the site!
Roxy: thx for the review! Hope you enjoyed the site!
Sailor-MOOn: Your vote has been counted! Well…I made Rei the mean one, because she was the one that always fight with Serena, and the one that always liked Darien. But believe me, I really like Rei. I just don't like her in this story.
Sailor Silver Sky: LOL, sorry, my mistake. I believe I changed it…right? Thx for the review. I know my plot isn't exactly original, but then again, how many stories containing Serena becoming a famous singer? Well…I got my idea off from one of those stories in the first place, but unfortunately, the author never finished her story, so I thought I'd start my own, and try my best to finish it.
Sakura Moon: thx for your review! I'm sorry but I'm strictly into Darien/Serena. )
SeaGal: Your vote has been counted! And I think you just might be on the right thread of where this fanfic will go…)
Sesshoumary: thx for the review! You will see Darien in almost every chapter!
ShadowStar21: Yay! Thx for wanting to be my friend! LOL. The dramatic drum roll… LOL. Hopefully, I haven't kept you waiting for too long.
Silver Moonlight-81: Thx for the review!
Silverpetal: your vote has been counted! LOL. You are just like me. I can't stay mad at Darien for very long either.
Shiraha: LOL, well, I hope you like this chapter! Don't worry, I don't think I'll quit just yet!
S.Schumaker: I'm sorry I made you endure the misery! But the last time I checked, my spelling wasn't that bad, and I had the first chapter edited about 5 times! Could you look again and see? I'm really sorry, but I warned ya my grammars are horrible!
Star: thx for the compliment and reminder! I know that I shouldn't ask for more reviews, but I don't know…I just really want to know who exactly are reading my story, that's all.
Starfairy14s: thx for the review. It moves too fast? I'm sorry; I was just trying to get the story more exciting. I liked my lyrics, too. And the entire point of it was to make it rhyme. LOL, maybe you have a different taste, but I like songs that rhyme. Well…the rebuilding on the moon thing is just a dramatic touch to the story, you know. It shows that she is still the princess, and cares about her old kingdom and stuffs. LOL, btw, I think I got your point. And the way you described Darien…LOL. You vote has been counted!
Slverkaze: thx for the review! I'll see if the next chapter can come out sonner!
Thanos farek Seid: thx for the review, hope you like the site!
ThatsMsDiva2U: You vote has been counted! And thx for the review!
The Spiked Dragon: thx! I did enjoy my trip. Canada was fun! Well…I know you said you wouldn't mind waiting 2 weeks to read the next chapter, but looks like I've made you wait 5 month. Hehe…sorry. You vote has been counted!
Tlm1633: LOL! Your vote has been counted!
Tmiller: I'm so sorry, that I couldn't update every week! So sorry! But hopefully, this long chapter has made it up! Thx for the compliment!
TooSweet4Words: Your vote has been counted! And thx for the review! Glad you liked this story!
Trapped in Icy Flame: Thx for volunteering to be my beta!
Wingless-angel-gt: thx for the review. Well…what do you think of the first sailor moon story that you've ever read? Like it? Hate it? You vote has been counted!