I was loafing around the house today like I usually do and then I
remembered I hadn't checked my email in long time. So I go on the computer
and log on and guess what I see? REVIEWS!!!!!! Yay!! I didn't really expect
any. Wonders never cease!
Anyways I thank everyone who reviewed and I'm very grateful for your reviews. You made my day. Thanks again!
I thought it might be fun to reply back to the reviewers so:
Kool Kaizer: Thank you. Don't worry about people liking your fic or not. I'm sure it'll be great. I promise to read it as long as you keep reviewing ^-^.
Pinguicha: Thank you! I love your seven feelings story as well so u better update on that!
Lady Storm: ..yeah its something only us authors understand ^-^.
Fierce Diety Zelda: Thank you very much!
Hao: Well, my story sounded so ordinary and unoriginal I didn't think anyone would read it, but you proved to me that some people did. Thank you! Good point about the jeans...I don't think they have them but lets pretend they do ^_^.
Sari & Isabelle: Yeah fairies are annoying.especially Navi; "LookHeyListenLook.." That thing never shut up in the game. By the way you said we have a lot in common. I'm curious, what did you mean?
Ruby-Sama: Noooo! Not the flying pigs! I promise I'll update every time I can, just don't unleash the flying pigs!! ^-^. And you just gave me an idea with that song..hm..::goes into thoughtful silence::
Cv: Yeah I love Link too. Who doesn't? ^-^.
If I didn't put your name and you reviewed that means I didn't get it yet, so just hold on for awhile. I try to reply to everyone.
Disclaimer: I didn't put this in the last chapter because I didn't need to. But now because of the adding of new characters I do. So here it is: I do not own Zelda OR Final Fantasy OR Ruroni Kenshin.
Anyways here's the third chapter. Tell me if it gets boring and anything I can do to fix that.
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Chapter 3: An Evil Plot
When Link neared his home, he was still a little dazed. He kept replaying the conversation in his head and Zelda's smiles wove in and out of his thoughts. He just couldn't believe what had happened. The princess of Hyrule, the girl every guy was after, had taken time to talk to him, a lowly commoner. He wanted to tell someone, but he remembered his promise. Then a loud voice brought him sharply back to Hyrule.
"Hey Link!" shouted a red haired man around Link's age.
"Oh, hey Roy." Link said facing one of his best friends.
"Me and Marth have been looking all over for you! Where in Din's name have you been?" Roy said furiously.
"Oh, I'm sorry Roy. I was in the Lost Woods." Link said looking away.
"What were you doing in there?" Roy asked curiously.
"I was just.resting." Link answered.
"You could have done that in your house." Roy said crossly.
"Sorry." Link said apologetically.
"Ah, it's okay. C'mon lets go sparring*" Roy said recovering quickly from his irritation.
"Okay." Link grinned. "I bet 30 rupees right here that I'll win."
"Oh yeah? Well if you're so confident then why don't we-" he stopped as a blue-haired boy came up.
"If you thought we were playing hide-and-seek, we weren't." Marth said sounding annoyed.
"Sorry Marth, I was in the woods." Link said feeling slightly guilty now.
Marth raised his eyebrows but said nothing. Then he said "Well good of you to come out. Now we can go sparring." He said.
"Yeah we can have a free-for-all!" Roy said enthusiastically.
Link didn't move and instead looked at the ground. He wanted to tell them about what happened in the woods, first.
"What's wrong?" Marth asked frowning slightly.
"Listen, can you guys keep a secret." Link asked. He wanted to tell someone. He felt bad about turning on his promise to Zelda but he was sure Roy and Marth wouldn't tell anyone.
"Um.yeah, I guess." Roy said uncertainly.
"Good. Cause you won't believe what happened in the forest.."
Several minutes later when Link finished his story, Marth's jaw was open and Roy's eyes were popping out of his skull.
"You met the princess of Hyrule?" Roy said thunderstruck
"How many other princesses does Hyrule have?" Link asked smiling at his friends' shock.
"Wow..that must have been exciting." Marth said.
Link smiled and nodded. "I'm kind of hungry so is it okay if we spar later?" Link asked.
Roy and Marth nodded.
"Don't tell anyone about this okay? She wanted to keep it a secret." They nodded again.
"Can we tell Sephiroth?" Roy asked.
"Oh yeah, you can tell him. You can tell Cloud and Kenshin too." Link said heading to his house.
"Ok. See you later, Link." Roy said heading in the opposite direction with Marth. Then he stopped. He turned back to Link and said "Malon asked where you were. She wanted to see you."
"What else is new?" Link muttered sarcastically.
As he made his way home, alone, he could see just picture Malon's disappointed face as she realized Link wasn't anywhere to be seen. And then a picture of Zelda swam into his head.
He had always thought Malon was pretty. But when he compared her to Zelda she seemed so plain and average. He wished he could talk to Zelda one more time. He imagined what he would say to her. More importantly, he imagined what she would say. Maybe she would be happy to see him. Maybe she would invite him to the castle. Link sighed. He was dreaming. Fairies would turn human before that ever happened.
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"News has come, that the princess has left the castle." A hoarse voice came.
"Ha, it seems that the little princess couldn't take royalty." A low voice shot through the abandoned temple. It was dark but one could make out a dark figure sitting on a chair stroking his chin and an ugly hunch-backed man with raggedy clothing bowing at the first man's feet.
"Should we attack, my lord?"
"No we should not, fool." Ganandorf said continuing to stroke his chin.
"But.but.she is-" the henchman started.
"She is gone for awhile. She has not left the castle forever. She will be back. We must wait." Ganandorf interrupted.
"Yes my lord." The ugly man said bowing lower.
"But once you have taken control of the castle and stripped the girl of her powers... will you give the girl to me?" the henchman asked timidly and a little nervously as if he was asking for too much.
"Why would you want the girl?" Ganandorf asked, surprised. Then he noticed the sickening lust in the man's eyes.
"Oh.I see." Ganandorf laughed softly. "Yes, I heard she's a pretty one. Well then go ahead, you may have her when I'm finished with her. But you will have to wait." Ganandorf said.
"Yes..thank you my lord, thank you." The man said gleefully.
"But there's another I heard that will give us trouble in taking the castle. A boy around her age.blonde hair and blue eyes. We will have to take care of him as soon as possible.
"But he won't know of his powers will he? The girl doesn't." he henchman said.
"He does not know of his full powers, but he knows how to fight. His stupid uncle taught him."
"His-his uncle?"
"Yes. His father was killed and his mother died giving him birth. His uncle raised him, teaching him how to fight until he was 10." Ganandorf said.
"Why? What happened to the uncle when the boy was 10?" the henchman asked standing up a little.
"I had the immense pleasure of killing him." Ganandorf said smiling evilly. "You see, it was foretold by a Gerudo that only one man in Hyrule would have the power to stop me. I thought it was the boy's uncle.I was mistaken.it was him." Ganandorf said his smile vanishing. "And the boy escaped and went to the Kokiri Forest. The Deku Tree protected him until he was old enough to live on his own. And the girl was protected in the castle. So I could not attack these long years." Ganandorf said his voice dimming a bit.
"But it matters not. Now the boy is out of the Deku Tree's hands and now I have the power to penetrate the castle and kill them both." Ganandorf said his voice rising again. He laughed an insane evil laugh.
When he had stopped he smiled insanely and said "The boy shall soon be killed and the girl will then be too weak to fight! And then.all of Hyrule shall be mine!!"
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A/n: Oooh the suspense builds!! Oh and in case you didn't figure it out, Link is the boy Ganandorf is talking about. And now about the * in the chapter.
* Some people may know what I mean when I say sparring and some people may not. If you look it up in the dictionary the definition isn't exactly what I mean. In my dictionary sparring means when you have a friendly fighting match between you and someone else, to keep you in shape or to train. So when they say "sparring" in my stories it's when they go somewhere were they can slash their swords at each other, and cast magic curses, to train or just for fun. I just wanted to say that so there's no confusion but I think most people who are into dbz know that. I guess we can call it a dbz thing or something :-P .
I'm sorry for my pathetic and long definition of the word spar, but I didn't want anyone confused. And again, that's what I mean when I say spar; it may mean something completely different in the dictionary.
And yes, Link's friends, Cloud and Sephiroth are from Final Fantasy. And Kenshin is Ruroni Kenshin. I don't like using names like "Brad" or "Eddy" so I use other videogames and anime shows. The only name I made up was Prince Selth, which wasn't a very good name anyways.
Anyways please review. If you don't, you can go to bed tonight, knowing that you just discouraged a poor little child by not reviewing on her story. And now she is hurt, and is weeping on her bedroom floor, thinking of suicide all because YOU didn't review.
Well, you don't want that laying in your stomach do you? SO REVIEW!!!! ^_^ .
P.S I wouldn't be that tragically sad if I didn't get any reviews. I would be just a little sad. AND I'M NOT A LITTLE CHILD!! I just said all that so you would review. ^_^ .
Ok well I just noticed a bee sitting on my windowsill and I'm off to investigate whether it's dead or alive (dead I hope) so I'll see you later!
Anyways I thank everyone who reviewed and I'm very grateful for your reviews. You made my day. Thanks again!
I thought it might be fun to reply back to the reviewers so:
Kool Kaizer: Thank you. Don't worry about people liking your fic or not. I'm sure it'll be great. I promise to read it as long as you keep reviewing ^-^.
Pinguicha: Thank you! I love your seven feelings story as well so u better update on that!
Lady Storm: ..yeah its something only us authors understand ^-^.
Fierce Diety Zelda: Thank you very much!
Hao: Well, my story sounded so ordinary and unoriginal I didn't think anyone would read it, but you proved to me that some people did. Thank you! Good point about the jeans...I don't think they have them but lets pretend they do ^_^.
Sari & Isabelle: Yeah fairies are annoying.especially Navi; "LookHeyListenLook.." That thing never shut up in the game. By the way you said we have a lot in common. I'm curious, what did you mean?
Ruby-Sama: Noooo! Not the flying pigs! I promise I'll update every time I can, just don't unleash the flying pigs!! ^-^. And you just gave me an idea with that song..hm..::goes into thoughtful silence::
Cv: Yeah I love Link too. Who doesn't? ^-^.
If I didn't put your name and you reviewed that means I didn't get it yet, so just hold on for awhile. I try to reply to everyone.
Disclaimer: I didn't put this in the last chapter because I didn't need to. But now because of the adding of new characters I do. So here it is: I do not own Zelda OR Final Fantasy OR Ruroni Kenshin.
Anyways here's the third chapter. Tell me if it gets boring and anything I can do to fix that.
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Chapter 3: An Evil Plot
When Link neared his home, he was still a little dazed. He kept replaying the conversation in his head and Zelda's smiles wove in and out of his thoughts. He just couldn't believe what had happened. The princess of Hyrule, the girl every guy was after, had taken time to talk to him, a lowly commoner. He wanted to tell someone, but he remembered his promise. Then a loud voice brought him sharply back to Hyrule.
"Hey Link!" shouted a red haired man around Link's age.
"Oh, hey Roy." Link said facing one of his best friends.
"Me and Marth have been looking all over for you! Where in Din's name have you been?" Roy said furiously.
"Oh, I'm sorry Roy. I was in the Lost Woods." Link said looking away.
"What were you doing in there?" Roy asked curiously.
"I was just.resting." Link answered.
"You could have done that in your house." Roy said crossly.
"Sorry." Link said apologetically.
"Ah, it's okay. C'mon lets go sparring*" Roy said recovering quickly from his irritation.
"Okay." Link grinned. "I bet 30 rupees right here that I'll win."
"Oh yeah? Well if you're so confident then why don't we-" he stopped as a blue-haired boy came up.
"If you thought we were playing hide-and-seek, we weren't." Marth said sounding annoyed.
"Sorry Marth, I was in the woods." Link said feeling slightly guilty now.
Marth raised his eyebrows but said nothing. Then he said "Well good of you to come out. Now we can go sparring." He said.
"Yeah we can have a free-for-all!" Roy said enthusiastically.
Link didn't move and instead looked at the ground. He wanted to tell them about what happened in the woods, first.
"What's wrong?" Marth asked frowning slightly.
"Listen, can you guys keep a secret." Link asked. He wanted to tell someone. He felt bad about turning on his promise to Zelda but he was sure Roy and Marth wouldn't tell anyone.
"Um.yeah, I guess." Roy said uncertainly.
"Good. Cause you won't believe what happened in the forest.."
Several minutes later when Link finished his story, Marth's jaw was open and Roy's eyes were popping out of his skull.
"You met the princess of Hyrule?" Roy said thunderstruck
"How many other princesses does Hyrule have?" Link asked smiling at his friends' shock.
"Wow..that must have been exciting." Marth said.
Link smiled and nodded. "I'm kind of hungry so is it okay if we spar later?" Link asked.
Roy and Marth nodded.
"Don't tell anyone about this okay? She wanted to keep it a secret." They nodded again.
"Can we tell Sephiroth?" Roy asked.
"Oh yeah, you can tell him. You can tell Cloud and Kenshin too." Link said heading to his house.
"Ok. See you later, Link." Roy said heading in the opposite direction with Marth. Then he stopped. He turned back to Link and said "Malon asked where you were. She wanted to see you."
"What else is new?" Link muttered sarcastically.
As he made his way home, alone, he could see just picture Malon's disappointed face as she realized Link wasn't anywhere to be seen. And then a picture of Zelda swam into his head.
He had always thought Malon was pretty. But when he compared her to Zelda she seemed so plain and average. He wished he could talk to Zelda one more time. He imagined what he would say to her. More importantly, he imagined what she would say. Maybe she would be happy to see him. Maybe she would invite him to the castle. Link sighed. He was dreaming. Fairies would turn human before that ever happened.
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"News has come, that the princess has left the castle." A hoarse voice came.
"Ha, it seems that the little princess couldn't take royalty." A low voice shot through the abandoned temple. It was dark but one could make out a dark figure sitting on a chair stroking his chin and an ugly hunch-backed man with raggedy clothing bowing at the first man's feet.
"Should we attack, my lord?"
"No we should not, fool." Ganandorf said continuing to stroke his chin.
"But.but.she is-" the henchman started.
"She is gone for awhile. She has not left the castle forever. She will be back. We must wait." Ganandorf interrupted.
"Yes my lord." The ugly man said bowing lower.
"But once you have taken control of the castle and stripped the girl of her powers... will you give the girl to me?" the henchman asked timidly and a little nervously as if he was asking for too much.
"Why would you want the girl?" Ganandorf asked, surprised. Then he noticed the sickening lust in the man's eyes.
"Oh.I see." Ganandorf laughed softly. "Yes, I heard she's a pretty one. Well then go ahead, you may have her when I'm finished with her. But you will have to wait." Ganandorf said.
"Yes..thank you my lord, thank you." The man said gleefully.
"But there's another I heard that will give us trouble in taking the castle. A boy around her age.blonde hair and blue eyes. We will have to take care of him as soon as possible.
"But he won't know of his powers will he? The girl doesn't." he henchman said.
"He does not know of his full powers, but he knows how to fight. His stupid uncle taught him."
"His-his uncle?"
"Yes. His father was killed and his mother died giving him birth. His uncle raised him, teaching him how to fight until he was 10." Ganandorf said.
"Why? What happened to the uncle when the boy was 10?" the henchman asked standing up a little.
"I had the immense pleasure of killing him." Ganandorf said smiling evilly. "You see, it was foretold by a Gerudo that only one man in Hyrule would have the power to stop me. I thought it was the boy's uncle.I was mistaken.it was him." Ganandorf said his smile vanishing. "And the boy escaped and went to the Kokiri Forest. The Deku Tree protected him until he was old enough to live on his own. And the girl was protected in the castle. So I could not attack these long years." Ganandorf said his voice dimming a bit.
"But it matters not. Now the boy is out of the Deku Tree's hands and now I have the power to penetrate the castle and kill them both." Ganandorf said his voice rising again. He laughed an insane evil laugh.
When he had stopped he smiled insanely and said "The boy shall soon be killed and the girl will then be too weak to fight! And then.all of Hyrule shall be mine!!"
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A/n: Oooh the suspense builds!! Oh and in case you didn't figure it out, Link is the boy Ganandorf is talking about. And now about the * in the chapter.
* Some people may know what I mean when I say sparring and some people may not. If you look it up in the dictionary the definition isn't exactly what I mean. In my dictionary sparring means when you have a friendly fighting match between you and someone else, to keep you in shape or to train. So when they say "sparring" in my stories it's when they go somewhere were they can slash their swords at each other, and cast magic curses, to train or just for fun. I just wanted to say that so there's no confusion but I think most people who are into dbz know that. I guess we can call it a dbz thing or something :-P .
I'm sorry for my pathetic and long definition of the word spar, but I didn't want anyone confused. And again, that's what I mean when I say spar; it may mean something completely different in the dictionary.
And yes, Link's friends, Cloud and Sephiroth are from Final Fantasy. And Kenshin is Ruroni Kenshin. I don't like using names like "Brad" or "Eddy" so I use other videogames and anime shows. The only name I made up was Prince Selth, which wasn't a very good name anyways.
Anyways please review. If you don't, you can go to bed tonight, knowing that you just discouraged a poor little child by not reviewing on her story. And now she is hurt, and is weeping on her bedroom floor, thinking of suicide all because YOU didn't review.
Well, you don't want that laying in your stomach do you? SO REVIEW!!!! ^_^ .
P.S I wouldn't be that tragically sad if I didn't get any reviews. I would be just a little sad. AND I'M NOT A LITTLE CHILD!! I just said all that so you would review. ^_^ .
Ok well I just noticed a bee sitting on my windowsill and I'm off to investigate whether it's dead or alive (dead I hope) so I'll see you later!