[Kitty: Alright... I sent some of you emails concerning your reviews because I was worried about how long it would take to write this chapter. I WILL skip a lot of the Mai-Malik duel for speed and simplicity.
Yugi: Kara will start calling Yami Marik "Malik" in a few more chapters. For now, though, he IS still Marik's Yami, and will be known as "Yami Marik" only.
Kara: Reviews will be done at the end, as usual.
Lina: R&R!]
Chapter 19: Erased
POV: Joey
After Kara felt a little better, we joined the others in "Odeon's" room. The doctor said he'd be alright, but Kara still was worried.
"Odeon was the only thing that stopped Marik's Yami from coming out all these years," Kara whispered, "And now that his Yami's taken over his body, he'll probably try to do away with Odeon."
"So how long has his Yami been around?" asked Tea.
"Ever since he received the Tomb Keeper's Initiation, I would assume," Kara replied, "It was the first time I could see such anger from him."
"The Tomb Keeper's what?" said Tristan.
"When he joins his Tomb Keeper clan," Yami answered, "Is that correct?"
Kara nodded.
"But he never wanted to be a Tomb Keeper. Neither did I, as a matter of fact."
"You're one too?" Mai asked.
"Yes," Kara sighed.
"Did you have an Initiation too?" Tristan asked.
"Yes," Kara said, "But since I'm female, mine wasn't as bad as Marik's."
"What do you mean?" asked Serenity.
Kara lifted up her right sleeve to reveal an Egyptian tattoo of three phoenixes (one yellow, one red, and one blue) surrounding an ankh.
"My Priest Keeper crest," she explained, "Mine is only on my arm, and it's small. Marik's is on his back, and it covers almost all of it. I've never seen it, but he told me it was very painful to have it done. Only a Tomb Keeper to the Pharaoh is allowed to know what is on his back..."
She looked at Yami significantly.
"Because on Marik's back is the Pharaoh's Secret."
"The Pharaoh's Secret?" Yami repeated, looking interested.
"The Secret to his powers," Kara added, nodding, "I assume that's why Marik has been going after you; your Puzzle is part of it."
"That makes sense," I said, "Considering that Yami lives inside it and all."
Kara nodded again.
"But why are you up here anyway, Kara?" asked Mai.
"My parents were scared after they found out Marik's father was killed," Kara explained, gritting her teeth, "They took me far away, and left a fake note to Marik telling him to forget about what happened between us. It didn't take a long time, though..." Kara's eyes narrowed, "Before Yami Marik took control long enough to kill my parents in their beds."
"So you didn't know at first?" Yami asked, and Kara nodded.
"He's a bastard..." she growled, "A sick, mother-fucking bastard..."
"Don't worry, Kara," I said, putting a hand on her shoulder, "We'll stop Yami Marik from hurting any more people."
Kara smiled at me. "Thank you, Joey."
POV: Mai
This isn't right.
I don't know...something about Kara makes me wary.
She's kissing up to Joey, and what if she's taking advantage of Joey's feelings to help Marik...and his Yami?
POV: Third Person
"Joey, I need to talk to you alone," said Mai in an undertone.
Joey looked surprised. "Uh...okay..."
Mai pulled Joey out of Odeon's room, and closed the door behind her.
"Look, Joey, I'm concerned about you hanging out with Kara."
"What?" Joey said, "What's wrong with-"
"Everything," Mai interrupted, "Kara loves Marik, Joey. Don't you see that? She's in love with the same guy who tried to use you and Tea to drown Yugi. The same guy who tried to use Slifer the Sky Dragon and all of his Rare Hunters to destroy Yugi in a duel. The same guy who ordered Odeon to pretend to be him and use that fake Egyptian God card on you. Doesn't any of that register in your mind, Joey?"
Joey's eyes narrowed.
"Kara didn't have anything to do with that."
"How do you know that, Joey?" Mai demanded, "Marik's known her since they were young. You've only known her for a couple of hours!"
"I know Kara, Mai," Joey said hotly, "She would NEVER do what you're suggesting!"
"You also didn't think she was in love with Marik," Mai pointed out, "And you were wrong."
"Still," Joey said, "Marik said she was our friend, even if she loved him! Why would he lie about that?"
"So she could take advantage of you, like she's doing now!" Mai snapped.
Joey glared so coldly at Mai, his brown eyes were almost like Kaiba's icy blue ones.
"Kara would never," he spat, "And if you think she would, you're accusing me of helping Marik too."
"I said nothing about you, Joey-"
"If you accuse a friend of mine, then you're also picking a fight with me!" Joey growled, "YOU, especially, should know that by now."
Mai scowled.
"You know what, Joey? Fine! Be that way, for all I care! But if Kara breaks your heart, don't blame me!"
And with that, Mai walked away.
Joey glared at her retreating back.
"Same here," he yelled behind him, "But if Yami Marik kills you and you don't trust Kara and me to save you, don't blame me!"
And with that, he walked back to his room.
Joey was so angry, he didn't even see a girl near Odeon's door, her green eyes filled with tears.
Downstairs, Ten Minutes Later
[Kitty: (sweatdrop) Told you I was skipping a lot. Alright, this is right when Malik summons the Winged Dragon of Ra, and is about to attack Mai, who can't reach her Duel Disk thanks to Malik's Holding Arms and Holding Legs monster cards, which chain her to that tablet. She barely remembers any of her friends now...she seems to be all alone...but is she? I don't think so...]
POV: Kara
"It's all over," Mai whispered hopelessly.
"Well put, my dear," Yami Marik laughed, "Now, Winged Dragon of Ra, wipe her out!"
But when the Winged Dragon was going to attack Mai, Joey suddenly jumped onto the platform, right in front of Mai.
"JOEY!" Yami and I yelled.
"Get down from there!" yelled Serenity.
"Don't worry, Mai," he said, trying to unfasten her chains, "I'm gonna get you out of this."
"Who's there?" Mai said absently.
"Mai, it's me," Joey said, sounding worried, "You've got to remember me. Look into my eyes."
"Joey?" Mai said slowly.
"That's right, it's Joey. And I'm not going to let anything happen to you, Mai, because we're friends. Do you remember when you and I argued about Kara? I'm sorry about that, Mai. You're my friend, as well as Kara."
My eyes filled up with tears of joy.
'Thank you, Joey, for putting things right.'
Mai's eyes widened in recognition.
"Joey?"
"You remember now?" Joey said, grinning, "Alright!"
It worked. Yami Marik's spell was broken. But... Mai was still chained in for the ride.
POV: Yami
"Winged Dragon of Ra," Yami Marik yelled, "Destroy them both!"
Joey couldn't get Mai's chains off, but he didn't move.
"Forget about me, Joey, just get away!" Mai said.
"No, Mai," Joey argued, "I'm not going to let anything happen to you; I'm staying right here."
"Thank you," Mai whispered, closing her eyes.
As the attack headed for them, someone brushed past me and jumped in the way of the attack.
"KARA!" Joey and Mai yelled.
Yami Marik laughed.
"Well, Kara, it looks like I'll be able to get rid of you sooner than I first thought. But if you get out of the way now, I can make my future obliteration of you painless."
"Never!" Kara snarled, even if the attack was putting her through torture, "I'm not letting you hurt anyone else! You killed my parents, you knocked Odeon out cold and you took over my boyfriend's body! You're not hurting my friends!"
My eyes widened in fear. Kara couldn't possibly be strong enough to hold off the attack for too long...
The Winged Dragon's attack ended, and Kara collapsed.
POV: Third Person
"Kara!" Joey tried to wake her up as Mai's chains vanished and Yami Marik was announced as the winner.
"Is she okay?" Mai asked.
"That is not something for you two to worry about," Yami Marik said, coming over and smirking at the unconscious Kara, "Even if she is, I'll kill her in the end."
"You will not," Joey snarled, standing up and glaring at him.
"Relax, I'm going to wait a little while before that," Yami Marik said, "You, however, should learn not to interfere with matters that don't concern you."
He used a spell to freeze Joey in place.
"That should hold you," he muttered, "Now..."
He turned to Mai.
"You still have my Egyptian God card in your deck, and I want it back. Besides, you've got to fulfill your part of our bargain. I said if you lost, you'd stay in the Shadow Realm forever. And now, to fulfill this promise..."
Yami Marik raised his Millennium Rod, and Mai collapsed. He laughed before taking his Egyptian God card out of her deck.
POV: Joey
As soon as the spell that froze me wore off, I immediately went over to Mai, who was now lifeless, just like Kara beside her.
"What did you do to her, Marik?" I demanded.
"I fulfilled my promise," he snickered, "I said that if she lost, her mind would wander the Shadow Realm for eternity. The Shadows will take everything from her, Wheeler: her family, her friends...and everything else she kept inside her mind and heart. And soon, Kara will have the same fate... all alone, in a living nightmare..."
And with that, he left through the elevator.
I glared after him. I will never let Yami Marik hurt Kara......... and I will save Mai from the Shadow Realm. I promise.
'I'm gonna put it all behind me,
Like nothing ever happened between us,
Nothing ever took place between you and me, yeah,
Nothing ever happened.
And if you see me walkin' down the street,
I won't even recognize you,
I'll just erase you from my memory,
Put it all behind me,
Because you are erased...
All erased.'
-Annie Lennox, "Erased"
[Kitty: The song reminded me of Mai losing her memory... (shrugs)
Yugi and Lina: (crying) Poor Mai...
Joey: (crying too)
Kitty: Reviews, Lina?
Lina: (counts) 8. Some you wrote to them about, though.
Kitty: For clarity, I decided to include what your review says along with our response from now on. Let's start!
Josephine Jekyl said:
Thanks for filling me in. What are Marik/Malik's POVs on this? What will he do when he finds out about Joey comforting Kara? It's all too much! And no, I don't live in London by the way. I live in a town called Market Harborough: not too far from London if you go by train. Why do you wanna live here? In America, you get all sorts of things before us like games, TV programs, films AND it's cheaper! (good chapter! I was wondering where Ishizu was)
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Kitty: (smiles) I wrote to you concerning most of your questions. London is due to my Harry Potter obsession. And I didn't know there was such a huge difference between American and British communication speed.
Lina: And Malik most likely is jealous...he's just not going to show it... YET. (wink)
Kitty: Marik, on the other hand, is currently locked in his soul room. He doesn't know what's going on AT ALL, poor guy...
Lina: Next review!
Story Weaver 1 said:
Great chapter. Loved Mai's feelings and Joey's thoughts.
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Kitty: (smile) THANKIES!
Hutchy said:
Emma: I can't die I have an alter-ego to maintain and keep from using my body to cause mass destruction.
Hutchy: I like Harry Potter too! I live in the UK He He! I can't stand Joey/Mai paring, I mean she is a lot older than him. And I think Mai is rather obnoxious for him. Just me talking!
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Kitty: Well... like I said in my letter, I didn't think Mai was THAT much older than Joey. (glares) You live in the UK too? SHIT! (smiles) At least you like Harry Potter.
Mya Starnight said:
That's alright, but Yami and Marik are still the hottest in the whole world! Yugi is still chibi.
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Kitty: (glomps Yugi) That's what makes him cute!
Yugi: (grins)
Dranzy said:
GRR, STAY AWAY FROM KARA, JOEY!! X( Well anyways, this IS going to be a Marik and Kara story right?? I know, I'm stupid but update soon!
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Kitty: Marik loves Kara, and Kara loves Marik. However, this is a love triangle fic. You'll just have to hang on for the ride and find out. And you're not stupid, I assure you.
Joey: (cries at Dranzy's comment)
black13 said:
I liked your story, it was really good. Check out mine; it's called the secrets of the stars, rated pg on humor.
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Kitty: (smiles) I did. It's funny. I especially like Joey's chapter.
Joey: (glares) I'm NOT a dog!
Kitty: (throws a ball) Fetch!
Joey: (chases after the ball just like in Secrets of the Stars) ARF, ARF!
lc14 said:
WHAT HOO PEIUNY MORTAL, HOW ART THOU?? THANK YOU FOR NOT FORGETTING ME! AND YOU ONCE REVIEWED FOR MY STORY AND NO, ANNABEL'S NAME IS NOT BASED OFF OF ANNABEL LEE FROM EDGER ALLEN POE'S POEM. HE DOES ROCK HOWEVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND PLEASE REVIEW MY STORY! NO ONE ELES DOES! CRIES
JILL(FRIEND): --; I REVIEWED.
lc14: ONLY CAUSE I ASKED!
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Kitty: (smiles) Don't worry, I will. And thank you, I was curious.
Lina: At least Jill reviewed when you told her to. Kitty tells Kacey to review all the time, and she never does.
Kitty: (scowls)
M.L. said:
One of the best stories I've read so far. Keep going: this is a great story.
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Kitty: (smiles a BIG smile) THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Lina: (smiles too) You're very kind to say so.
Kitty: Alright... I think we're done.
Yugi: Already? (whines) We didn't do anything funny yet!
Kitty: Oh, well... R&R!]
Yugi: Kara will start calling Yami Marik "Malik" in a few more chapters. For now, though, he IS still Marik's Yami, and will be known as "Yami Marik" only.
Kara: Reviews will be done at the end, as usual.
Lina: R&R!]
Chapter 19: Erased
POV: Joey
After Kara felt a little better, we joined the others in "Odeon's" room. The doctor said he'd be alright, but Kara still was worried.
"Odeon was the only thing that stopped Marik's Yami from coming out all these years," Kara whispered, "And now that his Yami's taken over his body, he'll probably try to do away with Odeon."
"So how long has his Yami been around?" asked Tea.
"Ever since he received the Tomb Keeper's Initiation, I would assume," Kara replied, "It was the first time I could see such anger from him."
"The Tomb Keeper's what?" said Tristan.
"When he joins his Tomb Keeper clan," Yami answered, "Is that correct?"
Kara nodded.
"But he never wanted to be a Tomb Keeper. Neither did I, as a matter of fact."
"You're one too?" Mai asked.
"Yes," Kara sighed.
"Did you have an Initiation too?" Tristan asked.
"Yes," Kara said, "But since I'm female, mine wasn't as bad as Marik's."
"What do you mean?" asked Serenity.
Kara lifted up her right sleeve to reveal an Egyptian tattoo of three phoenixes (one yellow, one red, and one blue) surrounding an ankh.
"My Priest Keeper crest," she explained, "Mine is only on my arm, and it's small. Marik's is on his back, and it covers almost all of it. I've never seen it, but he told me it was very painful to have it done. Only a Tomb Keeper to the Pharaoh is allowed to know what is on his back..."
She looked at Yami significantly.
"Because on Marik's back is the Pharaoh's Secret."
"The Pharaoh's Secret?" Yami repeated, looking interested.
"The Secret to his powers," Kara added, nodding, "I assume that's why Marik has been going after you; your Puzzle is part of it."
"That makes sense," I said, "Considering that Yami lives inside it and all."
Kara nodded again.
"But why are you up here anyway, Kara?" asked Mai.
"My parents were scared after they found out Marik's father was killed," Kara explained, gritting her teeth, "They took me far away, and left a fake note to Marik telling him to forget about what happened between us. It didn't take a long time, though..." Kara's eyes narrowed, "Before Yami Marik took control long enough to kill my parents in their beds."
"So you didn't know at first?" Yami asked, and Kara nodded.
"He's a bastard..." she growled, "A sick, mother-fucking bastard..."
"Don't worry, Kara," I said, putting a hand on her shoulder, "We'll stop Yami Marik from hurting any more people."
Kara smiled at me. "Thank you, Joey."
POV: Mai
This isn't right.
I don't know...something about Kara makes me wary.
She's kissing up to Joey, and what if she's taking advantage of Joey's feelings to help Marik...and his Yami?
POV: Third Person
"Joey, I need to talk to you alone," said Mai in an undertone.
Joey looked surprised. "Uh...okay..."
Mai pulled Joey out of Odeon's room, and closed the door behind her.
"Look, Joey, I'm concerned about you hanging out with Kara."
"What?" Joey said, "What's wrong with-"
"Everything," Mai interrupted, "Kara loves Marik, Joey. Don't you see that? She's in love with the same guy who tried to use you and Tea to drown Yugi. The same guy who tried to use Slifer the Sky Dragon and all of his Rare Hunters to destroy Yugi in a duel. The same guy who ordered Odeon to pretend to be him and use that fake Egyptian God card on you. Doesn't any of that register in your mind, Joey?"
Joey's eyes narrowed.
"Kara didn't have anything to do with that."
"How do you know that, Joey?" Mai demanded, "Marik's known her since they were young. You've only known her for a couple of hours!"
"I know Kara, Mai," Joey said hotly, "She would NEVER do what you're suggesting!"
"You also didn't think she was in love with Marik," Mai pointed out, "And you were wrong."
"Still," Joey said, "Marik said she was our friend, even if she loved him! Why would he lie about that?"
"So she could take advantage of you, like she's doing now!" Mai snapped.
Joey glared so coldly at Mai, his brown eyes were almost like Kaiba's icy blue ones.
"Kara would never," he spat, "And if you think she would, you're accusing me of helping Marik too."
"I said nothing about you, Joey-"
"If you accuse a friend of mine, then you're also picking a fight with me!" Joey growled, "YOU, especially, should know that by now."
Mai scowled.
"You know what, Joey? Fine! Be that way, for all I care! But if Kara breaks your heart, don't blame me!"
And with that, Mai walked away.
Joey glared at her retreating back.
"Same here," he yelled behind him, "But if Yami Marik kills you and you don't trust Kara and me to save you, don't blame me!"
And with that, he walked back to his room.
Joey was so angry, he didn't even see a girl near Odeon's door, her green eyes filled with tears.
Downstairs, Ten Minutes Later
[Kitty: (sweatdrop) Told you I was skipping a lot. Alright, this is right when Malik summons the Winged Dragon of Ra, and is about to attack Mai, who can't reach her Duel Disk thanks to Malik's Holding Arms and Holding Legs monster cards, which chain her to that tablet. She barely remembers any of her friends now...she seems to be all alone...but is she? I don't think so...]
POV: Kara
"It's all over," Mai whispered hopelessly.
"Well put, my dear," Yami Marik laughed, "Now, Winged Dragon of Ra, wipe her out!"
But when the Winged Dragon was going to attack Mai, Joey suddenly jumped onto the platform, right in front of Mai.
"JOEY!" Yami and I yelled.
"Get down from there!" yelled Serenity.
"Don't worry, Mai," he said, trying to unfasten her chains, "I'm gonna get you out of this."
"Who's there?" Mai said absently.
"Mai, it's me," Joey said, sounding worried, "You've got to remember me. Look into my eyes."
"Joey?" Mai said slowly.
"That's right, it's Joey. And I'm not going to let anything happen to you, Mai, because we're friends. Do you remember when you and I argued about Kara? I'm sorry about that, Mai. You're my friend, as well as Kara."
My eyes filled up with tears of joy.
'Thank you, Joey, for putting things right.'
Mai's eyes widened in recognition.
"Joey?"
"You remember now?" Joey said, grinning, "Alright!"
It worked. Yami Marik's spell was broken. But... Mai was still chained in for the ride.
POV: Yami
"Winged Dragon of Ra," Yami Marik yelled, "Destroy them both!"
Joey couldn't get Mai's chains off, but he didn't move.
"Forget about me, Joey, just get away!" Mai said.
"No, Mai," Joey argued, "I'm not going to let anything happen to you; I'm staying right here."
"Thank you," Mai whispered, closing her eyes.
As the attack headed for them, someone brushed past me and jumped in the way of the attack.
"KARA!" Joey and Mai yelled.
Yami Marik laughed.
"Well, Kara, it looks like I'll be able to get rid of you sooner than I first thought. But if you get out of the way now, I can make my future obliteration of you painless."
"Never!" Kara snarled, even if the attack was putting her through torture, "I'm not letting you hurt anyone else! You killed my parents, you knocked Odeon out cold and you took over my boyfriend's body! You're not hurting my friends!"
My eyes widened in fear. Kara couldn't possibly be strong enough to hold off the attack for too long...
The Winged Dragon's attack ended, and Kara collapsed.
POV: Third Person
"Kara!" Joey tried to wake her up as Mai's chains vanished and Yami Marik was announced as the winner.
"Is she okay?" Mai asked.
"That is not something for you two to worry about," Yami Marik said, coming over and smirking at the unconscious Kara, "Even if she is, I'll kill her in the end."
"You will not," Joey snarled, standing up and glaring at him.
"Relax, I'm going to wait a little while before that," Yami Marik said, "You, however, should learn not to interfere with matters that don't concern you."
He used a spell to freeze Joey in place.
"That should hold you," he muttered, "Now..."
He turned to Mai.
"You still have my Egyptian God card in your deck, and I want it back. Besides, you've got to fulfill your part of our bargain. I said if you lost, you'd stay in the Shadow Realm forever. And now, to fulfill this promise..."
Yami Marik raised his Millennium Rod, and Mai collapsed. He laughed before taking his Egyptian God card out of her deck.
POV: Joey
As soon as the spell that froze me wore off, I immediately went over to Mai, who was now lifeless, just like Kara beside her.
"What did you do to her, Marik?" I demanded.
"I fulfilled my promise," he snickered, "I said that if she lost, her mind would wander the Shadow Realm for eternity. The Shadows will take everything from her, Wheeler: her family, her friends...and everything else she kept inside her mind and heart. And soon, Kara will have the same fate... all alone, in a living nightmare..."
And with that, he left through the elevator.
I glared after him. I will never let Yami Marik hurt Kara......... and I will save Mai from the Shadow Realm. I promise.
'I'm gonna put it all behind me,
Like nothing ever happened between us,
Nothing ever took place between you and me, yeah,
Nothing ever happened.
And if you see me walkin' down the street,
I won't even recognize you,
I'll just erase you from my memory,
Put it all behind me,
Because you are erased...
All erased.'
-Annie Lennox, "Erased"
[Kitty: The song reminded me of Mai losing her memory... (shrugs)
Yugi and Lina: (crying) Poor Mai...
Joey: (crying too)
Kitty: Reviews, Lina?
Lina: (counts) 8. Some you wrote to them about, though.
Kitty: For clarity, I decided to include what your review says along with our response from now on. Let's start!
Josephine Jekyl said:
Thanks for filling me in. What are Marik/Malik's POVs on this? What will he do when he finds out about Joey comforting Kara? It's all too much! And no, I don't live in London by the way. I live in a town called Market Harborough: not too far from London if you go by train. Why do you wanna live here? In America, you get all sorts of things before us like games, TV programs, films AND it's cheaper! (good chapter! I was wondering where Ishizu was)
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Kitty: (smiles) I wrote to you concerning most of your questions. London is due to my Harry Potter obsession. And I didn't know there was such a huge difference between American and British communication speed.
Lina: And Malik most likely is jealous...he's just not going to show it... YET. (wink)
Kitty: Marik, on the other hand, is currently locked in his soul room. He doesn't know what's going on AT ALL, poor guy...
Lina: Next review!
Story Weaver 1 said:
Great chapter. Loved Mai's feelings and Joey's thoughts.
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Kitty: (smile) THANKIES!
Hutchy said:
Emma: I can't die I have an alter-ego to maintain and keep from using my body to cause mass destruction.
Hutchy: I like Harry Potter too! I live in the UK He He! I can't stand Joey/Mai paring, I mean she is a lot older than him. And I think Mai is rather obnoxious for him. Just me talking!
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Kitty: Well... like I said in my letter, I didn't think Mai was THAT much older than Joey. (glares) You live in the UK too? SHIT! (smiles) At least you like Harry Potter.
Mya Starnight said:
That's alright, but Yami and Marik are still the hottest in the whole world! Yugi is still chibi.
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Kitty: (glomps Yugi) That's what makes him cute!
Yugi: (grins)
Dranzy said:
GRR, STAY AWAY FROM KARA, JOEY!! X( Well anyways, this IS going to be a Marik and Kara story right?? I know, I'm stupid but update soon!
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Kitty: Marik loves Kara, and Kara loves Marik. However, this is a love triangle fic. You'll just have to hang on for the ride and find out. And you're not stupid, I assure you.
Joey: (cries at Dranzy's comment)
black13 said:
I liked your story, it was really good. Check out mine; it's called the secrets of the stars, rated pg on humor.
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Kitty: (smiles) I did. It's funny. I especially like Joey's chapter.
Joey: (glares) I'm NOT a dog!
Kitty: (throws a ball) Fetch!
Joey: (chases after the ball just like in Secrets of the Stars) ARF, ARF!
lc14 said:
WHAT HOO PEIUNY MORTAL, HOW ART THOU?? THANK YOU FOR NOT FORGETTING ME! AND YOU ONCE REVIEWED FOR MY STORY AND NO, ANNABEL'S NAME IS NOT BASED OFF OF ANNABEL LEE FROM EDGER ALLEN POE'S POEM. HE DOES ROCK HOWEVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND PLEASE REVIEW MY STORY! NO ONE ELES DOES! CRIES
JILL(FRIEND): --; I REVIEWED.
lc14: ONLY CAUSE I ASKED!
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Kitty: (smiles) Don't worry, I will. And thank you, I was curious.
Lina: At least Jill reviewed when you told her to. Kitty tells Kacey to review all the time, and she never does.
Kitty: (scowls)
M.L. said:
One of the best stories I've read so far. Keep going: this is a great story.
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Kitty: (smiles a BIG smile) THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Lina: (smiles too) You're very kind to say so.
Kitty: Alright... I think we're done.
Yugi: Already? (whines) We didn't do anything funny yet!
Kitty: Oh, well... R&R!]