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Chapter2 surprise
Harry could not wait for his birth day for the first time in his life. That was the only happy
thought he had, had the entire summer. Harry could not stop blaming himself for his godfathers death.
Although Dumbledore had said that it was not his fault, Harry still blamed himself.
Harry was trying very hard not to keep thinking back to the events which had happened at the
ministry. Harry felt as though he was all alone in this world. He had just lost the only person that
resembled a father to him, And now harry does not feel loved, although of course is best friends
loved him but not in the way he wanted.
Harry wanted someone to love him more that a friend, what harry wanted was a girlfriend
and he kept thinking about one girl lately. That very special girl was none other than Hermione
Granger. Harry kept having daydreams about her being with him. Harry still wondered if they
would meet each other at # 12, he thought it would be great if they could. In two days was his
birthday and in 4 days he would be out of this hell he was forced to call a home for the last 16 years.
There was a know on the door harry wondered who it could be, they were not waiting on any
onetoday. "Harry Potter u get down here now" his aunt called up the stairs. What did he do know
Harry thought. As he ran downstairs he saw Dumbledore and his friend Hermione standing at the
Door. " can we come up Harry" said Dumbledore with out any regard to harry's aunt and uncle. Harry speechless just nodded,
they followed harry up the stairs. When they walked in through the door dumbledore locked the door with a spell and then put
the silence charm on the door. He turned around and said " harry Hermione will
stay with u here the next 4 days and then she will go with u to #12, Doby u can come out now"
and then the little elf appeared next to dumbledore. " I is very happy to help you harry potter sirs"
squeaked the little elf. " Doby came to me on a request to come and serve u harry do u want him,
if u do then u need to sign this paper" said Dumbledore while handing the paper to harry. harry was
surprised not to see parchment. He toke the pen from dumbledore and signed then the paper
diapered harry had read it before signing it.
I harry potter here by clam the house elf Doby to be my own and give him permission to aparate
in my house, take money from my vault in order to by items with and legally take car of him. This
house elf was not payed for by Mr. Potter instead by Mr. Malfoy and then set free by him the
same year. Professor Dumbledore then toke in Doby and now has given him to harry potter as a
birthday gift. The elf named Doby knows his new master is harry potter and will die in the serves
of Mr. Potter. Doby is to obey any one that is family to harry, and also who harry tells him to
obey. I Harry Potter have read the agreements an I totally agree with them.
Albus Dumbledore old master
Harry Potter new master
" so Doby belongs to me now" harry said after the paper vanished."yes" said the old man. " I will
put a spell on this room for you to be able to use magic within this room and not get into trouble"
said Dumbledore and he toke his wand out and moved it around in a very complex way. " both of
u will be able to use magic in this house now" said dumbledore with a smile to harry. "And I think
you might need more room to stay in". With that said Dumbledore made the size of his room by
10x10 yards bigger than it was. "And finally a bathroom" he continued and with another wave he
made a door appear near the window. Harry opened the door and found it to be a big as the
prefects bathroom from his fourth year. But instead of many showers it only had one, but the
bathtub was just as big if not bigger. Harry heard a click and a pop and when he turned around
dumbledore was not there any more. Hermione immediately ran over to him and gave him a huge
hug. " I missed u so much harry" she said they help there embrace for what seemed like 10
minutes. When they broke apart they heard harry stomach grumble really loud, they laughed.
Hermione toke out her wand and said " what would you like to eat" " pizza" he said quickly.
She moved her wand in a simple but fast circle and a pizza appeared on his desk . It was 8:00 pm
when they finished eating Hermione went to her trunk and toke out some under ware and pajamas
and went to the bathroom a minute later he heard water running. He looked around his enlarged
room a minute later something came into his mind were was Hermione going to sleep. Hermione
walked out the bathroom and indicated it was his turn to use the bathroom. While he showered he
still thought about were she would be sleeping. He figured she would do something. What he had
least expected was when he got out of the shower she was lying on his bed. " Hermione were are
we going to sleep" harry asked " why in your bed silly were else" she replied. "Both of us in the
same bed" he asked " I trust you Harry Potter not to do anything I would not like" she replied as
though it was the most obvious thing in the world. So he climbed in bed with her feeling her scoot
back up against him to warm herself. This actually feels so right harry though and he did something
he never did before he kissed Hermione good night but not on the checks on the lips, she bushed
and said good night.
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Chapter2 surprise
Harry could not wait for his birth day for the first time in his life. That was the only happy
thought he had, had the entire summer. Harry could not stop blaming himself for his godfathers death.
Although Dumbledore had said that it was not his fault, Harry still blamed himself.
Harry was trying very hard not to keep thinking back to the events which had happened at the
ministry. Harry felt as though he was all alone in this world. He had just lost the only person that
resembled a father to him, And now harry does not feel loved, although of course is best friends
loved him but not in the way he wanted.
Harry wanted someone to love him more that a friend, what harry wanted was a girlfriend
and he kept thinking about one girl lately. That very special girl was none other than Hermione
Granger. Harry kept having daydreams about her being with him. Harry still wondered if they
would meet each other at # 12, he thought it would be great if they could. In two days was his
birthday and in 4 days he would be out of this hell he was forced to call a home for the last 16 years.
There was a know on the door harry wondered who it could be, they were not waiting on any
onetoday. "Harry Potter u get down here now" his aunt called up the stairs. What did he do know
Harry thought. As he ran downstairs he saw Dumbledore and his friend Hermione standing at the
Door. " can we come up Harry" said Dumbledore with out any regard to harry's aunt and uncle. Harry speechless just nodded,
they followed harry up the stairs. When they walked in through the door dumbledore locked the door with a spell and then put
the silence charm on the door. He turned around and said " harry Hermione will
stay with u here the next 4 days and then she will go with u to #12, Doby u can come out now"
and then the little elf appeared next to dumbledore. " I is very happy to help you harry potter sirs"
squeaked the little elf. " Doby came to me on a request to come and serve u harry do u want him,
if u do then u need to sign this paper" said Dumbledore while handing the paper to harry. harry was
surprised not to see parchment. He toke the pen from dumbledore and signed then the paper
diapered harry had read it before signing it.
I harry potter here by clam the house elf Doby to be my own and give him permission to aparate
in my house, take money from my vault in order to by items with and legally take car of him. This
house elf was not payed for by Mr. Potter instead by Mr. Malfoy and then set free by him the
same year. Professor Dumbledore then toke in Doby and now has given him to harry potter as a
birthday gift. The elf named Doby knows his new master is harry potter and will die in the serves
of Mr. Potter. Doby is to obey any one that is family to harry, and also who harry tells him to
obey. I Harry Potter have read the agreements an I totally agree with them.
Albus Dumbledore old master
Harry Potter new master
" so Doby belongs to me now" harry said after the paper vanished."yes" said the old man. " I will
put a spell on this room for you to be able to use magic within this room and not get into trouble"
said Dumbledore and he toke his wand out and moved it around in a very complex way. " both of
u will be able to use magic in this house now" said dumbledore with a smile to harry. "And I think
you might need more room to stay in". With that said Dumbledore made the size of his room by
10x10 yards bigger than it was. "And finally a bathroom" he continued and with another wave he
made a door appear near the window. Harry opened the door and found it to be a big as the
prefects bathroom from his fourth year. But instead of many showers it only had one, but the
bathtub was just as big if not bigger. Harry heard a click and a pop and when he turned around
dumbledore was not there any more. Hermione immediately ran over to him and gave him a huge
hug. " I missed u so much harry" she said they help there embrace for what seemed like 10
minutes. When they broke apart they heard harry stomach grumble really loud, they laughed.
Hermione toke out her wand and said " what would you like to eat" " pizza" he said quickly.
She moved her wand in a simple but fast circle and a pizza appeared on his desk . It was 8:00 pm
when they finished eating Hermione went to her trunk and toke out some under ware and pajamas
and went to the bathroom a minute later he heard water running. He looked around his enlarged
room a minute later something came into his mind were was Hermione going to sleep. Hermione
walked out the bathroom and indicated it was his turn to use the bathroom. While he showered he
still thought about were she would be sleeping. He figured she would do something. What he had
least expected was when he got out of the shower she was lying on his bed. " Hermione were are
we going to sleep" harry asked " why in your bed silly were else" she replied. "Both of us in the
same bed" he asked " I trust you Harry Potter not to do anything I would not like" she replied as
though it was the most obvious thing in the world. So he climbed in bed with her feeling her scoot
back up against him to warm herself. This actually feels so right harry though and he did something
he never did before he kissed Hermione good night but not on the checks on the lips, she bushed
and said good night.